Unit 2 Natural disasters 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（译林版）

高中 译林版·必修第三册 Unit2 Natural disasters导作精讲 Continuing a story about a flood(续写洪水相关的故事) Unit 2 Natural disasters 单元：Unit2 Natural disasters|写作在务：Continuing a story about a flood(续写洪水相关的故 事) 审题 1 话题：围绕洪水灾害展开故事续写，通常涉及洪水爆发、人物遭遇危险、救援行动、情感 变化或灾后感悟等。 2体裁：记叙文（做事续写），需与所给开头自然衔接，保持情节连贯、逻辑合理。 3人称：一般使用第-人称(IIwe)或第三人称(he/she/they),根据原文开头确定。 4时态：以一般过去时为主，辅以过去进行时（描写动作背景）、过去完成时（表示“过去的 过去”)、过去将来时（表示从过去看将要发生的事）。 5字数要求：高考续写通常为120-150词（部分题型要求150词左右），本文按120-150 词设计。 6 核心要点： >①与所给开头巧妙衔接，自然过渡； ,②情节发展合理（如逃生、救援、互助、等待救援等）； >③加入生动细节（环境描写、动作描写、心理描写）； >④明确结局（脱险、感悟或希望）； >⑤语言生动，体现故事性。 二、文章结构 开头段（衔接段）： >承上后下，用1-2句话连接所给开头。 ,可描写洪水当下的危急场景、人物所处位置、内心恐惧或瞬间反应。 2 主体段（发展段）： ,描述人物采取的行动（如抓住漂浮物、爬往高处、互相帮助、等待救援）。 ,加入环境变化（水位上涨、天空阴沉、风声雨声）烘托紧张气氖。 >展现情感转折（从绝望到希望，或从慌乱到冷静）。 >使用连接词使结构清晰：Then,Suddenly,Minutes later,Eventually等。 3 结尾段（结局段）： >交代故事的结局（被救、脱险、灾后场景）。 ,点明主题或感悟（生命的脆弱与坚强、人与自然的关系、团结互助的力量）。 〉语言含蓄有力，也可留下余味。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 flood n.洪水v.淹没 survivor n.幸存者 rescue n.v.救援；营救 current n.水流；趋势 drown V.溺死；淹没 float v.漂浮n.浮板 debris n.碎片；残骸 shelter n.避难所v.躲避 relief n.宽慰；减轻 panic n/N.恐慌 grateful adj.感激的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be caught in a flood 遭遇洪水 sweep away 冲走 cling to 紧紧抓住 rise rapidly 迅速上涨 call for help 呼救 pull sb.to safety 把某人拉到安全处 hold on to 坚持；抓住 breathe a sigh of relief 松了一口气 be trapped in 被困在.…中 make it 成功脱险 3.基础造句 The flood water rose rapidly,forcing us to climb onto the roof. 洪水迅速上涨，迫使我们爬上屋顶。 2I held on to a piece of wood,trying to stay afloat. 我抓住一块木头，努力保持漂浮。 3 Suddenly,I heard someone crying for help in the distance. 突然，我听到远处有人呼救。 4With great effort,the rescue team pulled us to safety. 救援队费了很大力气把我们拉到安全地带。 5We were finally safe,but the scene of the flood left us shocked and grateful. 我们终于安全了，但洪水的情景让我们既震惊又感激。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通very strong→extremely powerful 普通】 very quickly-at an alarming speed 普通 afraidterrified /frightened 普通 help→assist/rescue 普通】 finallyeventually at last 普通 look atstare at/gaze at 普通 say whisper shout/cry 加分句型 1独立主格结构 The rain pouring down,we could barely see the road ahead. 雨倾盆而下，我们几乎看不清前面的路。 2非谓语动词作状语 Hearing the roar of the flood,we rushed out of the house immediately. 听到洪水的轰鸣声，我们立刻冲出房子。 3倒装句 Only when we reached higher ground did we feel a sense of safety. 只有当我们到达高地时，亨感到一丝安全。 4虚拟语气 Had it not been for the rescue team,we would have been swept away. 要不是救援队，我们早就被冲走了。 5比喻与拟人 The flood was like a wild beast,swallowing everything in its path. 洪水像一头野兽，吞噬了沿途的一切。 6形容词+as/though倒装 Tired as we were,we kept moving forward. 虽然很累，但我们继续向前走。 五、写作模板(120-150词) [所给开头句] The rain had been falling for hours.Suddenly,the river burst its banks,and water rushed into our village. [续写] [衔接段] Panic spread through the village as the floodwater rose rapidly.My family climbed onto the roof,desperately hoping for rescue. [发展段] Minutes later,I spotted an old man trapped in his house,clinging to a window. Without hesitation,I swam towards him with a rope.The strong current almost pulled me away,but I managed to reach him and tied the rope around his waist. Together,we struggled back to my roof.The rain was still pouring,and the water kept rising,but we held on tightly,praying. [结尾段] Finally,a rescue boat appeared in the distance.Tears of relief streamed down our faces as we were lifted to safety.That night,I realized how fragile life is,but also how strong human kindness can be in times of disaster. 参考翻译： [所给开头句] 例如：雨已经下了好几个小时。突然，河水冲垮了堤岸，水涌进了我们的村庄。 [续写] [衔接段] 洪水迅速上涨，恐慌在村庄里蔓延。我们一家人爬上屋顶，拼命希望有人来救援。 [发展段] 几分钟后，我发现一位老人被困在屋里，紧紧抓着窗户。我毫不犹豫地带着绳子向他游去。强大的水 流几乎把我冲走，但我还是设法够到了他，把绳子系在他腰上。我们一起挣扎着回到了我家的屋顶。 雨仍在倾盆而下，水位不断上涨，但我们紧紧抓住，默默祈祷。 [结尾段] 终于，一艘救援船出现在远处。当我们被救上船时，如释重负的泪水顺着脸颊流下。那天晚上，我意 识到生命是多么脆弱，但在灾难面前，人性的善良又是多么强大。 六、作文仿写(120-150词) 仿写题目：下面是一篇洪水故事的开头，请根据提示续写故事。 【开头】That morning,the sky was unusually dark..By noon,the rain had turned into a storm.When my friend Tom and I were walking home,we saw water rushing down the street. [仿写范文] We quickly realized it was a flash flood.Before we could run,the water had already reached our knees and was rising fast. We grabbed each other's hands and struggled against the current.Suddenly,Tom slipped and fell into the deeper water.I screamed his name and jumped after him. The water was cold and powerful,almost drowning us.I managed to catch his arm and pulled him towards a nearby tree.We climbed onto a strong branch,wet and terrified."Hold on,Tom!Help is coming!"I shouted. Minutes later,a rescue team arrived in a rubber boat.They lifted us onto the boat and took us to a safe shelter.Sitting there,shaking and exhausted,we both knew that day would never be forgotten.It taught us the value of courage and friendship in the face of danger. 参考译文： 我们很快意识到这是一场山洪。还没来得及跑，水已经没到膝盖，而且还在快速上涨。 我们紧紧抓住彼此的手，与水流搏斗。突然，汤姆滑倒，掉进了更深的水中。我尖叫着他的名字，跟着跳了下 去。水又冷又猛，几乎把我们淹没。我设法抓住他的胳膊，把他拉向附近的一棵树。我们爬上一根粗壮的树 枝，浑身湿透，惊恐万分。“坚持住，汤姆！救援来了！”我大喊道。 几分钟后，一支救援队乘橡皮艇赶到。他们把我们抬上船，送到一个安全避难所。坐在那里，浑身发抖、精疲 力竭，我们俩都知道那一天永远不会被忘记。它教会了我们危险面前勇气和友谊的价值。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：续写洪水故事一一逃生与救援 Dear Mom and Dad, I'm writing to tell you what happened during the flood.As the water rose quickly, we had to climb onto the roof.The river roared and trees fell down around us Luckily,a rescue boat arrived and took us to a shelter. Now I'm safe and warm,but my heart still races when I think of that moment.I will never forget how neighbors helped each other pass down children and blankets. We are all waiting for the water to go down. Please don't worry about me.I'll call you again tomorrow. Yours sincerely, David 范文二：续写洪水故事一一 重建家园 Dear Lucy, I'm writing to share my experience after the flood.The water finally receded, leaving mud and broken furniture everywhere.Our village lost many houses,but we didn't lose hope. Volunteers arrived with food,clean water and shovels.We formed teams to clear the roads and help the elderly clean their homes.The sun came out and we dried our clothes on the fence.Everyone worked together,and laughter returned slowly. I believe we will rebuild soon.2 The flood took away things,but it gave us courage and friendship. Best wishes, Tom