Unit 2 School life 单元话题书面表达10篇-2026-2027学年七年级英语上册（沪教版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“学校生活”话题，按基础巩固与重难提升分层设计，通过多样化书面表达题型构建从单一要素到综合信息的语言表达逻辑。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础语篇巩固练|8题|书信、演讲稿、留言板等，聚焦学校建筑、科目、日常作息等单一要素描述|夯实基础信息点的准确表述，培养语言能力| |重难语篇提升练|2题|短文、书信，整合校园环境、师生、活动、梦想等多要素综合表达|提升多信息整合与逻辑组织能力，发展思维品质|

Unit 2 School life 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：学校生活 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．假如你是Li Hua，你的笔友Cindy对你的学校生活很感兴趣，请你围绕以下所示的三个问题，以My school life为题用英文写一封回信给你的笔友。 1. What buildings and subjects are there in your school (简述)? 2. What’s your favourite building and why? 3. What’s your favourite subject and why? 要求： 1.内容需包括以上所有问题，可适当发挥（标题和开头不需要抄到答题卡上）； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3.70词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Cindy, Thanks for your email. To answer your question, my school life is great. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是七年级的学生腾飞，你们学校的英语日即将到来，你想参加演讲比赛，演讲的主题为“My favorite day”。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。 提示内容：(1)简单描述这一天的日常活动。(几点起床，上学，上课……) (2)介绍的过程中要体现你喜欢这一天的理由。(学科/活动/俱乐部……) 注意：(1)词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 My favorite day Good morning, everyone! My name is Teng Fei. Now I’d like to talk about my favourite day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 3．校园公告牌有个 “学习生活” 的小角落，本周话题是 “你最喜欢的学科”。假如你是李华，请你在留言板上留言，写下你的相关信息。内容包括： 1. Who are you? 2. What subjects do you have this term? 3. What is your favourite subject? Why? How to learn it? 4. What do you want to be in the future? 5. Name and time (可以自编) 要求：1. 短文须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 词数 70 词左右； 3. 不要出现个人的真实信息。 Name________    Time________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是Mike，你的美国笔友Tom想知道你最喜欢的学科，请你根据提示写一篇英语短文介绍你最喜欢的科目。写作要点： 1. What’s your favorite subject? 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you learn it? 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Tom, How is everything going? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your email. Best wishes! Yours, Mike 5．某英文周刊正在组织以“My Middle School Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，谈谈你的中学生活吧！ 内容提示： What is your new school like? What is your favorite subject? Which club are you in? Something more about your middle school life. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；标题和开头已给出；不计入总词数。 My Middle School Life Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My Middle School Life     Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you. 6．同学们已经成为中学生一学期了，相信大家的初中生活一定丰富多彩！假设你是林旭，请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一封邮件给你在澳大利亚的笔友Tony介绍你的校园生活。 内容提示： 1.个人简介：年龄、生日、班级； 2.校园生活：上午8点上课，下午5点30放学；喜爱的学科；参加的社团； 3.学校设施：有两栋教学楼，大操场…… 要求： 1.内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2.不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3.词数60左右。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I’m a middle school student now. Let me tell you something about my middle school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Xu 7．假如你是Kate，刚转到中国的一所学校读书。你的朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生活，请根据提示信息给她写一封信，告诉她你适应了并且喜欢上了这里的学校生活。要点如下： 1. 上午6:50到校，上午有4节课，下午有3节课，下午5:30回家。 2. 最喜欢周四，因为有最喜欢的英语以及美术课；认为数学有点难。 3. 在新学校交了一个好朋友Nick，他经常在数学方面帮助你。 4. 放学后，经常和Nick一起去打排球。 5. 学校生活忙碌但是很有趣。 Dear Jane, Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my school life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kate 8．假如你是Teng Fei，你的英国笔友Ben很好奇中国中学生的“school day”，请你根据他提出的以下问题，给他写一封信，介绍你一天的作息安排。 要点如下： (1)你通常几点起床？几点吃早餐？几点去上学？ (2)在学校里你都上什么课？你最喜欢哪门课？为什么？ (3)放学后你通常做什么活动（如做作业、运动、看电视等）？ (4)你几点上床睡觉？ 要求： (1)60词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Ben, How is it going with you these days? Let me tell you about my school day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is my school day. Is your school day different or similar? Please tell me soon. Yours, Teng Fei ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请根据下表中的要点提示，以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。 