内容正文:
Unit 1 You and Me
单元话题书面表达练习
内容导航
。单元话题
◆基础语篇练习
◆重难语篇练习
☑单元话题聚焦
人与自我
凸基础语篇练习
稳扎稳打必拿分数:聚焦稳拿分数题目,确保基础分值
☑重难语篇练习
召基础语篇练习
1.
请根据以下表格中的信息,用英语写一篇介绍你的好友Jck的短文。要求:包含表格中的全部
内容;50词左右,可适当发挥。
Name
Jack
Age
12
Country
the UK
Class
2
Favorite Food
Mapo tofu
2.假如你是李华,你参加了新学校的英语社团,第一次社团课上你需要向其他成员用英语介绍一
下自己。请根据所给提示,写一篇英文自我介绍。
Name
Li Hua
Age
12
Place
Iangz小hou
Class
Class 1,Grade 7
Favourite food
。。
要求:(1)文中需包含表格中的信息,并可作适当想象和发挥:
(2)文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名;
(3)词数60词左右,书写规范。
3.假如你叫张宇,是今年阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)新初一的学生,为了促进同学之间互相
了解,每位新同学需要根据以下提示信息,用英语写一段自我介绍并与大家分享。要求:
1.包含下列所有提示信息,并可适当发挥。
2条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。
3.80词左右。
Age:12 Looks
Characters
Favourite subjects
Hobbies
Dreams
Hello,everyone!My name is Zhang Yu.I am new here and it is really nice to see you all!
4.根据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你自己,不少于60词。提示点都要用上。
名字:Peter姓氏:Brown
自我介绍
年龄:12
班级:七年级一班
居住地:济宁
爱好:喜欢音乐。在学校乐队弹吉他。热爱运动。我的足球在书桌下
面,放学后经常和朋友玩。
最喜欢的食物:火锅(hot pot)
最喜欢的地方:我的农场。农场里有很多种类的动植物。举例介绍。
5.假设你是李华,Jy是你新认识的美国笔友,想了解更多关于你的信息,请你写一封信介绍你
自己。
要求:
1.请不要出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.包含表格内的基本信息,并做适当拓展:
3.70词左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Nationality
Favourite
Name
Age
Family
Hobbies
(国籍)
food
parents;
meat,
running,
LiHua
12
China
pet
vegetables...
dancing...
Dear Jenny,
I am very happy to hear from you.Let me tell you something about me.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是七年级(6)班的学生张浩,今年l3岁。你在论坛上看到了Pauline和Peter的交友帖,
也想发帖交朋友。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇自我介绍帖子。
提示要点:
1.姓名、年龄、来自重庆:
2班级及喜欢的科目(英语和体育)及理由:
3你的兴趣爱好(至少两项,如游泳、弹吉他等);
4希望结交更多朋友,并愿意在学习上互相帮助。
要求:
1涵盖所有要点,可适当增加内容:
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确:
3.不少于6句话:
4开头已给出,不计入总句数。
参考词汇:游泳swim,弹吉他play the guitar,科目subject,有趣的interesting,放松的relaxing
开头:
Hi,everyone!I'm Zhang
Hao.
7.假如你是中学生朱慧,你在TikTok上注册了自己的账号,请根据提示,写一段英文的自我介绍,
借此结交一些新朋友。
提示:1.首先告知自己的个人信息(如姓名、年龄、喜好、电话号码…);
2.介绍自己的家庭成员:
3.适当描述自己的居住环境(房间…)
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥:
2.词数不少于80:
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
8.来自澳大利亚的Tom White是你的好朋友,你们都在一年级七班。请你写一篇60词左右的短文,
介绍一下他的情况,内容要包含所给全部信息并适当展开。
1.年龄13岁。
2.父母都是英语老师。
3.他有一只可爱的猫,名字叫Coco。
4.爱好是打网球。
5.喜欢中国食物。
6.现在和父母一起在中国生活。
☑重难语篇练习
9.假如你是李华,本学期通过外教结识了一位英国笔友Dvid,为了让对方更好地了解你,请结合
下面图示信息,根据写作要求,用英语写一封邮件向他介绍你自己。
Self-Introduction
Name
Age
Personality(性格)
Hobby
Dream
play basketball.
want to be,
Li Hua
12 years old
friendly,humorous,...
read books,...
。。。
写作要求:
1)
文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称:
3)词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。将给出内容抄写到答题卡上)。
Dear David.
