内容正文:
清单13 应用文写作之求助信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
求助信用于就遇到的困难请求对方帮助,核心是"说明身份+描述困难+具体请求+期待回复"。困难要具体,请求要明确,语气要诚恳礼貌。
■基本格式
第一段:自我介绍+点明求助目的
第二段:具体描述遇到的困难(分点说明)
第三段:提出具体请求+感谢+期待回复
■常用短语
1. ask for help/ turn to sb. for guidance 求助
2. be confronted with 面对
3. narrow down 缩小范围
4. concentrate on/ focus on 专注于
5. abundance of 丰富
6. try hard/ grappling with 努力解决
7. make… worse 削弱
8. be grateful 感激的
9. seek for your help 寻求你的帮助
10. have trouble/difficulty in doing sth. 遇到困难
11. be faced with a dilemma 面临困境
12. I would be very grateful if... 不胜感激
13. do me a favor 帮我一个忙
14. put forward some practical suggestions 提出实用建议
15. be eager for your help 渴望得到你的帮助
16. take my request into consideration 考虑我的请求
17. give me some guidance 给我一些指导
18. solve the problem 解决问题
19. I would appreciate it if... 如果……我将不胜感激
20. sincerely hope that 真诚希望
21. ask for your advice 征求你的建议
22. bother you 麻烦你
23. at your earliest convenience 在你方便的时候尽早
24. look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
25. express my sincere gratitude表达我诚挚的感谢
26. to be more specific 具体来说
27. spare some time抽出时间
■常用句型
开门见山说明求助意图,简要介绍自己的身份和遇到的问题
1. I'm writing to turn to you for help because I have met with some difficulties in my English study.
我写信是想向你求助,因为我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
2. I am writing to seek for your help in preparing for the upcoming English speech contest.
我写信是想向你求助,帮我准备即将到来的英语演讲比赛。
3. I'm sorry to bother you, but I really need your help badly.
很抱歉打扰你,但我真的很需要你的帮助。
详细阐述具体困难与需求,说明需要对方提供哪些具体帮助
1. To be more specific, I have great difficulty in English writing and don't know how to organize the structure of an article.
具体来说,我在英语写作方面有很大的困难,不知道如何组织文章结构。
2. Furthermore, it would be a great help if you could recommend some good learning materials to me.
此外,如果你能推荐一些好的学习材料,对我也会有很大帮助。
3. I was wondering if you could possibly spare some time to give me some guidance on my study plan.
我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间,就我的学习计划给我一些指导。
4. What bothered me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself.
困扰我的事情是我不知道如何复习自学的功课。
5. Despite time and efforts I devoted to practising writing, little progress has been made.
尽管我花了时间和精力练习写作,但进步甚微。
6. I’m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
7. I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?
我感到压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗?
表达诚挚感谢,期待对方的回复与帮助
1. I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice on how to improve my oral English.
如果你能给我一些关于如何提高英语口语的建议,我将不胜感激。
2. Faced with these problems, I am really eager for your help.
面对这些问题,我真的很渴望得到你的帮助。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
感谢你的善意考虑,我期待着尽快收到你的回复。
4. I would appreciate it if you could do me this favor.
如果你能帮我这个忙,我将不胜感激。
5. I sincerely hope that you can take my request into consideration and give me some valuable suggestions.
我真诚地希望你能考虑我的请求,给我一些宝贵的建议。
6. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你有任何问题,请随时联系我。
■模板
I'm ______(身份). I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding ______(求助事由).
Currently, I am confronted with ______(困难数量)principal obstacles. For one thing, I find it rather challenging to ______(困难一), given ______(原因). For another, I am grappling with ______(困难二), which ______(带来的影响). I would be profoundly grateful if you could spare some time to ______(具体请求).
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
■高考例题分析
例题1(2026-2027学年高三上·重庆·开学考试)假定你是李华,负责策划校园英文读书角(English Reading Corner)活动,遇到一些难题。请给本次活动指导外教Ms. White写一封邮件求助,内容包括:
1. 遇到的难题;
2. 具体求助事宜。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. White,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
例题2(2027·贵州贵阳·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教Ben在你们班开展了英文小说阅读项目,你在阅读过程中遇到困难。请给Ben写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明困难;
2. 寻求建议。
注意:1. 词数80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
I’m truly grateful for the reading project you’ve started.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
例题3(2026高三·全国·专题练习)假设你是李华,于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括:
●陈述写信原因
●简要描述该行李
●说明其重要性
●期待回复并表示感谢
注意:
词数100左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2025-2026学年高三下·重庆·阶段检测)假定你是李华,正在规划加拿大暑期旅行,目前遇到一些难题,请写信向加拿大笔友Peter求助。内容包括:
1. 阐述问题;
2. 寻求具体帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假如你想报读上海纽约大学硕士(New York University Shanghai postgraduate programme),你向招生办公室咨询以下事宜:
(1)录取要求(GPA均分、语言成绩、科研、论文);
(2)学费;
(3)奖学金可能性。
要求:80 — 100词。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 3
假定你是英语社团负责人李华,你校将于下周五下午在校报告厅举办校园英文读书分享会。请给外教Daniel写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍活动安排;
2. 征求创意。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua, head of the school English Club.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 4
假定你是李华,打算拍摄短视频向外国网友介绍自己的家乡,请给你的好友英语旅行博主Peter写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 征求拍摄意见;
2. 请教拍摄技巧。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华,即将升入高三的你学习压力剧增,出现焦虑、睡眠不佳、学习效率下降等问题,不知如何调整。请你给你的班主任Mr. Li写一封求助信,内容包括:
1. 简述自己目前的备考状态与困扰;
2. 倾诉内心压力与困惑;
3. 希望老师给予学习和心态方面的指导。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 6
假定你是李华,你现在正面临选科,内心十分迷茫。请给你的外国朋友Dave写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)说明写信原因;
(2)描述问题和征询建议;
(3)表示感谢。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dave,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(2026·四川成都·模拟预测)假设你是杨帆(Yang Fan),你的朋友蔡宇杰(Cai Yujie)喜欢深夜在校园里跑步。你发现他跑步后嘴唇发紫,担心他心脏可能有问题,于是劝他去医院检查。蔡宇杰不仅不听,反而反驳说:“你跑不过我,你信吗?”,然后你很着急,向他的辅导员王小芯(Wang Xiaoxin)紧急报告,要求介入帮忙劝告宇杰。
请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文:
(1)描述你观察到的情况和你的担忧;
(2)叙述蔡宇杰对你的劝告的反应;
(3)表达时间紧迫,需要立即采取措施。
注意:词数在80-100左右
Dear Xiaoxin,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Yang Fan
Passage 8
(2026·辽宁·二模)假定你是李华,最近完成了“Think Outside the Box”的项目报告,请你给外教Jackson写一封邮件请他指导。内容包括:
1.项目要求;
2.请求改稿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 9
(2026·甘肃兰州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,已完成英国某高校游学项目的英文个人陈述,现给外教Jack写邮件请他帮忙修改,内容包括:
1. 说明写信目的;2. 简述个人陈述内容。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 10
(2026·重庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教 Robert上周布置了“调查本地景区英文标识错误”的项目式学习任务。作为组长,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.汇报进展;
2.寻求建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 11
(2026·云南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你在信息技术课上设计了一个背单词的小程序。你想请外教Ms. Green帮你测试一下里面的单词和例句是否有错误,并给出改进建议。内容包括:
1. 介绍小程序;
2. 请她帮忙检查;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数不少于100;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 12
(2026·湖南·三模)假定你是李华,下个月要参加学校的英文歌唱大赛。请给外教Jack写封邮件,请他进行指导。邮件内容包括:
1.说明需要指导的内容;
2.约定指导时间和地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 13
(2026·河南濮阳·三模)假定你是李华,你上周末和父母一起在伦敦旅游时可能将自己的一本日记落在了酒店。请你给酒店负责人Mr. Smith写封邮件,内容包括:
1.请求帮助;
2.表达感谢。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 14
(2026·黑龙江哈尔滨·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的口语课外教Mr. Smith给你的课堂表现打分偏低。请给Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,表达你的困惑与委屈,并请教不足和改进建议。
注意:1)词数100左右;2)可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua.
Passage 15
(2026·贵州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你准备参加英文诗歌朗诵比赛,希望能得到外教Mr. Smith的专业指导。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)写信缘由;
(2)寻求指导。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 16
(2026·安徽·三模)假定你是李华,还有一个月就要参加高考。请用英语给Mr. Victory写一封信,内容如下:
1.你的临考备考计划;
2.征求老师建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Victory,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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清单13 应用文写作之求助信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
求助信用于就遇到的困难请求对方帮助,核心是"说明身份+描述困难+具体请求+期待回复"。困难要具体,请求要明确,语气要诚恳礼貌。
■基本格式
第一段:自我介绍+点明求助目的
第二段:具体描述遇到的困难(分点说明)
