Unit 1 Nature in the balance 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（译林版）

高中 译林版·必修第三册 Unit 1 Nature in the balance写作精讲 Calling for the protection of animals(呼吁保护动物) Unit 1 Nature in the balance 单元：Unit 1 Nature in the balance|导作任务：Calling for the protection of animals(呼吁保护 动物) 审题 1话题：针对当前野生动物面临生存威胁的现状，撰写一封呼吁信/倡议书，号召大家行动起 来保护动物，维护生态平衡 2体裁：书信类应用文（呼吁信/倡议信） 3人称：以第一人称I/we为主，第二人称you用于呼吁读者行动 4时态：以一般现在时（陈述现状、道理）和一般将来时（表达期望）为核心时态 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6核心要点：点明写信目的（保护动物、生态平衡）→列出2-3条具体理由或措施→发出 强烈呼吁，表达期待与决心 二、文章结构 1开头段：礼貌问候+引出保护动物的紧迫性或重要性，点明写信目的（呼吁共 同行动) 2 主体段：分条阐述保护动物的原因或建议采取的措施，每条搭配合理例证或后 果， 用连接词过渡，逻辑层层递进 3 结尾段：再次呼吁行动，表达对未来生态环境美好的期待，收尾符合书信格式 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 balance n./N.平衡 extinction n.灭绝 endangered adj.濒危的 habitat n.栖息地 ecosystem n.生态系统 wildlife n.野生动物 threaten V.威胁 poaching n.偷猎 species n.物种（单复数同形） consequence n.后果 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be in danger of extinction 面临灭绝的危险 protect the habitat 保护栖息地 maintain the balance of nature 维持自然平衡 take immediate action 立即采取行动 raise public awareness 提高公众意识 call on sb.to do sth. 号召某人做某事 play a vital role in 在…中起至关重要的作用 live in harmony with 与.…和谐共处 3.基础造句 I am writing to call on everyone to protect wild animals. 我写信是为了号召大家保护野生动物。 2 Many species are on the verge of extinction due to human activities 由于人类活动，许多物种正濒临灭绝。 It is our duty to take action to protect their habitats. 采取行动保护它们的栖息地是我们的责任。 4 Only when we live in harmony with nature can we have a sustainable future. 只有当我们与自然和谐共处，我们中能拥有可持续的未来。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→of great significance/crucial/vital 普通】 causecontribute to lead to result in 普通 protect(preserve/safeguard 普通 many a large number of/a great variety of 普通 call onappeal to urge 加分句型 1It is high time that we took immediate measures to protect endangered animals. 到了我们立即采取措施保护濒危动物的时候了。（虚拟语气，that从句用过去式） 2 Not only do animals lose their habitats,but also the whole ecosystem is being destroyed. 动物不仅失去栖息地，整个生态系统也正在被破坏。（部分倒装） 3What we should do is to stop illegal hunting and raise people's awareness of wildlife protection. 我们应该做的是停止非法狩猎并提高人们的野生动物保护意识。（主语从句） Only by working together can we create a better world for both humans and animals. 只有共同努力，我们中能为人类和动物创造一个更美好的世界。（倒装句） 5 It is widely acknowledged that every species plays a unique role in the balance of nature 人们普逼认为每个物种在自然平衡中都扮演着独特的角色。（主语从句+被动语态） 五、写作模板 (100-120词) Dear friends fellow students /Sir or Madam, I am writing to appeal to everyone to protect wild animals.As we know, many species are now in danger of extinction because of habitat loss and illegal hunting. First of all,it is important to realize that every animal plays a vital role in the ecosystem.For example,bees help plants grow,and top predators keep the food chain balanced.Besides,we should stop buying products made from wild animals,such as ivory and fur.Last but not least,I strongly urge everyone to support wildlife protection organizations and spread the word about conservation. Let's take action now to preserve the balance of nature.I sincerely hope that our efforts can make a difference. Yours faithfully Li Hua 参考翻译： 亲爱的朋友们/同学们/尊敬的先生或女士： 我写信是呼吁大家保护野生动物。众所周知，由于栖息地丧失和非法捕猎，许多物种正面临灭绝的危 险。 首先，我们必须认识到每种动物都在生态系统中发挥着至关重要的作用。例如，蜜蜂帮助植物生长， 顶级捕食者保持食物链平衡。此外，我们应该停止购买由野生动物制成的产品，如象牙和皮毛。最后 但同样重要的是，我强烈敦促大家支持野生动物保护组织，并传播保护理念。 让我们立即采取行动，维护自然的平衡。我真诚希望我们的努力能有所改变。 此致， 李华 六、作文仿军(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你是李华，给校报投稿，写一封公开信呼吁全校师生保护本地野生 动物（如鸟类、青蛙等）。 Dear teachers and fellow students, I am writing to call on all of you to protect local wildlife,especially birds and frogs in our city.Their numbers are decreasing rapidly due to pollution and the loss of wetlands. First of all,we should stop throwing rubbish into rivers and ponds,as clean water is essential for their survival.Besides,it is a good idea to plant more trees and create green spaces,which can provide them with safe habitats.More importantly, I strongly advise everyone to learn more about local animals and share the knowledge with family and friends. Only by making joint efforts can we live in harmony with nature.Let's start from small actions and make our city a better home for all living creatures. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 参考译文： 亲爱的老师、同学们： 我写信是呼吁大家保护本地野生动物，尤其是我们城市里的鸟类和青蛙。由于污染和湿地减少，它们的数量正 在迅速下降。 首先，我们应该停止向河流和池塘扔垃圾，因为清洁的水对它们的生存至关重要。此外，多种树、多造绿地是 个好主意，可以为它们提供安全的栖息地。更重要的是，我强烈建议大家多了解本地动物，并与家人朋友分享 这些知识。 只有共同努力，我们守能与自然和谐共处。让我们从小事做起，让我们的城市成为所有生物更好的家园。 此致， 李华 囟教辅小提示 >写作时注意人称切换：开头多用I/we表明立场，呼吁部分多用you/everyone增强号召 力。 >情感递进：从“陈述现状”到“分析后果”再到“呼吁行动”，层层深入。 >用好倒装句和虚拟语气是得高分的关键，但要确保语法准确。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：呼吁保护野生动物（致朋友） Dear Li Hua, I'm writing to call on you to join me in protecting wild animals.Many species are endangered due to human activities,and it's time to take action. First of all,never buy products made from animal parts,such as ivory or fur, because it directly drives illegal hunting.Besides,you can volunteer in local wildlife protection groups,which helps raise public awareness.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to share information about endangered animals on social media,as it is beneficial to spreading the message. Let's work together to give them a safe home.I hope you will support this cause. Yours sincerely, Xiao Ming (词数：118) 范文二：呼吁保护海洋动物（致杂志社） Dear Editor, I am writing to appeal for the protection of marine animals.Ocean creatures like sea turtles and dolphins are suffering from plastic pollution and overfishing First of all,it is essential to reduce the use of single-use plastics,because they often end up in the sea and harm marine life.Besides,we should support laws that restrict fishing during breeding seasons,which can help populations recover.Last but not least,I strongly advise schools to include marine conservation in their curriculum,as it is beneficial to building a responsible younger generation. I hope our voices can bring about real change.For the sake of the ocean,let's act now. Yours faithfully, Wang Lei (词数：120)