I'm glad to know you.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.新学期开始了,假设你是阳光中学初一(1)班的一名新生Millie。进入新班级,你需要向同学们
介绍一下你自己。请根据下面图表,以“This Is Me”为题,做一个自我介绍。
Who are you?(name.age)
What are you like?(.)
Self-introduction
What's your favorite hobby?()
Who is your role model?()
What's your dream?(.)
1.文章须包含所有提示内容,…处可适当发挥1一2句:要求语句通顺,意思连贯:
2.词数在80个左右,作文题目已经在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数:
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息:
4.文章内容必须写在答题卡对应的位置上,写在试卷其他地方无效。
This Is Me
Unit 1 You and Me
单元话题书面表达练习
内容导航
单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习
单元话题聚焦
人与自我
基础语篇练习
稳扎稳打 必拿分数:聚焦稳拿分数题目,确保基础分值
重难语篇练习
突破瓶颈 争夺高分:聚焦高难度题目,争夺关键分数
基础语篇练习
1.请根据以下表格中的信息,用英语写一篇介绍你的好友Jack的短文。要求:包含表格中的全部内容;50词左右,可适当发挥。
Name
Jack
Age
12
Country
the UK
Class
2
Favorite Food
Mapo tofu
…
…
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
I have a good friend named Jack. He is a 12-year-old boy from the UK.
Now he is in Class 2. He likes Chinese food very much. Mapo tofu is his favorite food because he thinks it is delicious.
We often play football together after school. We are good friends.
【详解】[写作步骤]
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:根据表格提供的信息介绍好友Jack
确定人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
注意事项:内容需涵盖姓名、年龄、国籍、班级和最喜欢的食物,并进行合理的适当发挥
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:开门见山,引出介绍的对象,并说明他的姓名、年龄和国籍。
主体段:详细介绍他的班级信息以及最喜欢的食物。
结尾段:适当发挥,补充说明他喜欢该食物的原因或两人之间的共同活动,总结友谊。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基础个人信息
12-year-old boy/from the UK/in Class 2/come from等
要点二:最喜欢的食物
Mapo tofu/favorite food/dish/delicious等
要点三:适当拓展
We often play football together after school./I often help him with his Chinese./He loves reading Chinese storybooks.等
2.假如你是李华,你参加了新学校的英语社团,第一次社团课上你需要向其他成员用英语介绍一下自己。请根据所给提示,写一篇英文自我介绍。
Name
Li Hua
Age
12
Place
Hangzhou
Class
Class 1, Grade 7
Favourite food
…
…
要求:(1) 文中需包含表格中的信息,并可作适当想象和发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名;
(3) 词数60词左右,书写规范。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文:
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to join the English club. My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old. I come from Hangzhou. Now I am a student in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite food is dumplings because they taste really delicious. I love English and I want to learn it well. I hope we can be good friends. Thank you for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:自我介绍类应用文,使用一般现在时态
明确要点:①介绍自己的姓名;②介绍自己的年龄;③介绍自己的籍贯;④介绍自己所在班级;⑤介绍自己最喜欢的食物;⑥适当拓展,表达对英语的态度以及交友的愿望
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:文中需包含表格中的信息,可作适当想象和发挥;文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名;词数60词左右,书写规范
[第二步:构思布局]
按三部分梳理结构:
开头:问候在场成员,表达加入英语社团的喜悦,开启自我介绍;
主体:完整介绍个人基础信息以及最喜欢的食物,是文章主体部分;
结尾:表达学习英语的想法、交友期许,以致谢结束本次发言。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人基础信息
姓名:My name is Li Hua/I’m Li Hua..
年龄:I am 12 years old/I’m twelve. ..
籍贯:I come from Hangzhou/I am from Hangzhou..
班级:Now I am a student in Class 1, Grade 7/I’m in Class 1, Grade 7..
要点二:个人饮食喜好
最喜欢的食物:My favourite food is dumplings because they taste really delicious/I like dumplings best..
要点三:情感表达与发言收尾
学习期许:I love English and I want to learn it well/I enjoy English and hope to study it well...
交友愿望:I hope we can be good friends/I wish we could make friends...
发言致谢:Thank you for listening/Thanks for your listening...
