Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（译林版）

高中 译林版·必修第一册 Unit4 Looking good,feeling good写作精讲 Expressing your opinion about plastic surgery(就整容手术表达你的观点) Unit 4 Looking good,feeling good 单元：Unit4 Looking good,feeling good写作在务：Expressing your opinion about plastic surgery(就整容手术表达你的观点) 审题 话题：针对“整容手术”这一社会现象，表达个人观点（赞成、反对或中立），并阐述理由。 2 体裁：议论文/观点表达类短文（非书信）。 3 人称：以第一人称I/We为主，也可用第三人称泛指people。. 4 时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（陈述观点、事实）。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词。 6 核心要点： >明确引出话题并表明自己的立场（赞成/反对/辩证看待） >给出2-3条理由（每条搭配简要解释或举例） 〉结尾总结观点，可适当呼吁或提出建议 文章结构 1开头段：引出“整容手术”这个话题→直接表明自己的总体观点（如：1am against it /I support it /I think it depends)o 2主体段：分条阐述理由，每条用连接词衔接(First of all/Besides/ Moreover/However).,逻辑清晰。 >若反对：理由可涉及健康风险、自然美的重要性、内在品质更持久等 ,若赞成：理由可涉及提升自信、弥补缺陷、个人选择自由等 >若中立：承认两面性，强调理性判断 3 结尾段：重申观点，或提出建议（如：Beauty comes from within/Think twice before surgery)o 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 plastic surgery 整容手术 appearance n.外貌；appearance-oriented外貌至上的 confidence n.自信；build up confidence建立自信 risk n.风险；health risk健康风险 inner beauty 内在美 self-esteem 自尊 permanent adj,永久的；temporary暂时的 unnecessary adj.不必要的 natural adj.自然的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 have a plastic surgery 做整容手术 improve one's appearance 改善外貌 take risks 冒风险 the pursuit of beauty 对美的追求 be satisfied with 对…满意 value inner beauty more 更看重内在美 短语 释义 change one's attitude 改变态度 in the long run 从长远来看 3.基础造句 1People have different opinions about plastic surgery. 人们对整容手术看法不同。 2 In my opinion,plastic surgery is not a good choice. 在我看来，整容手术不是一个好选择。 3First of all,it may cause serious health problems. 首先，它可能引起严重的健康问题。 4 Besides,we should learn to love ourselves as we are. 此外，我们应该学会爱本来的自己。 5 For those who have physical defects,surgery can bring confidence. 对于有身体缺陷的人来说，手术可以带来自信。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普a通Ithink→As far as'm concerned/From my perspective 普通important→of great significance/vital 普通】 badharmful damaging 普通 shouldought to be supposed to 加分句型 1 It is widely debated whether plastic surgery is beneficial or not. 人们广泛争论整容手术是否有益。（主语从句） 2There is no denying that one's appearance matters,but inner beauty matters more. 不可否认外貌重要，但内在美更重要。(There is no denying that..) Not only does plastic surgery involve potential risks,but it also may lead to addiction. 整容手术不仅有潜在风险，还可能让人上瘾。（部分倒装） 4Only when we accept ourselves completely can we truly feel good. 只有当我们完全接纳自己时，亨能真正感觉良好。（倒装句） 5 It is strongly recommended that we focus more on our health and personality than on looks. 强烈建议我们更多关注健康和性格而非外貌。（虚拟语气） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Plastic surgery has become a hot topic among young people.As for me,I am strongly against it. First of all,plastic surgery carries serious health risks,such as infections and side effects. Besides,it can never replace the beauty of being natural.Real beauty comes from confidence and kindness. Most importantly,we should value our inner qualities rather than spend money and time changing our appearance. To sum up,I believe that true beauty lies within.Instead of turning to surgery we should learn to appreciate ourselves as we are. 说明： 模板可根据立场调整为“赞成”或“中立”。 例如赞成版：开头改为I think plastic surgery can be helpful in some cases,理由写“提升自 信“弥补缺陷”等。 六、作文仿得 (120词左右) 仿写题目：就“整容手术”表达你的观点。请写一篇短文，内容包括： ,你对整容手术的态度（赞成/反对/中立） >2-3条理由 〉总结你的观点 范文（反对观点） Plastic surgery is becoming more common,especially among young people. In my opinion,it is not a wise choice. First of all,plastic surgery involves many risks,including pain,infection, and even permanent damage.Besides,focusing too much on appearance can be harmful to our mental health.We may become addicted to changing ourselves,never feeling satisfied.Most importantly what really matters is our inner beauty-being kind,honest and hardworking makes a person attractive,not a perfect face or body. To conclude,I believe true beauty comes from within.Instead of seeking surgery we should learn to accept and love ourselves naturally. (约120词) 范文解析： ~开头明确观点（反对） ~三条理由：健康风险、心理危害、内在美更重要 -结尾总结并提倡自爱 -使用了involving risks、be addicted to、what really matters is等高级结构o 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：表达对整容手术的支持（但强调理性） In my opinion,plastic surgery can be beneficial if it is chosen carefully.There are several reasons for my view. It helps people correct physical defects,such as a broken nose or scar from an accident.This can improve their quality of life. 2 It also boosts self-confidence for those who feel unhappy about certain features.When people look better,they often feel better. 3 However,it should not be taken lightly.One must choose a professional doctor and have realistic expectations. In short,plastic surgery is not wrong,but we should think twice before making a decision.Beauty is important,but health always comes first. (词数：115) 范文二：表达对整容手术的反对（强调自然美） I believe that plastic surgery is not necessary,and we should learn to accept our natural appearance.My reasons are as follows. First,it carries health risks,such as infection and recovery problems.Even a small operation can lead to unexpected troubles. 2 Second,it may cause mental pressure.People often become addicted to surgery,always wanting more changes. Third,true beauty comes from personality and kindness,not from perfect looks.We should spend time developing our inner qualities. Therefore,rather than changing our face,we should learn to love ourselves as we are.Confidence and happiness are more important than appearance. (词数：116)