第三段:提出具体请求+感谢+期待回复
■常用短语
1. ask for help/ turn to sb. for guidance 求助
2. be confronted with 面对
3. narrow down 缩小范围
4. concentrate on/ focus on 专注于
5. abundance of 丰富
6. try hard/ grappling with 努力解决
7. make… worse 削弱
8. be grateful 感激的
9. seek for your help 寻求你的帮助
10. have trouble/difficulty in doing sth. 遇到困难
11. be faced with a dilemma 面临困境
12. I would be very grateful if... 不胜感激
13. do me a favor 帮我一个忙
14. put forward some practical suggestions 提出实用建议
15. be eager for your help 渴望得到你的帮助
16. take my request into consideration 考虑我的请求
17. give me some guidance 给我一些指导
18. solve the problem 解决问题
19. I would appreciate it if... 如果……我将不胜感激
20. sincerely hope that 真诚希望
21. ask for your advice 征求你的建议
22. bother you 麻烦你
23. at your earliest convenience 在你方便的时候尽早
24. look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
25. express my sincere gratitude表达我诚挚的感谢
26. to be more specific 具体来说
27. spare some time抽出时间
■常用句型
开门见山说明求助意图,简要介绍自己的身份和遇到的问题
1. I'm writing to turn to you for help because I have met with some difficulties in my English study.
我写信是想向你求助,因为我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
2. I am writing to seek for your help in preparing for the upcoming English speech contest.
我写信是想向你求助,帮我准备即将到来的英语演讲比赛。
3. I'm sorry to bother you, but I really need your help badly.
很抱歉打扰你,但我真的很需要你的帮助。
详细阐述具体困难与需求,说明需要对方提供哪些具体帮助
1. To be more specific, I have great difficulty in English writing and don't know how to organize the structure of an article.
具体来说,我在英语写作方面有很大的困难,不知道如何组织文章结构。
2. Furthermore, it would be a great help if you could recommend some good learning materials to me.
此外,如果你能推荐一些好的学习材料,对我也会有很大帮助。
3. I was wondering if you could possibly spare some time to give me some guidance on my study plan.
我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间,就我的学习计划给我一些指导。
4. What bothered me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself.
困扰我的事情是我不知道如何复习自学的功课。
5. Despite time and efforts I devoted to practising writing, little progress has been made.
尽管我花了时间和精力练习写作,但进步甚微。
6. I’m stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
7. I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?
我感到压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗?
表达诚挚感谢,期待对方的回复与帮助
1. I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice on how to improve my oral English.
如果你能给我一些关于如何提高英语口语的建议,我将不胜感激。
2. Faced with these problems, I am really eager for your help.
面对这些问题,我真的很渴望得到你的帮助。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
感谢你的善意考虑,我期待着尽快收到你的回复。
4. I would appreciate it if you could do me this favor.
如果你能帮我这个忙,我将不胜感激。
5. I sincerely hope that you can take my request into consideration and give me some valuable suggestions.
我真诚地希望你能考虑我的请求,给我一些宝贵的建议。
6. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me. 如果你有任何问题,请随时联系我。
■模板
I'm ______(身份). I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding ______(求助事由).
Currently, I am confronted with ______(困难数量)principal obstacles. For one thing, I find it rather challenging to ______(困难一), given ______(原因). For another, I am grappling with ______(困难二), which ______(带来的影响). I would be profoundly grateful if you could spare some time to ______(具体请求).
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
■高考例题分析
例题1(2026-2027学年高三上·重庆·开学考试)假定你是李华,负责策划校园英文读书角(English Reading Corner)活动,遇到一些难题。请给本次活动指导外教Ms. White写一封邮件求助,内容包括:
1. 遇到的难题;
2. 具体求助事宜。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. White,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. White,
I’m Li Hua, in charge of planning our school’s English Reading Corner. We’ve run into some problems and badly need your help.
First, most students prefer light fiction, so we struggle to pick suitable English books that are both interesting and helpful for language learning. Besides, few classmates join in the weekly reading sharing — they fear making mistakes when speaking English.
Could you recommend some proper English books for high school students? Also, would you please come to our first activity to give a short talk and encourage students to speak English? We’d truly appreciate your guidance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求以李华的身份给外教Ms. White写邮件,说明英文读书角活动遇到的难题并提出具体求助。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
负责,主管:in charge of → responsible for
挑选:pick → select/choose
推荐:recommend → put forward
合适的:proper → appropriate/suitable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We’ve run into some problems and badly need your help.
拓展句:We’ve run into some problems that we cannot solve on our own, which is why we badly need your help.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, most students prefer light fiction, so we struggle to pick suitable English books that are both interesting and helpful for language learning. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, few classmates join in the weekly reading sharing — they fear making mistakes when speaking English. (运用了when引导时间状语从句的省略结构)
例题2(2027·贵州贵阳·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教Ben在你们班开展了英文小说阅读项目,你在阅读过程中遇到困难。请给Ben写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明困难;
2. 寻求建议。
注意:1. 词数80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
I’m truly grateful for the reading project you’ve started.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ben,
I’m truly grateful for the reading project you’ve started. Meaningful as the project is, I find myself struggling with it.