3.假如你叫张宇,是今年阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)新初一的学生,为了促进同学之间互相了解,每位新同学需要根据以下提示信息,用英语写一段自我介绍并与大家分享。要求:
1.包含下列所有提示信息,并可适当发挥。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。
3.80词左右。
Age: 12 Looks ________
Characters ________ Favourite subjects ________
Hobbies ________ Dreams ________
Hello, everyone! My name is Zhang Yu. I am new here and it is really nice to see you all!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Zhang Yu. I am new here and it is really nice to see you all! I am 12 years old. I am tall and have short black hair. I am an outgoing and friendly boy. My favourite subjects are English and Math because they are interesting. In my free time, I enjoy playing basketball and reading books. My dream is to be a teacher in the future. I hope we can be good friends. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:英文自我介绍发言稿,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:①年龄12;②外貌;③性格;④最喜欢学科;⑤爱好;⑥梦想;词数80左右;人物张宇,阳光中学新生
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:覆盖表格全部信息,语句通顺连贯,语法无误,适合班级自我介绍语境
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:打招呼,介绍姓名,表明自己是新生
主体段:依次介绍年龄外貌、性格、喜爱学科、爱好、梦想
结尾段:希望结交朋友,致谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人基本信息
事项选择:years/tall/hair/boy等
内涵描述:short/black/slim/appearance等
要点二:性格与学科
事项选择:outgoing/friendly/subjects/interesting等
内涵描述:kind/active/courses/fascinating等
要点三:爱好与梦想
事项选择:enjoy/playing/reading/dream等
内涵描述:hobbies/sports/future/ambition等
4.根据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你自己,不少于60词。提示点都要用上。
自我介绍
名字:Peter 姓氏:Brown
年龄:12
班级:七年级一班
居住地:济宁
爱好:喜欢音乐。在学校乐队弹吉他。热爱运动。我的足球在书桌下面,放学后经常和朋友玩。
最喜欢的食物:火锅(hot pot)
最喜欢的地方:我的农场。农场里有很多种类的动植物。举例介绍。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hello, everyone! My name is Peter Brown. I am a 12-year-old boy. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I live in Jining.
I like music and sports. I can play the guitar in the school band. My soccer ball is under the desk. I often play it with friends after school.
My favorite food is hot pot. My favorite place is my farm. There are many kinds of animals and plants on it. For example, there are cows and apple trees.
I enjoy my life very much.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:自我介绍记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:个人基础信息(姓名、年龄、班级、居住地)、兴趣爱好、最喜欢的食物、最喜欢的地方(农场,动植物举例)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:全部提示要点必须写入短文,词数不少于60词
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
开头段:总起问候,介绍基础个人信息
主体段(3-4段):介绍爱好、最喜欢的食物、最喜欢的农场并举例动植物
结尾段:总结感受,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人基础信息
自我介绍:My name is Peter Brown/I’m Peter Brown/I am a 12-year-old boy/I am 12 years old/I am in Class 1, Grade 7/I’m a student in Class One, Grade Seven/I live in Jining/I come from Jining等
要点二:兴趣爱好
爱好内容:like music and sports/enjoy music very much/My soccer ball is under the desk/I love sports and my favorite sport is soccer等
与爱好有关活动:can play the guitar in the school band/often play it with friends after school/After school, I usually play soccer with my classmates等
要点三:最喜欢的食物
具体食物:My favorite food is hot pot/I like hot pot best等
要点四:最喜欢的地方
具体地方:My favorite place is my farm/I like my farm best/There are many kinds of animals and plants on it/you can find many kinds of animals and plants there等
举例介绍:there are cows and apple trees/On the farm, you can see hens, dogs and cows. And there are apple trees and orange trees等
5.假设你是李华,Jenny是你新认识的美国笔友,想了解更多关于你的信息,请你写一封信介绍你自己。
要求:
1. 请不要出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 包含表格内的基本信息,并做适当拓展:
3. 70词左右 (开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Name
Age
Nationality (国籍)
Family
Favourite food
Hobbies
…
Li Hua
12
China
parents; pet
meat, vegetables...
running, dancing…
…
Dear Jenny,
I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about me.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文:
Dear Jenny,
I am very happy to hear from you. Let me tell you something about me.
