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九年级英语
(上册)HN
Unit 1 The Changing World
Section B How do changes influence us?
单元写作专题
How time flies!
I have changed a lot over the past two years.
There are many changes in my life.
I used to be shy.
I didn't use to do well in English.
I have improved a lot in maths.
I have a habit of reading now.
How much I have changed!
I'm proud of myself.
Thanks to my mother, I have made great progress.
How lucky I am to meet her!
本单元以“变化的世界”为话题,旨在引导学生掌握并运用“used to”结构,描述过去的状态或习惯,并与现在情况进行对比,从而呈现身边人物或事物在时间维度上的变迁。
主题范畴:人与自我
主题群:生活与学习
子主题:自身及周边环境在过去与现在的对比变化
[开头句]
1.时光飞逝!(how…)
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2.在过去的两年里我变化了很多。(change a lot)
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3.我的生活有许多变化。(there be… in one's life)
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[中间句]
1.我以前害羞。(used to be)
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2.我以前在英语方面做得不好。(do well in)
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3.我已经在数学方面提高了很多。(improve a lot)
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4.现在我有阅读的习惯。(have a habit of doing…)
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[结尾句]
1.我变化多么大啊!(how…)
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2.我为我自己而感到骄傲。(be proud of)
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3.多亏了我的妈妈,我已经取得了很大进步。(make great progress)
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4.遇到她我是多么幸运啊!(how…)
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[佳句积累]
1.The only constant is change.唯一不变的就是变化本身。
2.Change is in the air.变化正在悄然发生。
3.If nothing changes, nothing changes.如果不做出改变,现状就不会改变。
4.A little change goes a long way.小小的改变能产生深远的影响。
下周,你们班级要召开一次以“My changes”为主题的英语班会。每个同学都需要介绍初中三年自己的变化。你在外貌、性格和学科学习等方面都有哪些变化呢?请用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你的变化吧。
写作要求:
1.不少于80词(所给部分不计入总词数);
2.可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3.不得泄露个人信息。
My changes
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eq \a\vs4\al(提取要点,介绍初中三年在外貌、,性格和学科学习等方面的变化)
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My changes
I have changed a lot① over the past three years.
I used to② be quiet and keep silent all the time, but now I'm outgoing. I'm so proud of myself because I dare to give a speech in front of the whole school③. I used to be heavy, but④ now I'm not heavy anymore. I have lost much weight since I joined the school swimming team⑤.
As for⑥ my studies, my English has improved a lot. I didn't use to do well in English and failed the exams from time to time. I improved it by reading stories and keeping a diary in English. Now I can get good scores in the exams.
How I have changed!⑦ I like myself better now!
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点题,指出在过去的三年里变化很大。主体用一般过去时介绍过去的情况,用一般现在时和现在完成时表达现在的变化和状态,结尾谈及感受。要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
①②have changed a lot与used to为本单元新学重点知识,用在这里恰到好处,体现了学以致用。
④⑥but与as for等过渡词语运用得当。
③because 引导的原因状语从句,引出作者为自己而感到骄傲的原因,有理有据。
⑤since引导的时间状语从句,表明引起变化的时间。
⑦感叹句的结尾,表达了作者对自己变化的喜爱之情。
时光荏苒,初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较,你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题,根据以下提示与要求,用英语写一篇短文,具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
写作提示:
1.What did you use to be like?
2.What is the most important change?
3.And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.
写作要求:
1.不少于80词(所给部分不计入总词数);
2.必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3.不得泄露个人信息。
I have changed a lot!
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How time flies! Three years has passed. Of course I have changed a lot.
In the past, I used to be very quiet and shy. In class, I either ate or slept. So I never passed the examinations.
But now, I have changed a lot. The most important change is that I always listen to the teachers carefully and finish my homework on time. And I get good scores in all subjects.
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You may wonder why I have changed a lot. In Grade 8, I had a new head teacher. She is not only patient but also helpful. She treated me with kindness and warmth and she helped me with all subjects. Thanks to her, I have made great progress since then. How lucky I am to meet her!
How I have changed! I like myself better now!
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