Honestly, I am often blocked by unfamiliar vocabulary, which greatly reduces my reading efficiency and gradually hurts my reading confidence. Besides, I can hardly keep up with the complicated plot lines of the novel. Worse still, even if I look up every single word, combining them into a full sentence still makes little sense, making it quite challenging to catch the hidden meanings of the text.
Could you please share some practical solutions? I would highly appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份写邮件,向Ben诉说英文小说阅读困难并寻求建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
有意义的:meaningful → significant
减少:reduce → decrease
复杂的:complicated → complex
建议:advice → proposal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, I can hardly keep up with the complicated plot lines of the novel.
拓展句:Besides, I can hardly keep up with the complicated plot lines of the novel that shift from time to time.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Meaningful as the project is, I find myself struggling with it. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Honestly, I am often blocked by unfamiliar vocabulary, which greatly reduces my reading efficiency and gradually hurts my reading confidence. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
例题3(2026高三·全国·专题练习)假设你是李华,于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括:
●陈述写信原因
●简要描述该行李
●说明其重要性
●期待回复并表示感谢
注意:
词数100左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very sorry to trouble you for my lost suitcase at your busiest time.
I took flight BA793 on June 3rd, 2010. When I arrived at the airport, I found my suitcase missing. There are many important papers of our company just signed with a foreign company, which can lead to our company’s prosperity. In addition, in the suitcase are my ID card, employee card, ten UnionPay cards and some articles for daily use. The suitcase is about 70cm × 40cm, black leather with a bright lion mark of our company. Please help to look for it. Many thanks. My telephone number is 13589898889.
I am waiting for your reply sincerely.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,给航空公司写信,求助寻找航班遗失的行李箱,包含写信缘由、行李箱外貌、行李重要性、期待回复致谢四大要点。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
麻烦:trouble → bother
重要的:important → vital/crucial
寻找:look for → search for/seek
期待,盼望:wait for → anticipate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: The suitcase is about 70cm × 40cm, black leather with a bright lion mark of our company.
拓展句:The suitcase, which is about 70cm × 40cm, is black leather with a bright lion mark that belongs to our company.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When I arrived at the airport, I found my suitcase missing. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和missing作宾补)
【高分句型2】There are many important papers of our company just signed with a foreign company, which can lead to our company’s prosperity. (运用了过去分词短语signed...作后置定语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2025-2026学年高三下·重庆·阶段检测)假定你是李华,正在规划加拿大暑期旅行,目前遇到一些难题,请写信向加拿大笔友Peter求助。内容包括:
1. 阐述问题;
2. 寻求具体帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’ve been busy planning my coming summer trip to Canada recently, but I’ve run into some trouble and I hope you can help me out.
I’ve found several top tourist spots online, but I have no idea which are really worth visiting for a first-time visitor. Besides, I can’t work out a proper travel route to avoid wasting time on the road. Since you’re quite familiar with your country, could you please recommend some must-see attractions and help me design a suitable 7-day travel route? I’d be extremely grateful for your practical advice.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份规划自己的高中毕业旅行,向加拿大好友Peter求助,希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的难题。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
遇见:run into → come across/encounter
值得参观:worth visiting → worthy of being visited
景点:attractions → scenic spots
感激的:grateful → appreciative
2. 句式拓展
改写复合句
原句:Besides, I can’t work out a proper travel route to avoid wasting time on the road.
拓展句:Besides, I can’t work out a proper travel route that can help me avoid wasting time on the road.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’ve found several top tourist spots online, but I have no idea which are really worth visiting for a first-time visitor. (运用了which引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Since you’re quite familiar with your country, could you please recommend some must-see attractions and help me design a suitable 7-day travel route? (since引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 2
假如你想报读上海纽约大学硕士(New York University Shanghai postgraduate programme),你向招生办公室咨询以下事宜:
(1)录取要求(GPA均分、语言成绩、科研、论文);
(2)学费;
(3)奖学金可能性。
要求:80 — 100词。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Admissions Office,
I am writing to inquire about the postgraduate programme at NYU Shanghai. Could you please provide me with the following information?
First, what are the admission requirements, including minimum GPA, language test scores (TOEFL or IELTS), and whether research experience or published papers are expected? Second, what is the total tuition fee for the programme? Third, are there any scholarships available for international or Chinese students, and what are the criteria for applying?
I would be very grateful if you could clarify these points. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【导语】题目要求学生向上海纽约大学硕士项目的招生办公室写信,咨询报读的事宜,涵盖录取要求、学费和奖学金可能性三大方面的内容。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
询问:inquire about → make an inquiry about
接下来的:following → subsequent
要求:expect → require, demand
阐明:clarify → elucidate, clear up
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to inquire about the postgraduate programme at NYU Shanghai.
拓展句:I am writing because I want to inquire about the postgraduate programme at NYU Shanghai.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]First, what are the admission requirements, including minimum GPA, language test scores (TOEFL or IELTS), and whether research experience or published papers are expected? (运用了whether引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Third, are there any scholarships available for international or Chinese students, and what are the criteria for applying? (运用了形容词短语available…作后置定语、动名词applying作宾语)
Passage 3
假定你是英语社团负责人李华,你校将于下周五下午在校报告厅举办校园英文读书分享会。请给外教Daniel写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍活动安排;
2. 征求创意。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua, head of the school English Club.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua, head of the school English Club. Our school will hold a campus English reading sharing session in the school lecture hall next Friday afternoon.
The event is scheduled to begin at 2:30 p.m. and will last two hours, with students sharing their favorite English books as well as reading experiences. We sincerely hope you can give us some valuable suggestions to make it more creative and engaging. Do you have any ideas for interactive activities or theme designs? We would also be very glad if you could come and share your favorite books.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生写一封邮件,就校园英文读书分享会的活动的安排向外教征求意见。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
吸引人的:engaging → appealing
有创意的:creative → original/innovative
有价值的:valuable → worthwhile/precious
建议:suggestion → proposal
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The event is scheduled to begin at 2:30 p.m. and will last two hours, with students sharing their favorite English books as well as reading experiences.
拓展句:Scheduled to begin at 2:30 p.m., the event will last two hours, during which students can share their favourite English books as well as reading experiences.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We sincerely hope you can give us some valuable suggestions to make it more creative and engaging. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】We would also be very glad if you could come and share your favorite books. (运用了if虚拟条件句)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,打算拍摄短视频向外国网友介绍自己的家乡,请给你的好友英语旅行博主Peter写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 征求拍摄意见;
2. 请教拍摄技巧。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I am planning to make a short video to introduce my hometown to foreign netizens. Lacking relevant experience, I’m writing to ask for your advice since you’re such an experienced travel blogger!
I wonder what scenes should be included in my video to arouse foreign audiences’ interest. Besides, could you share some practical video-shooting skills to improve the visual effect? I would appreciate it if you could offer some guidance.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给好友英语旅行博主Peter写一封邮件,就拍摄短视频向外国网友介绍自己家乡一事征求拍摄意见、请教拍摄技巧。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
富有经验的:experienced → seasoned
技巧:skill → technique
期待:look forward to → anticipate
回复:reply → response
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, could you share some practical video-shooting skills to improve the visual effect?
拓展句:Besides, could you share some practical video-shooting skills that can help improve the visual effect?
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Lacking relevant experience, I’m writing to ask for your advice since you’re such an experienced travel blogger! (运用了现在分词短语作状语以及since引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I wonder what scenes should be included in my video to arouse foreign audiences’ interest.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,即将升入高三的你学习压力剧增,出现焦虑、睡眠不佳、学习效率下降等问题,不知如何调整。请你给你的班主任Mr. Li写一封求助信,内容包括:
1. 简述自己目前的备考状态与困扰;
2. 倾诉内心压力与困惑;
3. 希望老师给予学习和心态方面的指导。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Li,
I hope this letter won’t take up too much of your time. I’m writing to turn to you for help, as I’ve been struggling a lot recently.
With Senior Three approaching, I’m overwhelmed by mounting study pressure from heavy revision work. My mood has become unstable. As a consequence, barely can I get into an efficient learning state. Besides, constant anxiety has a profound effect on my sleep quality, leaving me exhausted and easily distracted in daily classes. No matter how hard I try, I fail to make satisfying progress.
I feel confused and upset now. Would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on adjusting my mood and planning my study better? Your suggestions will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给班主任Mr. Li写一封求助信,简述自己目前的备考状态与困扰,倾诉内心压力与困惑,并希望老师给予学习和心态方面的指导。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
最近:recently → lately
因此:as a consequence → as a result
令人满意的:satisfying → fulfilling
困惑的:confused → puzzled
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, constant anxiety has a profound effect on my sleep quality, leaving me exhausted and easily distracted in daily classes.
拓展句:Besides, constant anxiety has a profound effect on my sleep quality, which leaves me exhausted and easily distracted in daily classes.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]No matter how hard I try, I fail to make satisfying progress. (运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]As a consequence, barely can I get into an efficient learning state. (运用了部分倒装)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,你现在正面临选科,内心十分迷茫。请给你的外国朋友Dave写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)说明写信原因;
(2)描述问题和征询建议;
(3)表示感谢。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dave,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Dave,
How is everything going? I’m writing to ask you for some advice. Now I have to choose my academic direction, but I feel quite confused. I don’t know which one is more suitable for me. I am interested in history and literature, yet science subjects seem easier for me to get good grades. Besides, I have no idea about future jobs related to them.
I feel worried and can’t make a decision. Could you give me some useful suggestions?
Thank you very much for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给外国朋友Dave写一封电子邮件,对选科的事情征求建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议:advice → recommendation
选择:choose → select
困惑的:confused → bewildered
担心的:worried → concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Now I have to choose my academic direction, but I feel quite confused.
拓展句:Now I have to choose my academic direction, which makes me quite confused.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I don’t know which one is more suitable for me. (运用了which引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, I have no idea about future jobs related to them. (运用了过去分词related作后置定语)
Passage 7
(2026·四川成都·模拟预测)假设你是杨帆(Yang Fan),你的朋友蔡宇杰(Cai Yujie)喜欢深夜在校园里跑步。你发现他跑步后嘴唇发紫,担心他心脏可能有问题,于是劝他去医院检查。蔡宇杰不仅不听,反而反驳说:“你跑不过我,你信吗?”,然后你很着急,向他的辅导员王小芯(Wang Xiaoxin)紧急报告,要求介入帮忙劝告宇杰。
请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文:
(1)描述你观察到的情况和你的担忧;
(2)叙述蔡宇杰对你的劝告的反应;
(3)表达时间紧迫,需要立即采取措施。
注意:词数在80-100左右
Dear Xiaoxin,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Yang Fan
【参考范文】
Dear Xiaoxin,
I’m writing urgently about Cai Yujie. He enjoys jogging late at night on campus, but recently I’ve noticed his lips turn purple after running. I’m really worried this might signal a heart problem.
When I advised him to see a doctor, he just challenged me, saying, “You can’t outrun me, believe it?” He totally dismissed my concern.
Time is running out. He may keep running without realizing the danger. Please step in and convince him to get a medical checkup as soon as possible. His health could be at serious risk.
Best regards,
Yang Fan
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生针对题干所述的情况写一封向辅导员求助的英文邮件。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
紧急地:urgently → in a hurry
注意到:notice → spot
表明;预示:signal → indicate
忽视;不予理会:dismiss → ignore
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I’m writing urgently about Cai Yujie. He enjoys jogging late at night on campus, but recently I’ve noticed his lips turn purple after running.
拓展句:I’m writing urgently about Cai Yujie, who enjoys jogging late at night on campus, but recently I’ve noticed his lips turn purple after running.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】He enjoys jogging late at night on campus, but recently I’ve noticed his lips turn purple after running.(运用了动名词jogging和running作宾语)
【高分句型 2】When I advised him to see a doctor, he just challenged me, saying, “You can’t outrun me, believe it?”(运用了when时间状语从句以及现在分词saying作伴随状语)
Passage 8
(2026·辽宁·二模)假定你是李华,最近完成了“Think Outside the Box”的项目报告,请你给外教Jackson写一封邮件请他指导。内容包括:
1.项目要求;
2.请求改稿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jackson,
I’m Li Hua from your class. Recently, I have finished my project report entitled “Think Outside the Box”, so I’m writing to ask for your professional guidance.
The project requires us to explore creative thinking, explain its significance and put forward practical methods to develop it. I would appreciate it if you could offer some suggestions on the content and structure of my report to make it more logical. Besides, I wonder if you could help me correct the grammar mistakes in it.
Thank you for your time and patience. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生给外教Jackson写一封邮件请他指导自己完成的“Think Outside the Box”的项目报告。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
指导:guidance → instruction
探索:explore → probe
帮助:help → assist
解释:explain → account for
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Recently, I have finished my project report entitled “Think Outside the Box”, so I’m writing to ask for your professional guidance.
拓展句:Recently, I have finished my project report whose title is “Think Outside the Box”, so I’m writing to ask for your professional guidance.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Recently, I have finished my project report entitled “Think Outside the Box”, so I’m writing to ask for your professional guidance. (运用了过去分词entitled作后置定语)
[高分句型2]Besides, I wonder if you could help me correct the grammar mistakes in it. (运用了if引导宾语从句)
Passage 9
(2026·甘肃兰州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,已完成英国某高校游学项目的英文个人陈述,现给外教Jack写邮件请他帮忙修改,内容包括:
1. 说明写信目的;2. 简述个人陈述内容。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
Hope you’re having a great day! I’ve attached the draft of my English personal statement for a UK summer study program and sincerely need your help with revision. It briefly covers my academic experience and motivation for participating in the program — improving academic English and learning more about British education.
Could you kindly check for grammar errors and suggest ways to make the expression more natural? Your advice as a native speaker is invaluable!
Thank you so much for your time and help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份给外教Jack写一封求助邮件,请其帮忙修改已完成的英国高校游学项目英文个人陈述,需说明写信目的并简述陈述内容。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
帮助:help → assistance
建议:advice → proposal
宝贵的:invaluable → priceless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It briefly covers my academic experience and motivation for participating in the program.
拓展句:It briefly covers my academic experience and motivation, which drive me to participate in the program.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It briefly covers my academic experience and motivation for participating in the program — improving academic English and learning more about British education. (运用了动名词participating 作宾语)
【高分句型2】Could you kindly check for grammar errors and suggest ways to make the expression more natural? (运用了不定式作定语)
Passage 10
(2026·重庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,外教 Robert上周布置了“调查本地景区英文标识错误”的项目式学习任务。作为组长,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.汇报进展;
2.寻求建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Robert,
I’m Li Hua from Class 2. I’m writing to update you on our group’s progress in the project of investigating English sign errors at local scenic spots.
So far, our team has visited two major scenic areas. We have photographed dozens of misleading and incorrect English signs, mainly including spelling mistakes and improper word usage. We have also sorted out and recorded all the problems in detail.
However, we have trouble analyzing the collected errors and arranging our next steps. We would be grateful if you could offer us some professional guidance on data analysis and further progress. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】要求考生以组长李华身份,向外教汇报项目进展并寻求建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
风景优美的:scenic → picturesque
误导的:misleading → deceptive
不适当的:improper → inappropriate
感激的:grateful → appreciative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, we have trouble analyzing the collected errors and arranging our next steps.
拓展句:However, we have trouble analyzing the errors that we have collected and arranging our next steps.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to update you on our group’s progress in the project of investigating English sign errors at local scenic spots.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】We would be grateful if you could offer us some professional guidance on data analysis and further progress.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 11
(2026·云南·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你在信息技术课上设计了一个背单词的小程序。你想请外教Ms. Green帮你测试一下里面的单词和例句是否有错误,并给出改进建议。内容包括:
1. 介绍小程序;
2. 请她帮忙检查;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数不少于100;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Green,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Green,
I’m Li Hua, a student in your class. In our IT lesson, I designed a small app to help memorize English words, which includes word lists, example sentences, pronunciation support, and short quizzes, aiming to make vocabulary learning more engaging and effective.
I would really appreciate it if you could check whether the words are used correctly and whether the example sentences sound natural and appropriate. It would be helpful if you could point out any spelling or grammar mistakes, and suggest better expressions where necessary. If possible, I would also like your advice on how to improve the difficulty level and make the app more suitable for learners like us.
I truly appreciate your help and look forward to your valuable suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】要求考生以李华的名义给外教Ms. Green写一封邮件,请他帮忙测试自己设计的背单词的小程序里面的单词和例句是否有错误,并给出改进建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
记忆:memorize → keep in mind
建议:suggest → recommend
提高:improve → enhance
感激:appreciate → be grateful for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a student in your class.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, a student in your class, who is interested in creation.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In our IT lesson, I designed a small app to help memorize English words, which includes word lists, example sentences, pronunciation support, and short quizzes, aiming to make vocabulary learning more engaging and effective.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,不定式to help和现在分词aiming作状语)
【高分句型2】If possible, I would also like your advice on how to improve the difficulty level and make the app more suitable for learners like us.(运用了状语从句的省略和“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
Passage 12
(2026·湖南·三模)假定你是李华,下个月要参加学校的英文歌唱大赛。请给外教Jack写封邮件,请他进行指导。邮件内容包括:
1.说明需要指导的内容;
2.约定指导时间和地点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to ask you for professional guidance, since I will take part in the school English Singing Contest next month.
I have picked an English song but have trouble with pronunciation and singing rhythm. Besides, I hope you can give me advice on stage performance. Would you be available this Friday afternoon in your office? It would be much appreciated if you could spare some time to help me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,写信向外教Jack求助,说明自己即将参加校园英文歌唱比赛,说明需要指导的内容、约定指导时间和地点。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加:take part in → participate in
挑选:pick → select
帮助:help → assist
指导:guidance → instruction
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I have picked an English song but have trouble with pronunciation and singing rhythm.
拓展句:Having selected an English song, I find it hard to master its pronunciation and singing rhythm.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】I’m writing to ask you for professional guidance, since I will take part in the school English Singing Contest next month.(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型 2】Besides, I hope you can give me advice on stage performance.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
Passage 13
(2026·河南濮阳·三模)假定你是李华,你上周末和父母一起在伦敦旅游时可能将自己的一本日记落在了酒店。请你给酒店负责人Mr. Smith写封邮件,内容包括:
1.请求帮助;
2.表达感谢。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to ask if you could do me a favor by searching for a personal item I may have left in your hotel during my stay with my parents last weekend. The diary, which holds great value to me, is a small notebook with a blue cover and my name written on the front page.
If you find it, could you please let me know and keep it for me for the moment? I would greatly appreciate it if you could post it to me, and I will cover the postage.
Thank you so much for your kind help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生你给酒店负责人Mr. Smith写封邮件,请求帮助以及表达感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
寻找:search for → seek
发现:find → discover
支付:cover → afford
帮助:do sb. a favor → give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Thank you so much for your kind help.
拓展句:I’m very grateful that you could help me kindly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to ask if you could do me a favor by searching for a personal item I may have left in your hotel during my stay with my parents last weekend.(运用了if引导宾语从句,省略了that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you find it, could you please let me know and keep it for me for the moment?(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 14
(2026·黑龙江哈尔滨·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的口语课外教Mr. Smith给你的课堂表现打分偏低。请给Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,表达你的困惑与委屈,并请教不足和改进建议。
注意:1)词数100左右;2)可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua.
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Hua, a student attending your oral English optional course. I am writing to express my gentle confusion and disappointment upon receiving my relatively low score in the recent class performance assessment.
I have always valued this course highly. I attend every class punctually, concentrate fully on your lectures, and actively participate in various class discussions and oral activities. Therefore, I feel a little puzzled about my current grade.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could point out my weaknesses and offer some valuable suggestions. I will spare no effort to adjust myself and perform better in future classes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,表达自己的困惑与委屈,并请教不足和改进建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
失望:disappointment → frustration
参加:participate in → attend
各种各样的:various → a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to express my gentle confusion and disappointment upon receiving my relatively low score in the recent class performance assessment.
拓展句:I am writing to express my gentle confusion and disappointment because I have received a relatively low score in the recent class performance assessment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I would greatly appreciate it if you could point out my weaknesses and offer some valuable suggestions.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I am writing to express my gentle confusion and disappointment upon receiving my relatively low score in the recent class performance assessment.(运用了动名词作宾语)
Passage 15
(2026·贵州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你准备参加英文诗歌朗诵比赛,希望能得到外教Mr. Smith的专业指导。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)写信缘由;
(2)寻求指导。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? I am writing to seek your guidance, as I’ve signed up for the English Poetry Recitation Competition in the upcoming English Culture Festival, where I plan to present an English poem. I have attached a recording of my current recitation for your review.
Being a non-native speaker, I really need your help to improve my performance. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could offer advice on my pronunciation, intonation, and emotional expression to help me convey the poem more effectively. Your guidance will definitely help me a lot.
Thank you so much for your precious time and support. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,说明准备参加英文诗歌朗诵比赛并希望得到其专业指导的写信缘由及寻求指导的具体内容。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
指导:guidance → instruction
比赛:competition → contest
有效地:effectively → efficiently
宝贵的:precious→ valuable
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Being a non-native speaker, I really need your help to improve my performance.
拓展句:As I am a non-native speaker of English, I find myself in great need of your assistance to enhance my recitation performance.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am writing to seek your guidance, as I’ve signed up for the English Poetry Recitation Competition in the upcoming English Culture Festival, where I plan to present an English poem. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句、where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Therefore, I would be grateful if you could offer advice on my pronunciation, intonation, and emotional expression to help me convey the poem more effectively. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 16
(2026·安徽·三模)假定你是李华,还有一个月就要参加高考。请用英语给Mr. Victory写一封信,内容如下:
1.你的临考备考计划;
2.征求老师建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Victory,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Victory,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. With the college entrance exam drawing near in just a month, I’m writing to share my current revision plan and sincerely seek your valuable advice.
First, I will focus on consolidating core English vocabulary and reviewing my error notebooks to avoid repeating mistakes. Besides, I plan to tackle one reading comprehension task and a short writing exercise every day to keep my language skills polished. Finally, I’ll spend 30 minutes each morning reciting elegant sentences for my writing.
Could you please offer some tips on how to optimize my time allocation and effectively boost my reading speed? I would be truly grateful for your guidance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给老师Mr. Victory写信,说明高考考前一个月备考计划并征求建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
临近:draw near → approach
专心于:focus on → fix attention on
错题本:error notebook → wrong-question notebook
优化:optimize → refine
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Could you please offer some tips on how to optimize my time allocation and effectively boost my reading speed?
拓展句:I wonder if you could give me tips to improve my time‑management skills and speed up my reading efficiently.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】With the college entrance exam drawing near in just a month, I’m writing to share my current revision plan and sincerely seek your valuable advice.(运用了with引导的复合结构作伴随状语和动词不定式短语作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Besides, I plan to tackle one reading comprehension task and a short writing exercise every day to keep my language skills polished.(运用了过去分词作宾语补足语)
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