My Wonderful School Life 校园 ·看起来漂亮现代，每个教室干净明亮，是我们学习的好地方 师生 ·老师很友善，经常关心我们 ·最好的朋友Amy，聪明且礼貌待人，我们都在七年级3班 学科 ·最喜爱生物课，因为…… 活动 ·我们学校有各种各样的社团 ·课后活动使我…… 梦想 ·未来想成为一名…… 注意：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 My Wonderful School Life Hello, everyone. Today I want to introduce my wonderful school life to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是来自于英国的David，你跟随父亲来深圳，并就读于红岭中学，你的好友Alice来信想了解你在深圳新交的朋友和你的校园生活。请根据以下要点给她写一封回信： 提示要点：1.介绍你的好朋友（姓名、性格、爱好）； 2.描述你们的校园以及校园生活（喜爱的科目和课外活动等）； 3.你对来到深圳开始新生活的感受与展望。 要求：1.词数80-120左右； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3.包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 Dear Alice, How’s everything going? You asked me about my life in China. I’m thrilled to share my new life in Shenzhen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 School life 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：学校生活 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．假如你是Li Hua，你的笔友Cindy对你的学校生活很感兴趣，请你围绕以下所示的三个问题，以My school life为题用英文写一封回信给你的笔友。 1. What buildings and subjects are there in your school (简述)? 2. What’s your favourite building and why? 3. What’s your favourite subject and why? 要求： 1.内容需包括以上所有问题，可适当发挥（标题和开头不需要抄到答题卡上）； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3.70词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Cindy, Thanks for your email. To answer your question, my school life is great. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Cindy, Thanks for your email. To answer your question, my school life is great. My new school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground, a library, a dining hall and some teaching buildings in it. My favorite place is the library because I can read many kinds of books there. I like playing basketball with my friends on the playground. We have many subjects. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting. I have a good time at my new school. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英文书信，应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍校内建筑与学科、介绍最喜欢的建筑及理由、介绍最喜欢的学科及理由 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数70词左右，题干给出开头不计入词数，书信格式完整，不出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：沿用题干给出的开头，引入校园生活话题 主体段：介绍学校建筑、开设学科，分别介绍最喜欢的建筑、学科并说明理由 结尾段：简短总结，礼貌收尾并期待回信 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍校园建筑与学科 建筑内容：teaching building/library/playground等 学科内容：English/math/history等 整体介绍：have many buildings/learn different subjects等 要点二：最喜欢的建筑及理由 建筑选择：library/playground等 喜爱缘由：read various books/get knowledge/enrich sight等 拓展句型：I love the library best because I can read different books there./The library provides me with a good place to study.等 要点三：最喜欢的学科及理由 学科选择：English/math等 喜爱缘由：interesting/useful/learn different cultures等 拓展句型：English is interesting and helps me know more about the world./I can learn a lot from English classes.等 2．假定你是七年级的学生腾飞，你们学校的英语日即将到来，你想参加演讲比赛，演讲的主题为“My favorite day”。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。 提示内容：(1)简单描述这一天的日常活动。(几点起床，上学，上课……) (2)介绍的过程中要体现你喜欢这一天的理由。(学科/活动/俱乐部……) 注意：(1)词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 My favorite day Good morning, everyone! My name is Teng Fei. Now I’d like to talk about my favourite day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文 My favorite day Good morning, everyone! My name is Teng Fei. Now I’d like to talk about my favourite day. My favorite day is Friday. I usually get up at 6:30 and I go to school at 7:30. I have four classes in the morning. My favorite classes are English and P.E.. I love English because it’s fun to talk with my classmates in English. I can run and play basketball with friends in P.E. class. After school, I go to the reading club because I like reading. I do my homework in the evening. I go to bed at 9:30. I know the saying, “Early to bed, early to rise!” I want to be a healthy boy. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲类应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：一天的日常活动、体现喜欢这一天的理由 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称，词数80~100，语句通顺，层次清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 中间段：详细介绍自己一天的活动及喜欢这一天的理由 结尾段：书写结尾，表示感谢 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：一天的日常活动 具体活动：get up/have an English class/play football/dance/go to school/go to bed/do my homework等 时间表达：at 6:30/at seven/at eight/at 11/at 7:30等 要点二：体现你喜欢这一天的理由 理由说明：My favorite classes are English and P.E./play basketball with friends in P.E. class/get ready for the weekend/enjoy the relaxing time/have not too much homework/fun to talk with my classmates in English等 3．校园公告牌有个 “学习生活” 的小角落，本周话题是 “你最喜欢的学科”。假如你是李华，请你在留言板上留言，写下你的相关信息。内容包括： 1. Who are you? 2. What subjects do you have this term? 3. What is your favourite subject? Why? How to learn it? 4. What do you want to be in the future? 5. Name and time (可以自编) 要求：1. 短文须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 词数 70 词左右； 3. 不要出现个人的真实信息。 Name________    Time________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Name: Li Hua  Time: July 31 I am Li Hua. We have many subjects this term, such as Chinese, math, English and history. My favourite subject is English because it is really interesting and useful. I often read English books and listen to English songs to learn it well. I want to be an English teacher in the future. I will keep working hard to make my dream come true. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 明确要点：自我介绍；本学期开设科目；最喜欢学科、理由、学习方法；未来理想；填写姓名和时间 确定人称：第一人称I，语气轻松日常 注意事项：词数70词左右，信息完整   [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：表明自己是李华，介绍本学期学习科目 主体段：介绍最喜欢的学科，说明喜爱理由以及对应的学习方式 结尾段：讲述自己未来的理想 [第三步：要点展开] 个人与课程：I am Li Hua; we have Chinese, math, English and history this term；We also have art and PE lessons；I enjoy all the interesting subjects等 喜爱学科：My favourite subject is English; it is interesting and useful; I read English books and listen to English songs；I keep an English diary every day; I take part in English speaking activities等 未来目标：I want to be an English teacher；I will keep practicing；I hope to help others learn English well等 4．假如你是Mike，你的美国笔友Tom想知道你最喜欢的学科，请你根据提示写一篇英语短文介绍你最喜欢的科目。写作要点： 1. What’s your favorite subject? 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you learn it? 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数：60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Tom, How is everything going? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your email. Best wishes! Yours, Mike 【答案】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? My favorite subject is English. I think it’s very useful and interesting. I can learn about different cultures through it. Also, I enjoy speaking with foreigners. To learn it well, I listen to the teacher carefully in class. After school, I often read English stories and watch English movies. Sometimes, I sing English songs. It helps me relax. I hope you can tell me about your favorite subject. Looking forward to your email. Best wishes! Yours, Mike 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①点明自己最喜欢的学科是什么 ②阐述喜欢这门学科的多重原因 ③介绍平日里自己学习这门学科的方法 确定人称：第一人称(I) 注意事项：控制词数，不得透露真实信息 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构： 开头段：固定问候语句，承接笔友来信话题，开启正文内容 主体段：依次介绍最爱科目→讲明喜爱缘由→分享日常学习方法，末尾顺带邀约对方介绍他喜欢的学科 结尾段：套用题目给定的期盼回信、祝福结束语 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：开门见山，说明自己最喜欢的科目 科目：My favorite subject/the subject I like best at school/Among all school subjects等 要点二：阐述喜爱英语的理由 原因：very useful and interesting/learn about different cultures/enjoy speaking with foreigners/know diverse cultures around the world/talking with foreign people always brings me great joy/fall in love with it/full of fun and practical value/understand foreign customs等 要点三：分享日常学习英语的具体途径 方法：listen to the teacher carefully in class/often read English stories and watch English movies/sing English songs/helps me relax/to master English well/pay close attention to what my teacher says during classes/keep reading English short stories and watching original English films/ease my stress effectively/take notes carefully/another good way for me to relax and improve myself等 5．某英文周刊正在组织以“My Middle School Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，谈谈你的中学生活吧！ 内容提示： What is your new school like? What is your favorite subject? Which club are you in? Something more about your middle school life. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；标题和开头已给出；不计入总词数。 My Middle School Life Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My Middle School Life     Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.      My new school is big and beautiful with tall trees and bright classrooms. My favorite subject is English because it’s fun and useful. I can learn lots of new words and talk with my foreign teacher in class. I am in the Basketball Club and play basketball with my classmates every Friday afternoon. It makes me strong and relaxed. Besides, I make many kind new friends. We help each other with lessons and study hard together.      I really love my colorful and meaningful middle school life. I will cherish every day here and keep working hard for my bright future. 【详解】写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：介绍类记叙文，以一般现在时为主           明确要点：介绍校园环境、最喜欢的科目，参加的社团以及其他有关校园生活的事情 确定人称：第一人称(I/My/We) 注意事项：词数100左右，不得透露个人真实信息 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：总起全文，引出中学生活   主体段：依次介绍校园环境、喜爱的学科、社团活动，其他事情 结尾段：抒发对中学生活的热爱，升华主旨 [第三步：要点展开]           要点一：校园环境 校园环境：big and beautiful/tall trees and bright classrooms/tidy/teaching buildings/offices/campus等      要点二：喜欢的科目 科目：favorite subject/it’s fun and useful/learn lots of new words/talk with my foreign teacher/communicate with等      要点三：社团活动 活动：Basketball Club/play basketball/makes me strong and relaxed/make many kind new friends/help each other/relaxed等 6．同学们已经成为中学生一学期了，相信大家的初中生活一定丰富多彩！假设你是林旭，请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一封邮件给你在澳大利亚的笔友Tony介绍你的校园生活。 内容提示： 1.个人简介：年龄、生日、班级； 2.校园生活：上午8点上课，下午5点30放学；喜爱的学科；参加的社团； 3.学校设施：有两栋教学楼，大操场…… 要求： 1.内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2.不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3.词数60左右。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, I’m a middle school student now. Let me tell you something about my middle school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Xu 【答案】例文： Dear Tony, I’m a middle school student now. Let me tell you something about my middle school life. I am 13 years old and my birthday is on June 5th. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. Classes start at 8 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m. every day. My favorite subject is science. There are many clubs at school and I join the basketball club. Our school is beautiful with a garden, two teaching buildings, and a big playground. I love my school life. Yours, Lin Xu 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：个人简介、校园生活、学校设施、个人感受 确定人称：以第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：需包含题干中所有要点，词数60左右。不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名。语法拼写正确 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头：点明身份，引出写信目的 中间：先写个人基本情况，再写校园日常作息、喜爱的学科，以及参加的社团活动 结尾：描述学校设施，表达对学校生活的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：个人简介 I am...years old./I’m.../My birthday is on.../I was born on.../I am in Class..., Grade.../I study in Class.../I’m a student in Class...等 要点二：上课和放学时间 Classes begin at.../start at.../finish at.../end at.../school starts at.../school is over at.../from...to.../every day/on weekdays等 要点三：喜爱的学科 My favorite subject is.../I like...best./I enjoy.../I am interested in.../...is my favorite./I do well in.../science/history/English/math等 要点四：参加的社团 I join...club./I take part in.../I am a member of.../There are many clubs at school, such as.../I am in the...club./I join.../I attend.../basketball club/science club/swimming club/photography club/dancing club 要点五：学校设施 There are...in our school./Our school has.../teaching buildings/classroom buildings/a big playground/a garden/a library/a dining hall/a gym/our school is beautiful/large/modern等 要点六：表达感受 I love my school life./My school life is wonderful/colorful./I am happy at school.等 7．假如你是Kate，刚转到中国的一所学校读书。你的朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生活，请根据提示信息给她写一封信，告诉她你适应了并且喜欢上了这里的学校生活。要点如下： 1. 上午6:50到校，上午有4节课，下午有3节课，下午5:30回家。 2. 最喜欢周四，因为有最喜欢的英语以及美术课；认为数学有点难。 3. 在新学校交了一个好朋友Nick，他经常在数学方面帮助你。 4. 放学后，经常和Nick一起去打排球。 5. 学校生活忙碌但是很有趣。 