40.题型四 写作-主题练写作-主题范畴一 人与自我 主题1 学校生活-【加速度中考】2026年贵州中考英语总复习
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题型四写作
主题1学校生活
高分作文小练笔
1.In class,we often have group discussions,which helps us
learn from classmates.
2.Some classmates struggle with staying focused in the quiet
library,but the bright lights and comfortable seats help them
concentrate.
3.The music teacher played the piano,leading us to sing the
English songs.
4.What impressed me most was my teacher's encouraging
words when I failed the exam.
5.We should learn English well so that we can communicate
with people from different countries.
基础句式练
1.My classmates and I used to practice volleyball every
afternoon on the playground.
2.In this class,we learn how to write Chinese characters with
brushes.
3.To let students understand the value of food and farmers'
hard work,our school organized the activity.
4.Listening to teachers carefully contributes to better
understanding in class.
5.There will be a graduation ceremony next month.
作文实战练
第一篇
A memorable story
Life is full of unforgettable moments,whether they're
about success,challenges or kindness.One story that
happened last Friday left a deep impression on me.
It was a bright morning on the school sports ground.
During the 100-meter race,a classmate suddenly fell.As I
was responsible for first aid,I quickly rushed to give help and
brought water.Other classmates comforted him while we waited
for the staff to arrive.Luckily,he was fine after receiving
treatment.
However,I missed my own event in the process.At first,
I felt a little disappointed,but that emotion soon turned into
pride.I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help
someone in need was truly meaningful.Sometimes,the best
wins aren't from games,but from what you feel in your heart.
第二篇
My unforgettable graduation
How time flies!I'm now in the final term of my junior
high school.In the past three years,I've had a great time at
school.
I've met lovely friends and excellent teachers.However,
I've also met some problems.For example,I used to have too
much homework and had no time for my hobbies.I've been
worried about it.At the moment,I'm also busy getting ready
for the high school entrance exam.
Here,I've got some advice for my fellows.First,manage
your time carefully and use your time wisely.Second,try to
keep a balance between study and play.Finally,don't give up
and believe in yourself.I'm sure you wi
and realize your dreams.
度書
enjoy your school life题型四
写作
主题练写作
主题范畴一人与自我
主题1学校生活
【考查角度】校园活动及课后活动、校园环境与设施、对中学生活的回顾及感受等。
孕一阶·素材积累
★开头句
!
healthy meals there every day
1.[人教九(全)U14Pl08]My time in junior high6.Our school has a large playground where we can
school has been enjoyable
do sports and have P.E.classes.
2.I'm writing in the hope that I can be a member of 3
回顾初中生活
the school club.
7.These years with you will be the most valuable
3.There are so many sweet memories and so many
part of my youth.
words that I want to say to my school.
8.I'll never forget my colorful and meaningful
★中间句
school days
角度1介绍校园活动
9.We should be thankful to people who helped and
1.When considering their own preferences(偏好),
supported us in our lives.
they should also think about what kind of exercise
★结尾句
and improvement the clubs can bring.
1.To make my class better,I will continue to work
2.The harder you study,the better you will learn.
hard and help my classmates whenever they need
3.We also have colorful activities.For example,we
help.
have a sports meeting every autumn and an art
2.In short,we've learned much about the world
festival in spring.
through our wonderful school activities.
角度2介绍学校基础设施
★谚语
4.The library is a good place for reading.thas1.A good beginning is half done..良好的开端是成
many different kinds of books,magazines and
功的一半。
digital(数字的)materials.
2.Don't put off till tomorrow what you can do today.
5.The dining hall is clean and bright with many
今日事,今日毕。
tables and chairs.We can enjoy delicious and
二阶·典例剖析
[2025贵州]英语老师Lucy为激发同学们学习英语的兴趣,鼓励大家记录课堂故事、班级活动、
师生趣事等校园生活点滴,共同编写班级故事集Our Stories。请参考图文信息,以“A(n)
Story”为题,写下你(们)的故事。
写作要求:1.请补全标题;
2.记录真实故事,表达个人情感;
3.词数为80左右;
4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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Our Stories
A(n)
Story
Our Stories
What happened?
How did you feel?
第一步:申题立意定基调
1.文体:记叙文;
2.人称:第一人称;
3.时态:一般过去时;
4.主题:介绍校园生活。
第二步:谋篇布局成框架
A class is like a second home,which is a place filled with
开门见山,引
friendship,warmth and countless unforgettable stories.I'd
Beginning
入主题
like to share one touching/interesting/amazing story that
happened in my class.
Last week,our school organized/had/planned to...
At first,we didn't know how to/had difficulty in/struggled
A(n)
Story
Body
具体介绍经过
with..
Then,our English teacher helped/showed/taught/explained..
Finally,our class could/knew/won/did better...
Ending
表达自己的收
I felt excited/touched/grateful...
获与感受
What impressed me most was/I had learnt that..
第三步:语篇升格成佳作
普通范文
高分范文
A Touching Story
A Touching Story
I want to share a touching story about
A class is like a second home,which is a place filled with
my class.
friendship,warmth and countless unforgettable stories.(which
Last week,our school organized a
引导的定语从句①)I'd like to share one touching story that
“Storytelling Week”.We need to create a
happened in my class.
short play based on a classic English story.
Last week,our school organized a "Storytelling Week".Each
Our class chose The Little Prince.We had
class was required to create a short play based on a classic English
difficulty in making the long sentences into
story.Our class chose The Little Prince.At first,we struggled with
easy dialogues for us.
translating the long sentences into easy dialogues for us.
After school,our English teacher struggle with)Then,after school,our English teacher Lucy
Lucy spent almost two hours with us.She
stayed with us for nearly two hours.She didn't just correct our
corrected our grammar mistakes.She also
grammar mistakes;she acted out the roles with us,explaining the
acted out the parts with us and told us the
emotions behind each sentence..(现在分词短语作伴随状语③)
feelings of each sentence.
Finally,our class won the first prize with her guidance.
With her help,our class won the first
I felt deeply touched and what impressed me most was
prize.I felt touched by her patience.
Lucy's patience.(what引导的主语从句④)
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温馨提示:【高分作文小练笔】栏目针对“第三步:语篇升格成佳作”高分范文中的句式升格及高级短
语等进行针对性拓展训练。
【高分作文小练笔】
L.In class,we often have group discussions to help us learn from classmates..(使用which引导的定'语从
句)
2.Some classmates have trouble staying focused in the quiet library,but the bright lights and comfortable
seats help them concentrate.(使用高级短语struggle with②)
3.The music teacher played the piano and led us to sing the English songs.(使用现在分词短语作伴随
状语③)
4.My teacher's encouraging words impressed me most when I failed the exam.(使用what引导的主语从
句④)
5.We should learn English well.We can communicate with people from different countries.(使用高级短
语so that)
三阶实战演练
◆基础句式练
1.My classmates and I often practiced volleyball every afternoon on the playground.(使用短语used to升
格)
2.In this class,we learn to write Chinese characters with brushes.(使用how+todo结构升格)
3.Our school organized the activity,and it lets students understand the value of food and farmers'hard
wok.(使用动词不定式作目的状语放句首升格)
4.认真听老师讲课有助于在课堂上更好地理解。(使用短语contribute to进行汉译英)
5.下个月将有一场毕业典礼。(使用There be句型进行汉译英)
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◆作文实战练
第一篇[2025安徽改编]
假定你是李华,校英文报“STORY”专栏正在征集稿件,请你根据下面表格中的信息,用第一人
称,以“A memorable story”为题,写一个故事投稿。
When
last Friday morning
Where
school sports ground
Who
I,my classmate
What
take part in,help,feel proud,...
写作要求:1.短文须包含表格中的关键词,请增加细节,以使故事完整;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
A memorable story
第二篇
作为一名初三学生,毕业将近之时,你对自己的初中生活一定感触良多。你校校报正在征集以
“毕业”为主题的文章,请你认真阅读以下要求,以“My unforgettable graduation'”为题,按要求用英语
写一篇短文。
GRADUATION
Hi,guys!You will graduate soon.Thinking of this year's studying experiences at school,you must have a
lot to share with next year's Grade 9 students.
Write an article about it.Your article should include:
1.How you feel about your Grade 9 school life;
2.What suggestions you would like to offer them.
度碧
写作要求:1.短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My unforgettable graduation
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