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old and I come from China. I live with my parents and we keep a lovely pet at home. I like eating meat and vegetables best, because they keep me healthy. In my free time, I enjoy running and dancing. I am outgoing. I’m looking forward to learning about your life and hope we can be good pen‑friends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信作文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:个人基本信息,家庭情况,饮食喜好,业余爱好,性格特点,交友愿望
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称,需包含表格内的基本信息,70词左右 (开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)
[第二步:构思布局]
两段式结构:
第一段:打招呼,引出下文
第二段:详细介绍个人基本情况、生活习惯及性格,表达交友期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人基本信息与家庭
姓名年龄:My name is.../I am ... years old/I come from.../be from.../live in...等
家庭居住:live with my parents/keep a lovely pet/have a big family/have a sister or brother等
要点二:生活习惯与个人特质
饮食喜好:like eating meat and vegetables best/like...very much/have...for lunch/healthy food等
喜好原因:keep me healthy/good for me/taste good/nice等
业余爱好:enjoy running and dancing/like playing basketball/sing songs/read books/play games等
性格与结尾:outgoing/friendly/nice/happy/look forward to.../want to be your friend/write to me soon等
6.假设你是七年级(6)班的学生张浩,今年13岁。你在论坛上看到了Pauline和Peter的交友帖,也想发帖交朋友。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇自我介绍帖子。
提示要点:
1.姓名、年龄、来自重庆;
2.班级及喜欢的科目(英语和体育)及理由;
3.你的兴趣爱好(至少两项,如游泳、弹吉他等);
4.希望结交更多朋友,并愿意在学习上互相帮助。
要求:
1.涵盖所有要点,可适当增加内容;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.不少于6句话;
4.开头已给出,不计入总句数。
参考词汇:游泳swim,弹吉他play the guitar,科目subject,有趣的interesting,放松的relaxing
开头:
Hi, everyone! I’m Zhang Hao.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
Hi, everyone! I’m Zhang Hao. I’m 13 years old. I’m from Chongqing, China. I’m in Class 6, Grade 7 at Chongqing No.1 Middle School. My favourite subjects are English and PE because they are interesting and relaxing. I like swimming and playing the guitar in my free time. I also enjoy reading books. I want to make more friends at school. I am happy to help others with their studies. Let’s be good friends!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:自我介绍类应用文(论坛发帖),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:基本信息(姓名、年龄、籍贯)、班级与喜爱学科及理由、兴趣爱好、交友意愿
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:需涵盖所有提示要点,开头已给出,不少于6句话
[第二步:构思布局]
一段式结构:
开头:使用已给开头,补充年龄和籍贯信息
主体:分两部分——①班级及喜爱的学科(英语和体育)并说明理由;②兴趣爱好(至少两项,可适当扩展)
结尾:表达交友愿望及乐于在学习上互助,自然收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:喜欢的学科
喜欢的原因:interesting/relaxing/useful/easy to learn等
要点二:兴趣爱好
具体说明:I like swimming and playing the guitar in my free time./I often go swimming with my father on weekends./Playing the guitar helps me feel relaxed after school. 等
要点三:交友意愿与互助
具体说明:I want to make more friends./I am happy to help others with their studies./We can help each other with homework and share ideas.等
7.假如你是中学生朱慧,你在TikTok上注册了自己的账号,请根据提示,写一段英文的自我介绍,借此结交一些新朋友。
提示:1. 首先告知自己的个人信息(如姓名、年龄、喜好、电话号码……);
2. 介绍自己的家庭成员;
3. 适当描述自己的居住环境(房间……)
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于80;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
示例
Hello, everyone! My name is Zhu Hui. I am a middle school student. I’m 13 years old. I like reading books and listening to music very much.
There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. We are a happy family. I have a nice bedroom. It is clean and tidy. I often do my homework and read books in my room. I love my room very much.
I want to make new friends on TikTok. If you like reading or music, please write to me!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用于社交媒体TikTok交友,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:个人信息、家庭成员介绍、居住环境描述
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等;词数不少于80词
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:打招呼,表明意图
主体段:详细展开三个提示点。先介绍个人基本信息;接着描述家庭成员及关系;最后描绘自己的房间或居住环境
结尾段:表达期待,发出交友邀请
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:个人信息
姓名年龄:My name is Zhu Hui./I am a middle school student. I’m... years old.My name is Li Hua.等
个人喜好:I like/love/enjoy doing sth./reading books/listening to music/playing basketball.../My favorite subject is...等
要点二:家庭成员
家庭构成:There are... people in my family./They are my father, my mother and me./I have a happy family.等
职业或特征:My father is a... and my mother is a... /We often... together on weekends.等
要点三:居住环境
整体描述:clean and tidy./I live in a beautiful house/I live in a beautiful apartment.等
8.来自澳大利亚的Tom White是你的好朋友,你们都在一年级七班。请你写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍一下他的情况,内容要包含所给全部信息并适当展开。
1. 年龄13岁。
2. 父母都是英语老师。
3. 他有一只可爱的猫,名字叫Coco。
4. 爱好是打网球。
5. 喜欢中国食物。
6. 现在和父母一起在中国生活。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Tom White is my good friend from Australia. We are in Class 7, Grade 1. He is 13 years old. His parents are both English teachers. Now he lives in China with his parents. He has a cute cat named Coco. His hobby is playing tennis. He likes Chinese food very much. We always have a great time together.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:人物介绍类记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:必须覆盖全部6个给定信息点;Tom White来自澳大利亚;同在一年级七班
确定人称:第三人称为主,第一人称为辅
注意事项:词数控制在60词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,引出介绍对象Tom White
主体段:依次介绍年龄、家庭情况、宠物、爱好与饮食喜好,覆盖全部题干信息
结尾段:简单补充朋友间相处的细节,做适当展开收尾
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:人物基础信息
国籍:be from Australia/comes from Australia等
班级信息:Class 7, Grade 1/Class Seven, Grade One等
年龄:13 years old/at the age of 13等
要点二:家庭相关信息
父母职业:both English teachers/work as English teachers等
居住现状:live in China with his parents/stay in China together with his parents等
要点三:宠物与爱好
宠物描述:a cute cat named Coco/a lovely cat called Coco等
爱好表达:hobby is playing tennis/likes playing tennis等
要点四:饮食喜好
喜好表达:likes Chinese food very much/loves Chinese food a lot等
要点五:适当拓展
收尾表达:have a great time together/get on well with each other等
重难语篇练习
9.假如你是李华,本学期通过外教结识了一位英国笔友David,为了让对方更好地了解你,请结合下面图示信息,根据写作要求,用英语写一封邮件向他介绍你自己。
写作要求:
1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数70左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。将给出内容抄写到答题卡上)。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you. Let me introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I am a 12-year-old boy. I’m tall and strong. Being humorous, I can always bring laughter to people around. In my free time, I often play basketball with my friends. I enjoy reading all kinds of books, but medical books are my favourite. I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan in the future.
I really hope to be good friends with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:围绕“自我介绍”展开,覆盖思维导图给出的全部5项信息(姓名、年龄、性格、爱好、梦想)
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:不得透露真实信息,词数控制在70左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:直接自然引出基础个人信息,快速让David对你建立初步认知
中间:依次展开性格特点、日常爱好两个模块,补充1—2句生活化的小细节
结尾:介绍自己的梦想,顺势发出友好互动邀请,呼应笔友交友的场景
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基础信息(姓名、年龄)
I am a 15-year-old boy. I’m tall and strong with short black hair./My name is Li Hua, and I’m 12 years old./I’m a 12-year-old middle school student from China.
要点二:性格特征
I’m friendly and humorous./helpful/shy/kind/friendly...
要点三:爱好
I like playing basketball and reading books./listening to music/dancing/drawing...
要点四:梦想
I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan in the future./My dream is to be a basketball player...
10.新学期开始了,假设你是阳光中学初一(1)班的一名新生Millie。进入新班级,你需要向同学们介绍一下你自己。请根据下面图表,以“This Is Me”为题,做一个自我介绍。
1. 文章须包含所有提示内容,……处可适当发挥1—2句:要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数在80个左右,作文题目已经在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
4. 文章内容必须写在答题卡对应的位置上,写在试卷其他地方无效。
This Is Me
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
This Is Me
Hello, everyone! My name is Millie. I am thirteen years old. I am a new student from Class 1, Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
I am kind and easy‑going. I like making new friends. My favourite hobby is reading books. I can learn a lot from different books. My role model is a great writer. She tells me to keep trying all the time.
My dream is to be a writer in the future. I hope we can get on well with each other. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:姓名年龄、性格特点、爱好、榜样人物、个人梦想
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:词数80左右,不出现真实人名校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:打招呼,介绍姓名、年龄、班级身份
主体段:介绍性格、爱好、榜样人物,适当补充细节
结尾段:讲述个人梦想,表达友好期盼,结束语
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:姓名年龄
可用表达:My name is Millie./I am thirteen years old./I am Millie./I am 13.等
要点二:性格
可用表达:kind and easy‑going/friendly/outgoing/I like making new friends./I’m always ready to help others./I enjoy working with my classmates.等
要点三:爱好
可用表达:My favourite hobby is reading books./I can learn a lot from different books./I spend much time reading in my free time./Reading brings me lots of fun.等
要点四:榜样
可用表达:My role model is a great writer./She tells me to keep trying all the time./I want to learn good qualities from her./Her stories give me much courage.等
要点五:梦想
可用表达:My dream is to be a writer in the future./I want to be a teacher when I grow up./I will work hard to make my dream come true. 等
要点六:结尾祝愿
可用表达:I hope we can get on well with each other./I hope my stories can warm other people./Wish us a wonderful time./I hope everything will go well.等
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$