Dear Jane, Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my school life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kate 【答案】例文 Dear Jane, Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my school life. I get to school at 6:50 every morning. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I go home at 5:30. I like Thursday best because we have English and art. They are my favourite lessons. But math is a little hard for me. I make a new friend named Nick. He often helps me with my math. After school, we often play volleyball together. In a word, my school life is busy but interesting. Yours, Kate 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信应用文，全文以一般现在时为主，用于介绍日常在校生活 明确要点：到校放学时间与课程数量；偏爱周四及对应学科、数学学习困难；好友Nick在数学学习上提供帮助；放学后结伴打排球；概括校园生活忙碌且有趣，题干5项内容必须全部涵盖 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），写信人Kate，收信人Jane 注意事项：题干给出人名可直接使用，严格遵守书信书写格式 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：使用题目给定开头语句，安抚对方不必担忧，总领信件内容 主体段：依次说明作息课程、偏好星期与学科、好友帮扶、课后活动，逐条落实所有写作要点 结尾段：总结整体校园生活体验，升华主旨，补充书信落款署名 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：上午 6:50到校，上午有4节课，下午有3节课，下午5:30回家 时间选择：every morning/in the morning/in the afternoon 活动内容：get to school at 6:50/have four classes in the morning/have three classes in the afternoon/go home at 5:30/There are seven classes a day. 要点二：最喜欢周四，因为有最喜欢的英语以及美术课；认为数学有点难 星期和学科选择：Thursday/English/art/math 内容：I like Thursday best because we have English and art lessons. I think math is a little difficult./My favorite subject is English. 要点三：在新学校交了一个好朋友Nick，他经常在数学方面帮助你 人物选择：new good friend Nick 内容：Nick often helps me with my math problems./give me a hand 要点四：放学后，经常和Nick一起去打排球 场景选择：after school/school playground 活动内容：play volleyball together 要点五：学校生活忙碌但是很有趣 总结衔接短语：in a word/in short 内容：My school life is busy but interesting./amusing 8．假如你是Teng Fei，你的英国笔友Ben很好奇中国中学生的“school day”，请你根据他提出的以下问题，给他写一封信，介绍你一天的作息安排。 要点如下： (1)你通常几点起床？几点吃早餐？几点去上学？ (2)在学校里你都上什么课？你最喜欢哪门课？为什么？ (3)放学后你通常做什么活动（如做作业、运动、看电视等）？ (4)你几点上床睡觉？ 要求： (1)60词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Ben, How is it going with you these days? Let me tell you about my school day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is my school day. Is your school day different or similar? Please tell me soon. Yours, Teng Fei 【答案】 例文 Dear Ben, How is it going with you these days? Let me tell you about my school day. I usually get up at 6:30. I have breakfast at 7:00 and go to school at 7:30. Nice food makes me keep energetic. We have different subjects at school. My favourite is Chinese. It is interesting, and I can learn new knowledge. After school, I do homework for an hour to review lessons. Before I go to bed at 9:30, I listen to music to have a good rest. This is my school day. Is your school day different or similar? Please tell me soon. Yours, Teng Fei 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信（应用文），介绍日常作息，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：起床就餐上学时间、在校课程与喜爱的学科及理由、放学后活动、就寝时间 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：问候引题，引出要介绍自己的上学日 主体段：依次介绍晨起作息、在校课程、放学后安排、晚间就寝时间 结尾段：发出提问，期待对方回信 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：晨起上学安排 时间选择：get up at 6:30/have breakfast at 7:00/go to school at 7:30等 活动内容：wash face/have bread/drink milk/walk to school等 作用效果：keep energetic/get ready for classes/have enough time等 要点二：在校课程与喜爱科目 学科选择：Chinese/Maths/English/PE等 喜欢原因：interesting/useful/relaxing/fun等 具体说明：learn new knowledge/play sports/talk with classmates等 要点三：放学后日常活动 活动选择：do homework/play basketball/watch TV/read books等 活动时长：for an hour/for thirty minutes/for half an hour等 作用效果：review lessons/make me relaxed/enrich spare time等 要点四：晚间就寝安排 时间选择：go to bed at 9:30/go to bed at 10:00/go to bed at 9:45等 睡前活动：listen to music/read storybooks/put away school things等 作用效果：have a good rest/keep healthy/get ready for next day等 ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请根据下表中的要点提示，以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。 My Wonderful School Life 校园 ·看起来漂亮现代，每个教室干净明亮，是我们学习的好地方 师生 ·老师很友善，经常关心我们 ·最好的朋友Amy，聪明且礼貌待人，我们都在七年级3班 学科 ·最喜爱生物课，因为…… 活动 ·我们学校有各种各样的社团 ·课后活动使我…… 梦想 ·未来想成为一名…… 注意：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。 My Wonderful School Life Hello, everyone. Today I want to introduce my wonderful school life to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Wonderful School Life Hello, everyone. Today, I want to introduce my wonderful school life to you. My school looks beautiful and modern. Every classroom is clean and bright. It’s a perfect place for us to study. Our teachers are quite nice. They care about us a lot. My best friend Amy is smart and polite. We’re both in Class 3, Grade 7. My favourite subject is Biology because it’s interesting. We also have all kinds of clubs. After-school activities always make me healthy and happy. In the future, I want to become an artist because I love drawing. I feel happy in my school. I love my school life. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：事物介绍类记叙文，全文主要使用一般现在时 明确要点：校园环境、师生情况、喜爱学科、课后活动、未来梦想 确定人称：全程使用第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：禁止出现真实人名、校名、地名；开头句子不计词数，全文80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：使用给定开篇句，引出本文介绍主题 主体段：分层依次介绍校园环境、师生交往、学科偏好、社团活动 结尾段：点明个人未来理想，总结内心感受，抒发对校园生活的热爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：校园环境描写 My school looks beautiful and modern./Every classroom is clean and bright./It’s a perfect place for us to study./Our school has modern beautiful buildings./All classrooms are tidy and well lit, which offers us great conditions for study.等 要点二：师生与好友介绍 Our teachers are quite nice./They care about us a lot./My best friend Amy is smart and polite./We’re both in Class 3, Grade 7./All teachers are friendly and take good care of every student./My best friend Amy is clever and well-mannered/and we study together in Class 3, Grade Seven. 要点三：喜爱学科与课后活动 My favourite subject is Biology because it’s interesting./We also have all kinds of clubs./After-school activities always make me healthy and happy./I like Biology best for its fun and practical knowledge./Our school provides different clubs, and after-class activities keep us fit and bring us joy.等 要点四：未来梦想 In the future, I want to become an artist because I love drawing./I hope to work as an artist later since I am fond of painting.等 10．假设你是来自于英国的David，你跟随父亲来深圳，并就读于红岭中学，你的好友Alice来信想了解你在深圳新交的朋友和你的校园生活。请根据以下要点给她写一封回信： 提示要点：1.介绍你的好朋友（姓名、性格、爱好）； 2.描述你们的校园以及校园生活（喜爱的科目和课外活动等）； 3.你对来到深圳开始新生活的感受与展望。 要求：1.词数80-120左右； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3.包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 Dear Alice, How’s everything going? You asked me about my life in China. I’m thrilled to share my new life in Shenzhen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, David 【答案】 例文 Dear Alice, How’s everything going? You asked me about my life in China. I’m thrilled to share my new life in Shenzhen. I’ve made a nice friend here—his name is Li Ming. He’s very friendly and always helps me with Chinese. We both love playing football, so we often run around the playground and kick the ball after class. Our school, Hongling Middle School, has a big library and colorful flower beds. My favorite subject is Chinese, because the stories in class are really fun. After school, I also join the painting club to draw pictures of the school.  Living in Shenzhen makes me happy. I hope to learn more Chinese and have more fun times with my friends here! Yours, David 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：应用文（书信，给好友的生活分享信）； ②时态：一般现在时（描述日常状态、爱好）+ 现在完成时（已发生的经历，如“交到朋友”）； ③提示：需涵盖“新朋友信息、校园及校园生活、新生活的感受与展望”，词数80-120左右。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步：回应好友的询问，引出分享深圳生活的主题； 第二步：介绍新朋友（姓名、性格、共同爱好），描述校园环境和校园生活（喜爱的科目、课外活动）； 第三步：表达对深圳新生活的感受，简单展望未来，收尾信件。 ［亮点词汇］ ① help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ② play football踢足球 ③ after class课后 ④ favorite subject最喜欢的科目 ⑤ join the club加入社团    ［高分句型］ ① He’s very friendly and always helps me with Chinese.（含有and的并列句） ② We both love playing football, so we often run around the playground and kick the ball after class.（“so”引导因果状语从句） ③ I hope to learn more Chinese and have more fun times with my friends here!（“hope to do sth.”表示希望做某事，不定式作宾语 ） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $