UNIT 1 Section Ⅴ Writing-【金版新学案】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书Word（人教版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing

Writing 1　应用文——人物描写

◎情境呈现

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友John对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩， 想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。请你写一篇短文，为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家， 内容包括：

1．科学家简介；

2．主要成就；

3．对你的影响。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

Dear John，

                                                                       

                                                                       

                                                                       

                                                                       

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

Step 1.审题谋篇

Step 2.遣词造句

字斟句酌添细节，写作框架雏形现

第一段：对钱学森进行简要的介绍

1．我想向你介绍我最喜欢的科学家。他就是钱学森，一位爱国的、杰出的、才

华横溢的科学家。

I'd like to introduce my favorite scientist to you.He is Qian Xuesen, a patriotic, outstanding and gifted scientist．

第二段： 描写钱学森生涯中比较重要的事迹和贡献

2．起初，钱学森学习的是铁路机械工程，但淞沪会战爆发后，他转而攻读航空专业以保卫祖国。

Initially，Qian Xuesen studied Railway Mechanical Engineering, but after the Songhu Battle broke out, he shifted his major to aviation to defend his country．

3．1955 年，他从美国回到中国，负责中国的航天和导弹计划。

In 1955, he returned from America to China and was in charge of China's space and missile programme.

4．在他的领导下，中国在航天和航空领域取得了稳步进展。

Under his leadership, China made steady progress in aerospace and aviation.

5．他为中国航天事业的发展做出了巨大贡献。

He made great contributions to the development of China's aerospace.

第三段： 钱学森的影响和评价

6．钱学森一生致力于科学事业，他将激励我追寻自己的梦想。

Qian Xuesen devoted all his life to science and he will inspire me to follow my dream．

巧用单元句式，靓化表达促提升

【读教材原句】(教材P8)Einstein was not only a genius; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.

爱因斯坦不仅是一位天才，还是一位勇敢且善良的人物，深受许多人的喜爱。

【记句式】句中的 a courageous and kind figure loved by many people描写人物性格特点，名词前面修饰语courageous and kind的使用也突出了主题表达；loved by many people为过去分词短语作后置定语，简洁地道不啰嗦。

【学仿写】将句1改写为“人物描写且过去分词作定语”的句子

I'd like to introduce my favorite scientist to you.Qian Xuesen was not only a gifted scientist; he was a patriotic and outstanding figure admired by many people.

Step 3.衔接成篇

Dear John，

I'd like to introduce my favorite scientist to you.Qian Xuesen was not only a gifted scientist；he was a patriotic and outstanding figure admired by many people.

Initially, Qian Xuesen studied Railway Mechanical Engineering, but after the Songhu Battle broke out, he shifted his major to aviation to defend his country.In 1955, he returned from America to China and was in charge of China's space and missile programme.Under his leadership, China made steady progress in aerospace and aviation.He made great contributions to the development of China's aerospace.

Qian Xuesen devoted all his life to science and he will inspire me to follow my dream.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

◎语料拓展

一、开门见山，介绍人物的一些基本信息

1．Known as a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.

李时珍生于1518年，是明代一位著名的医学家。

2．Having a gift for writing, he made up his mind to become a writer when he grew up.

他有写作的天赋，并下决心长大后成为一名作家。

3．Born on 10 December 1960, Lang Ping is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.

郎平出生于1960年12月10日，是一位人们公认的杰出的排球教练。

二、成长经历以及取得的成就

1．She devoted her whole life to scientific research and her scientific findings benefited the people all over the world.

她毕生致力于科学研究，她的科学成果造福了全世界人民。

2．In order to finish the task, he visited mountains, called on ordinary people, tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.