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Present an argument about space exploration
Unit 4
Space Exploration
Reading for writing
Learning Objectives
Learning Objectives
At the end of the class, I will be able to:
obtain the main idea and the structure of the argumentative essay
identify and analyse the linking words and argumentation methods
write an argumentative essay about your opinion on space exploration
Lead-in
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Lead-in
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Read for text type
What is the text type of the passage?
A. Exposition(说明文)
B. Narration(记叙文)
C. Argumentation(议论文)
D. Pratical writing(应用文)
An argumentative essay is a type of writing that presents a clear thesis / claim(论点), supports it with logical arguments(论证) (reasons/analysis), and provides credible evidence(论据) (facts/ examples) to persuade the reader.
Read for main idea
What is the main idea of the passage?
A.Introducing different benefits of exploring space.
B.Introducing the history of exploring space.
C.Introducing different opinion about space exploration.
D.Introducing the developments of exploring space.
Read for main idea
Match the main idea of each paragraph.
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Para.4
Para.5
C. Countries around the world spend huge amounts of money and time on space exploration, but people have two different opinions about it.
E. Technological progress from space exploration and its wide applications.
D. Space exploration brings many benefits and should continue.
B. Space exploration helped us think about the world’s problems and find solutions.
A. Exploring space helped humanity fight against world hunger.
Read for structure
What is the structure of the passage?
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Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Viewpoint 2
Read for structure and writing techniques
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world’s poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realize how exploring space helps us.
Read para.1 to underline the background and different viewpoints.
Background
Viewpoint 1
Read for structure and writing techniques
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world’s poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realize how exploring space helps us.
Read para.1 to underline the background and different viewpoints.
What argumentative technique (论证方法)does the author use to make his viewpoint more clearly?
Comparison 对比
Read for structure and writing techniques
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger. It has directly resulted in the many satellites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth. After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth’s increasing population.
Read para.2 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Argument 1
Evidence 1
Read for structure and writing techniques
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger. It has directly resulted in the many satellites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth. After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth’s increasing population.
Read para.2 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Fill in the blanks.
The satellites _____________
on land and weather patterns
the data _______________
scientists
the scientists provide useful ______________ and advice for ________
grow____________
record data
is transmitted to
recommendations
enough food
farmers
Read for structure and writing techniques
Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger. It has directly resulted in the many satellites that now orbit Earth. A number of the satellites record data on land and weather patterns. Then the data is transmitted to scientists on Earth. After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful recommendations and advice for farmers. As a result, space-based science has helped farming in its efforts to grow enough food to feed Earth’s increasing population.
Read para.2 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
What argumentative technique (论证方法)does the author use to make his viewpoint more logical?
Cause and Effect
因果论证
Read for structure and writing techniques
Read para.3 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all. High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration. For example, space technologies have helped the research and development of different types of new materials. They have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use. Today, space technologies are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products such as GPS, memory foam pillows, and smartphone cameras are changing our lives.
Argument 2
Evidence 2
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Read for structure and writing techniques
Read para.3 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Secondly, space exploration has already promoted technological improvements that benefit us all. High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration. For example, space technologies have helped the research and development of different types of new materials. They have also helped companies make better heart monitors and other machines that doctors regularly use. Today, space technologies are widely used in all kinds of industries, and everyday products such as GPS, memory foam pillows, and smartphone cameras are changing our lives.
1. How does space exploration benefit the products that people use ?
2.How does the author make his argument more convincing?
A. By comparison.
B. By using data.
C. By giving examples.
What are the examples?
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Read for structure and writing techniques
Read para.4 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world’s problems and even to find ways to solve them. Seeing pictures of our planet as an island in a black sea made people realize that our planet’s resources are limited. In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home. The greatest attention at present is on Mars because it is closer to Earth. In the future humans may live on both planets.
Argument 3
Evidence 3
Read for structure and writing techniques
Read para.4 to find the topic sentence and evidence.
Finally, sending astronauts into space has helped people to think about the world’s problems and even to find ways to solve them. Seeing pictures of our planet as an island in a black sea made people realize that our planet’s resources are limited. In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home. The greatest attention at present is on Mars because it is closer to Earth. In the future humans may live on both planets.
1.What are the world’s problem?
People realise that our planet’s _________are _________.
resources
limited
2. How has space exploration helped to find ways to solve them?
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Read for structure and writing techniques
Read para.5 underline the sentence that repeats the writer’s opinion.
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits. Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new and better solutions to people’s short-term and long-term problems.
Repeat the author’s opinion
What’s the function of the last sentence?
A. Introduce the topic.
B. Give advice.
C. Express new opinions.
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Read for structure and writing techniques
What writing skill does the author use to make his viewpoint more coherent(连贯的)?
Linking words
过渡词
Outline your essay
Outline your opinion on space exploration.
Are these arguments for or against exploring space? Put them in the table below.
A There are a lot of unsolved mysteries on Earth. So why are we going into space to explore?
B It is necessary to find a new home for people in space, as the resources on Earth will run out.
C I cannot understand spending all this money on expensive research and experiments when so many people need food.
D Exploring space encourages scientists to improve technology that can help people in other ways, too.
For space exploration
Against space exploration
B D
A C
Outline your essay
Outline your opinion on space exploration.
Part 1: Opinion: (for or against)___________________________
Argument 1:_____________________________________
Supporting details /Evidence:_______________________
Part 2 Argument 2:______________________________________
Supporting details / Evidence:_______________________
Argument 3:_____________________________________
Supporting details / Evidence:_______________________
Part 3: Conclusion:_________________________(呼应第一段观点)
Draft your essay
Useful expressions
Introduce the topic:
Nowadays, there is an increasingly hot topic about whether to ... or not.
Nowadays there is a growing concern for…
Yesterday, we had a discussion about whether it is necessary to ...
Show different opinions:
Some people argue that ...However, others feel
People may have different opinions on ...
Different people, however, hold different opinions on this matter.
Some people claim/believe that ... While others consider/think ...
State your opinion:
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/ From my point of view...
Linking words:
To begin with / First of all / First and foremost ...
Besides / In addition / Furthermore / What's more / Finally / Last but not least ...
Conclude your opinion:
In short / In brief / In conclusion / In a word / To sum up / All in all/ On the whole / In general
Evaluate your essay
Checklist Yes or Not
1. Does the introduction state the topic?
2. Does the body give arguments with suitable supporting information?
3. Does the closing express the writer's opinion and end properly?
4. Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors?
Examples
Space Exploration: A Worthwhile Investment
I strongly believe that space exploration is important for humanity. Although it is expensive, the benefits far outweigh the costs.
First of all, space technology improves daily life. For example, GPS and weather satellites rely on space research. Second, exploring space inspires young people to study science. Many students choose STEM careers because of space missions. Finally, finding new resources in space could solve Earth's energy problems. Scientists say asteroids contain valuable metals.
In conclusion, space exploration brings practical benefits, encourages education, and may provide future resources. We should continue supporting it.
Examples
Space Exploration: A Waste of Resources?
I believe space exploration is not worth the cost. While it seems exciting, the money and effort should be spent solving Earth's problems instead.
First, space missions are extremely expensive. NASA’s 2022 budget was $24 billion—enough to build thousands of schools or hospitals. Second, space travel is dangerous. Astronauts face risks like radiation and equipment failure, as seen in past accidents. Third, we haven’t even fully explored our oceans, which are more directly useful for food and medicine.
In a word, space exploration drains resources we urgently need on Earth. Governments should focus on poverty, healthcare, and climate change first.
Homework
Finish your essay about space exploration. (120 words)
Homework
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