UNIT 1 Section Ⅳ Extended writing-【金版新学案】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书Word（人教版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语新闻报道写作核心知识点，通过分析保护文化遗产新闻范文的标题、导语、结构层次及语言技巧（如时态运用、修辞等）搭建输入支架，再以文化遗址开发讨论为情境任务，结合仿写步骤（结构布局、语言规范、高级句式、连句成篇）构建输出支架，形成从理解到应用的完整学习脉络。 该资料特色在于融合文化意识（保护文化遗产主题）与语言能力（新闻写作结构和语言技巧训练），通过分阶段仿写（如用非限制性定语从句合并句子、倒装句改写）培养思维品质。课中辅助教师引导学生掌握写作方法，课后提供语料积累与练习，帮助学生查漏补缺，提升写作能力。

Section Ⅳ　Extended writing　 　单元写作——写一篇关于保护文化遗产的新闻报道 ……………………………………………………………………………◎ PROMOTING CULTURE THROUGH DIGITAL IMAGES Lanzhou，9 August 2017.A group of researchers and scientists from China and other countries are working together to help increase knowledge and appreciation of China's ancient cultural heritage.They are recording and collecting digital images of cultural relics from the Mogao Caves，which were a key stop along the Silk Road throughout China's ancient history.Nearly 500，000 high-quality digital photographs have been produced since the international project started in 1994. The Mogao Caves have long been a meeting point for different cultures and are part of the history of many countries.Today，the caves are just as international as they were at the time when people travelled the Silk Road.Tourists from all over the world visit Dunhuang to see the caves，and the Getty Museum in Los Angeles has even reproduced a copy of the caves and paintings for people to admire in America. By sharing so many digital photos over the Internet，the group hopes to promote even wider interest around the world in China's ancient history，culture，and traditions.They also hope to further educate people about the importance of safeguarding historic and cultural relics for future generations to understand and appreciate.As one researcher who is working on the project explains，“Appreciating one's own cultural heritage is very important for understanding oneself.Appreciating the cultural heritage of other countries is very important for international communication and understanding.” ◎…………………………………………………………………………… 知结构 1．标题：课文的标题简洁明了，概括性强，具有代表性。 2．导语：第一段交代了事件发生的时间、地点和参与者，以及事件的重要意义。本段使用两个“现在进行时态”的句子，使新闻报道更生动、鲜活。此外，最后一句运用了现在完成时态，揭示了研究团队为研究和保护莫高窟文化遗产所做出的巨大努力。 第二段主要用表示时间的副词long，today和程度副词even串联起了各句，使表达更加灵活，富有层次。 第三段使用了“排比”这一修辞手法，增强了语言的感染力，同时也总结了全文，表达了主旨。 学语言 1．第一段第二句中使用了动词不定式短语to help increase ...简洁、明确地概括出文化遗产保护项目的目的。 2．第一段第三句中的a key stop，意为“一个关键站点”，stop 在此处为熟词生义，使表达更具意蕴。 3．第三段第三句中使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，巧妙地引用了一位从事该项目的研究人员的话，增强了新闻报道的真实性和感染力，这也是这篇新闻报道的点睛之笔。 4．第三段第三、四句使用了动词-ing形式短语作主语，具体、凝练，突出强调了欣赏文化遗产的重要性。 [情境任务写作] 最近你市发现了一处文化遗址，就是否应当开发，人们展开了激烈的讨论。假如你是一名记者，请就此写一篇报道。 赞成开发 应开发，以吸引更多的游客来旅游观光 反对开发 应保持原样，以免遭人为破坏 参考词汇：开发develop；旅游业tourism 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 第一段：报道的导语 第二段：双方观点结论 第三段：报道的结尾 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)文化古迹保护应该为旅游业让路吗？(give way to) Should the protection of the cultural relic give way to tourism？ (2)是否开发我市文物是一个热门话题。(“疑问词＋动词不定式短语”作主语；hit) Whether or not to develop the cultural relic in our city is a hit. (3)文化遗址值得开发。(be worth doing) The cultural relic is worth developing. (4)开发它将会使人们更多地了解我们国家伟大的历史。(动词-ing形式作主语；一般将来时) Developing it will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country. (5)我们应该保持文化遗址的原样。(keep...as it is) We should keep the cultural relic as it is. (6)文化遗址不能遭到人们的破坏。(被动语态) The cultural relic cannot be destroyed by people. (7)征询专家的建议是明智的选择。(动词-ing形式短语作主语) Turning to the experts for advice is a wise choice. (8)我们将会跟踪报道这件事的进展。(一般将来时) We will follow its progress. 3．三仿句式高级表达 (9)根据新闻报道中题目的特点简化句(1)(no more than six words) Should Protection Give Way To Tourism？ (10)用含有非限制性定语从句的句子合并句(3)和句(4) The cultural relic is worth developing，which will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country. (11)用以only in this way开头的倒装句改写句(6) Only in this way can the cultural relic not be destroyed by people. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Should Protection Give Way To Tourism？ Whether or not to develop the cultural relic in our city is a hit. Some people are in favor of the idea.They think the cultural relic is worth developing，which will enable people to learn more about the great history of our country.However，others hold an opposite opinion，thinking that we should keep the cultural relic as it is.Only in this way can the cultural relic not be destroyed by people. Turning to the experts for advice is a wise choice and we will follow its progress. 读后续写——语料积累与情景运用 【教材语料整合】 亮 词 [环境描写]　heritage；relic；mount；pyramid；roof；cave [动作描写]　 promote；keep a balance；make a proposal；protest；turn to；limit；prevent...from...；contribute；investigate；donate；disappear；make sure；contrast；identify 美 句 1．There comes a time when the old must give way to the new，and it is not possible to preserve everything from our past as we move towards the future.(主旨升华) 2．Experts investigated the issue，conducted several tests，and then made a proposal for how the buildings could be saved.(动作描写) 3．The spirit of the Aswan Dam project is still alive today.(拟人修辞) 4．...Appreciating one's own cultural heritage is very important for understanding oneself.Appreciating the cultural heritage of other countries is very important for international communication and understanding.(排比修辞) 5．Heritage is our legacy from the past，what we live with today，and what we pass on to future generations.(主旨升华) 【续写语料运用】 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段，然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 微场景： 参观长城 　　The moment I arrived at the foot of the Great Wall，I was overwhelmed by its magnificence.Located in the north of China ①like a giant dragon，it is one of the wonders of the world.It is the crystallization of blood and sweat of ancient Chinese labors，②the symbol of Chinese culture and the pride of Chinese nation，reflecting the supernatural workmanship of ancient people.But with more and more people visiting it，this world cultural heritage site ③which/that is as precious as a pearl(定语从句)has been damaged to a certain extent. Fortunately，④in an attempt to preserve this cultural treasure，the government has taken a range of measures.But as a responsible citizen，⑤I strongly propose that we also make our contributions． 　　当我到达长城脚下的那一刻，我被它的壮丽所折服。位于中国北部的它就像一条巨龙，是世界奇观之一。它是中国古代劳动者血汗的结晶，是中华文化的象征，是中华民族的骄傲，体现了古人的巧夺天工。但随着越来越多的人参观它，这一像珍珠一样珍贵的世界文化遗产地已经遭到一定程度的损坏。幸运的是，为了保护这一文化瑰宝，政府已经采取了一系列措施。但作为一个负责任的公民，我强烈建议我们也做出贡献。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $