内容正文:
高中
外研版·必修第三册
Unit1 Knowing me,knowing you写作精讲
Writing an essay(写文章/议论文)
Unit1 Knowing me,knowing you写作精讲一Writing an essay
(议论文)
单元:Unit1 Knowing me,knowing you|写作任务:写-篇议论文,表达对“认识自我与理解他人"的
看法
申题
1
话题:围绕自我认知(knowing yourself))与他人理解(understanding others).的关
系、
重要性或侧重点展开议论,表明个人立场并论证
2
体裁:议论文(argumentative essay)一一需具备明确论点、论据和结论
3人称:以第一人称I为主,表达个人观点;可适当使用w增强说服力
4
时态:以一般现在时为核心时态,用于陈述观点、事实和普逼道理
5
字数:高考标准100-120词(议论文可略长至130词,但须精炼)
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核心要点:
>清晰提出自己的观点(thesis statement)
>提供2-3个有说服力的论据(可分别对应“认识自我”和“理解他人"”)
>每个论据搭配简要解释或例子
>结尾总结观点,可升华或发出呼吁
二、
文章结构
开头段
>引出话题(常用背景句或问题)
>表明自己的立场(观点句)
>When it comes to whether knowing yourself or understanding others
matters more,I firmly believe that both are equally crucial for personal growth.
2
主体段
>段落一:论证认识自我(self-knowledge)的好处
,论点:self-knowledge helps identify strengths and weaknesses
>解释:thus we can set proper goals and improve ourselves
,段落二:论证理解他人的重要性
,论点:understanding others leads to better relationships
,解释:it builds trust,red uces conflict,.and promotes cooperation
>使用连接词:First of all,,Besides,Moreover,Last but not least等
3
结尾段
〉重申观点,可略作升华
>In conclusion,only by knowing ourselves and understanding others can we
truly live a balanced and meaningful life.
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
单词
词性
释义
self-knowledge
n.
自我认知
mutual understanding
n.
相互理解
personality
n.
个性;人格
relationship
n.
关系
benefit
v./n.
有益;益处
strength /weakness
n.
优点/缺点
harmony
n.
和谐
empathy
n.
同理心
reflect
V.
反思
balance
n./N.
平衡
2.常用短语
短语
释义
know yourself inside out
彻底了解自己
put yo urself in someone else's shoes
换位思考
build harmonious relationships
建立和谐关系
gain a deeper insight into...
对.有更深的理解
play a vital role in ..
在.…中起重要作用
on the one hand...on the other hand...
一方面..另一方面…
it is widely acknowledged that...
人们普逼认为…
3.基础造句
Knowing yourself can help you make wiser decisions.
认识自我能帮助你做出更明智的决定。
2 Understanding others enables you to get along well with different people.
理解他人能让你与不同的人友好相处。
3First of all,self-knowledge allows you to set realistic goals.
首先,自我认知让你设定现实的目标。
4
Besides,empathy is beneficial for reducing misunderstandings.
此外,同理心有利于减少误解。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通I think→From my perspective/As far as I am concerned
普通】
very importantof great significance/essential vital
普通】
helpfulbeneficial rewarding conducive to
普通
for examplefor instance /take...as an example
加分句型
1 It is universally acknowledged that knowing yourself is the first step towards
success.
人们普逼认为,认识自己是迈向成功的第一步。(主语从句)
2 Not only does self-knowledge help you face your weaknesses,but it also
encourages you to develop your strengths.
认识自我不仅能帮你面对弱点,还能促使你发展优点。(部分倒装)
Only by putting ourselves in others'shoes can we truly achieve mutual
understanding.
只有换位思考,我们扌能真正实现相互理解。(倒装句)
The more you understand others,the better you will be able to cooperate with
them.
你越理解他人,就越能与之合作。(the more.,the more..结构)
5It is highly recommended that everyone should spend time reflecting on their
own behavior.
强烈建议每个人都花时间反思自己的行为。(虚拟语气)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
注意:以下模板适用于“观点类”议论文,可灵活替换主题词。
Title(标题,可省略):Knowing Yourself and Understanding Others
Paragraph 1-Introduction
When it comes to the question whether we should focus on knowing ourselves or
understanding others,I hold the view that both are equally important.Without
self-knowledge,we cannot improve;without understanding others,we cannot
connect.
Paragraph 2-Body
First of all,knowing yourself helps you recognize your strengths and weaknesses.
For instance,if you know you are weak in time management,you can make a plan
to improve.Besides,understanding others is essential for building good
relationships.It enables you to communicate effectively and avoid unnecessary
conflicts.
Paragraph 3 Conclusion
In a word,self knowledge and empathy work together.Only by combining them
can we grow into a better person and live in harmony with those around us.
(约105词)
六、文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:你校英语报正在举办“成长与交往”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文,谈
谈认识自我和了解他人对青少年成长的重要性,并表达你的观点。
Knowing Yourself and Understanding Others
As teenagers,we often struggle with who we are and how to get along with others.
From my perspective,both knowing yourself and understanding others are vital for
our growth.
First of all,self-knowledge enables us to discover our true interests and abilities.
When we know what we are good at,we can set clear goals and work towards
them.Besides,understanding others helps us build genuine friendships.By
listening and showing empathy,we can avoid misunderstandings and create a
supportive environment.
In short,the two skills go hand in hand.Only by balancing self-reflection and
empathy can we become mature individuals and enjoy a harmonious social life
(约120词)
★写作小贴士
>议论文不要只罗列观点,每个论点后都要有解释或例子支撑
>善用连接词(First of all,Moreover,Therefore,In conclusion)使逻辑请晰
>结尾可以呼应开头,或提出建议呼吁,增强感染力
>控制在100-130词之间,避免啰嗦
拓展范文背诵积累
以下是两篇符合要求的拓展范文,严格遵循建议信模板,篇幅控制在105-120词,难度适配高中外研版必
修第三册及高考写作水平。
范文一:建议朋友克服考试焦虑
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you often feel anxious before exams.I'm writing to offer you
some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a study plan one week ahead,because it can
help you review systematically and reduce nervousness.Besides,you should take
deep breaths before the exam,which can calm you down and improve
concentration.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to have enough sleep the
night before,as it is beneficial to keeping a clear mind.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.I'm sure you will do well.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议同学提高英语写作
Dear Lucy,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on improving English writing.I'd
like to share some practical tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to read model essays every day,because it helps you
learn sentence patterns and structure.Besides,you should practice writing a short
paragraph each evening,which can develop your writing habit.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to ask your teacher to check your work,as it is beneficial to
correcting mistakes and making progress.
I hope my advice will be of great use.I'm looking forward to your improvement.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei