Unit1 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修一同步教参（外研版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语写作核心知识点，涵盖应用文写作（人物介绍）与场景微续写两大模块。通过审题谋篇、遣词造句（如entertain、impress等词汇）、句子合并技巧（过去分词作状语、定语从句）、范文示例及学生练习（如介绍喜剧演员投稿）等学习支架，构建从基础人物介绍到个性化场景续写的写作能力进阶脉络。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，通过介绍马三立渗透中国相声文化，喜剧演员写作对比中外文化，提升跨文化理解。思维品质方面，审题指导与连句成文训练逻辑组织能力，词汇句型积累助力精准表达。课中辅助教师分层教学，课后范文与练习帮助学生自主查漏补缺，强化写作技能。

Period 4　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(人物介绍) 请根据下面提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国相声(crosstalk)的代表人物——相声大师马三立。 1．马三立，著名相声演员，1914年9月出生于北京； 2．他的相声风格自成一派，在马派相声风格化的基础上，融入自身个性化的表演； 3．拥有丰富的表演经验，擅长演绎反映百姓现实生活的相声作品。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 1．entertain v． 使快乐 2．essential adj. 极其重要的，必不可少的 3．impress v. 使钦佩，使留下深刻印象 4．deserve v. 应得，应受到 5．fame n. 名声，名誉 6．complicated adj. 难处理的；难懂的 [第一段]　简单介绍人物 1．马三立于1914年9月出生于中国北京。 Ma Sanli was born in September 1914 in Beijing，China. 2．作为一名相声演员，马三立是荧幕上必不可少的常客。 Ma Sanli was an essential regular on the screen as a crosstalk performer. [第二段]　详细介绍人物的表演风格 3．他的相声风格以马派相声风格为基础。 His crosstalk style is based on the Ma-style crosstalk. 4．他的相声风格将真实的生活融合进他自己个性化的表演中。 His crosstalk style integrates real life into his own personalised performance. 5．他有丰富的表演经验，而且因表演总能逗笑听众的相声作品而获得了名气。 He had plenty of acting experience and won fame for performing crosstalk works that always entertain the audience． [第三段]　对人物进行评价 6．他的相声作品给听众留下了很深刻的印象。 His crosstalk works impress the audience a lot. 7．它们不仅有趣，而且有意义，令人难忘。 They are not only funny, but also meaningful and memorable． 8．不难理解他值得被誉为最受欢迎的相声演员之一。 It is not complicated to understand that he deserves to be regarded as one of the most popular crosstalk performers. 9．用过去分词短语作状语合并句1和句2 Born in September 1914 in Beijing, China, Ma Sanli was an essential regular on the screen as a crosstalk performer. 10．用过去分词短语作状语合并句3和句4 Based on the Ma-style crosstalk，his crosstalk style integrates real life into his own personalised performance. 11．用定语从句合并句6和句7 His crosstalk works, which are not only funny but also meaningful and memorable,__impress the audience a lot. 　衔接成篇 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ One possible version： Born in September 1914 in Beijing，China，Ma Sanli was an essential regular on the screen as a crosstalk performer. Based on the Ma-style crosstalk，his crosstalk style integrates real life into his own personalised performance. He had plenty of acting experience and won fame for performing crosstalk works that always entertain the audience. His crosstalk works, which are not only funny but also meaningful and memorable, impress the audience a lot. Therefore, it is not complicated to understand that he deserves to be regarded as one of the most popular crosstalk performers. 假定你是李华，请你写一篇短文向校英文报“People”栏目投稿，介绍一个你最喜欢的喜剧演员。内容包括： 1.介绍这个喜剧演员的基本信息及表演风格等； 2.说明你喜欢该演员的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 My Favourite Comedian _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ One possible version： My Favourite Comedian Rowan Atkinson is my favourite British comedian, best known for his role as Mr. Bean. Born in 1955, he studied at the University of Newcastle and University of Oxford, where he began his journey into comedy and acting, capturing audiences with his exceptional talent. Atkinson's comedic style is distinctive, relying heavily on physical humour and expressive facial expressions. His most famous work Mr. Bean showcases his talent for creating humour in simple, everyday situations, which is a timeless classic. Watching Rowan Atkinson's performances always fills me with joy and laughter. I admire his creativity and the timeless quality of his performances, which continue to entertain people of all ages. 第一段简单介绍人物 1.When it comes to my favourite comedian, Mr.Bean comes to mind. 说到我最喜欢的喜剧演员，我想到的是憨豆先生。 2．It is generally believed that Rowan Atkinson is one of the most famous comedians and enjoys popularity among many people. 人们普遍认为罗温·艾金森是最著名的喜剧演员之一，受到许多人的欢迎。 3．As for how to make people laugh, I think nobody is better at it than Charlie Chaplin. 至于如何让人发笑，我认为没有人比查理·卓别林更擅长了。 第二段说明喜欢他/她的原因 1.What impresses me most is her particular style of acting, which makes people laugh. 让我印象最深的是她独特的、令人大笑的表演风格。 2．I'm deeply attracted by his performance, which combines humour with relatively serious content.　他的表演将幽默与较为严肃的内容结合在一起，深深地吸引了我。 3．After seeing Chaplin's film The Gold Rush, I laughed out loud for his great performance, which helped to reduce my stress and lift my spirits.　看完卓别林的电影《淘金记》后，我因他的精彩表演放声大笑，这有助于减轻我的压力，振奋我的精神。 第三段对人物进行评价 1.In my opinion, he was one of the best comedians of his time. 在我看来，他是他那个年代最好的喜剧演员之一。 2．In conclusion/In a word/In short/All in all, the power of his works is not only in his acting, but also in the characters he created. 总之，他的作品的力量不仅在于他的表演，还在于他塑造的人物。 写作二　场景微续写(笑是最好的良药) ——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 [情感描写]　mood, entertain, cheer up, impress, long face, amusing, enthusiasm [动作描写]　spot, examine, grin, deserve, crack a smile, flatter, illuminate [人物描写]　wig, ankle, clown, employer, emotive, mischievous, witty, barber, fellow, gentle, cruel, composer 佳句积累 [人物描写]　I speak with the on-duty nurse, who tells me that Lara's parents rushed her to the hospital after she fell off her bicycle.Since getting here, Lara has spent her time crying in pain. [情感描写]　1.Anxious parents do what they can to comfort nervous and crying children. 2.I spent much of the time when I was there feeling frightened and more than a little bored！ 3.Although she is clearly still in some pain, her scared and anxious look has been replaced—first by a small smile, and then by loud laughter as I “magically” produce her sock from out of my pocket. Seeing their daughter so much happier has in turn made Lara's parents more relaxed. [主旨升华]　1.Laughter is the best medicine. 2.Humour isn't just about laughter, but is a way of life and a tool that can be used to illuminate the world. 3.Humor is mankind's greatest blessing. ——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　“我”被诊断出患有重病后，心情低落。在得到好朋友的鼓励后，“我”振作起来，明白了“笑是最好的良药”。 第一步　完成句子 1．被诊断出患有重病时，我垂下了眼睛，眼眶里盈满了泪水。 When diagnosed with a serious illness, I dropped my eyes, my eyes brimming with tears.(状语从句的省略)　 2．过了一会儿，我擦干了眼泪，抬起头，双眼凝视着天花板，泪水再次涌入眼眶。 A few moments later, I wiped my tears, lifted my head and focused my eyes on the ceiling, tears welling up in my eyes again. (动作链描写) 3．面对这个残酷的现实，我的心情糟糕透顶，整天愁眉苦脸。 Facing the cruel fact, I was in such a bad mood that I had a long face all day long.(现在分词短语作状语；such...that...) 4．没有什么能让我开心，或让我振作起来。 Nothing could entertain me or cheer me up． 5．我最好的朋友又担心又焦急，轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀，对我说了一些诙谐幽默的话。 Worried and anxious, my best friend tapped me on the shoulder gently, saying some witty and humorous words to me．(现在分词短语作状语) 6．最终，我露出了笑容，眼中闪烁着希望的光芒。正如那句名言所说：“笑是最好的良药。” Finally, I cracked a smile and my eyes sparkled with hope. Just as the famous saying goes, “Laughter is the best medicine.” 第二步　连句成文 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ One possible version： When diagnosed with a serious illness, I dropped my eyes, my eyes brimming with tears.A few moments later, I wiped my tears, lifted my head and focused my eyes on the ceiling, tears welling up in my eyes again. Facing the cruel fact, I was in such a bad mood that I had a long face all day long.Nothing could entertain me or cheer me up. Worried and anxious, my best friend tapped me on the shoulder gently，saying some witty and humorous words to me. Finally, I cracked a smile and my eyes sparkled with hope. Just as the famous saying goes，“Laughter is the best medicine.” 短语必记 1.stare into one's eyes　　　凝视某人的眼睛 2.fix/focus one's eyes on 盯着看 3.lower/drop one's eyes 垂下眼睛 4.raise/lift one's eyes 抬起眼睛 5.one's eyes glitter/sparkle/shine with excitement 眼里闪着兴奋的光芒 6.meet sb.'s eyes 与某人对视 必背金句 1.John sat beside the window, with his eyes fixed/focused on a book.(with复合结构) 约翰坐在窗边，眼睛盯着一本书。 2.Gazing at the surroundings with innocent and curious eyes, he sang happily.(现在分词短语作状语) 他带着天真而好奇的眼神凝视着周围的环境，愉快地唱着歌。 3.When he recognised who the visitor was, John opened his mouth wide, his eyes glittering/sparkling/shining with extreme thrill.(独立主格结构) 当约翰认出来访者是谁时，他张大了嘴，眼睛里闪烁着极度兴奋的光芒。 4.His eyes brimming with/filled with tears, he lowered his head.(独立主格结构) 他低下了头，眼里充满了泪水。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $