Unit 5 On the road 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第二册 Unit5 On the road写作精讲 Writing a postcard(写明信片) Unit5 On the road写作精讲 单元：Unit5 On the road|写作任务：Writing a postcard(写明信片)一-给朋友或家人写一张明信 片，分享你在旅途中的所见所闻、感受与经历。 审题 1 话题：以第一人称视角，从旅途中的地点出发，分享沿途的风景、活动、当地文化或个人 感受。 2 体裁：明信片一一一种简短、亲切、非正式的书信写作，有固定格式（收件人地址、称 呼、正文、署名)。 ★注意：明信片通常写在卡片背面右侧（正文字数受限），而左侧写地址。正文一般80-100词即可。 3人称：以第一人称IWe为主，直接与收信人you对话。 4 时态： >描述所见所感→一般现在时、现在完成时 〉表达对活动的分享→一般现在时 >对未来的计划→一般将来时 5 字数：高考简短写作约80-100词（明信片一般不超过120词）。 6 核心要点： >写明寄出地点（寄自何处） >描述旅程亮点（风景、活动、文化、食物等） ,表达旅行感受 ,简单的问候与结尾（如wish you were here) 二入 文章结构 1开头段（问候+地点背景）：称呼(Dear);写明所在位置（例如： Greetings from Beijing!/Having a wonderful time in...) 2主体段（分享所见与经历）：描述1-2个最难忘的景点或活动；可加入感官描写 (看到的、听到的、尝到的)；适当抒发个人感受(amazed,excited,moved.) 3 结尾段（表达心情+问候+署名）：表达思念(Wish you were here../Miss you guys.);简单祝福或计划(Can't wait to tell you more when I get back.);署名(our friend.,/Love,+Name) 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 postcard n.明信片 destination n.目的地 journey n.旅程 sightseeing n.观光 landscape n.风景 culture n.文化 local adj.当地的 experience n./v.体验 breathtaking adj.令人屏息的 unforgettable adj.难忘的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 send a postcard from... 从.寄出明信片 have a wonderful time 玩得很开心 短语 释义 take in the breathtaking view 欣赏合人惊叹的景色 be amazed by 被…所震撼 can't help doing sth. 忍不住做某事 share with you 与你分享 It reminds me of... 让我想起… be rich in history 富含历史底蕴 3.基础造句 1 Greetings from Beijing,the capital of China! 来自中国首都北京的问候！ 2 I'm having a wonderful time travelling along the coast. 我正在沿海旅行，玩得非常开心。 3 The sunrise over the mountains was absolutely breathtaking. 山顶的日出简直美得合人屏息。 4I can't wait to show you my photos when I return. 我等不及回来后给你看我的照片。 Wish you were here! 真希望你也在！ 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通】 bea utifulpicturesque breathtaking stunning 普通interesting→fascinating/impressive 普通 very muchtruly absolutely 普通 come backreturn be back 加分句型 1 There is no better place than...to enjoy nature 没有比更适合享受自然的地方了。如：There is no better place than the seaside to relax and enjoy the sea breeze. 2 Having spent the whole morning hiking,I can now see why it is called... 经过一整个上午的徒步，我终于明白为什么它被称为.…（现在分词短语作时间状语，体现经历与感悟结 合) 3 Not only am I amazed by the scenery,but I'm also impressed by the local culture. 我不仅被风景震撼，也被当地文化所打动。（倒装句“Not only..but also..”提升语言层次） 4What impressed me most was the kindness of the people I met along the way. 最合我印象深刻的是沿途遇到的当地人的热情友善。（主语从句“What im pressed me most'增加结构 多样性) 5 I have fallen in love with this charming city and its rich history. 我已经爱上了这座充满魅力的城市及其深厚的历史底蕴。（现在完成时+高级形容词） 五、写作模板(90-110词) Dear Greetings from I'm having an amazing time here. The highlight of my trip so far has been_ Not only,but also I have tried which is truly Wish you were here.I can't wait to share more with you when I'm back! Yours,/Love,Your friend, 参考翻译： 亲爱的 来自 的问候！我在这里玩得很开心。 到目前为止，此行最精彩的是 。不仅 而且 我尝了 ，确实非常 真希望你也在！等回来一定再和你分享更多！ 你的朋友/爱你的/你的朋友， 六、 作文仿得(100词左右) 仿写题目：假设你在云南丽江旅游，请你给好朋友o写一张明信片，分享你的旅 程见闻与感受。 Dear Tom, Greetings from Lijiang,a beautiful old town in Yunnan!I'm having an unforgettable time here. The highlight so far has been the Old Town-not only are the ancient buildings charming,but also the narrow cobblestone streets are full of life.I also tried the local rice noodles,which were absolutely delicious. What impresses me most is the friendly atmosphere and the music played by local artists on the street.I have fallen in love with this peaceful yet lively place. Wish you were here!Can't wait to tell you more when I get back. Your friend, Li Hua 参考译文： 亲爱的汤姆： 来自云南丽江一 一一座美丽的古城一一的问候！我在这里度过了一段难忘的时光。 到目前为止，最精彩的是丽江古城一一不仅古建筑迷人，狭窄的鹅卵石街道也充满生机。我还品尝了当地的米 线，味道真是棒极了。 最合我印象深刻的是这里友好的氛围和街头艺人的音乐。我已经爱上了这个宁静而充满活力的地方。 真希望你也在！等我回来，再和你说更多！ 你的朋友， 李华 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议同学克服考试焦虑 Dear Mike I am sorry to hear that you feel nervous before exams.I am writing to offer you some helpful suggestions. First of all,it is a good idea to make a study schedule,because it helps you manage time and reduce anxiety.Besides,you should take deep breaths before exams, which can calm your mind and improve focus.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep,as it is beneficial to keeping a clear head and remembering knowledge. I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you will overcome the anxiety and perform well. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (109词) 范文二：建议同学提高英语写作能力 Dear Lucy, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on improving English writing.I'd like to share some practical tips. First of all,it is a good idea to read English articles daily,because it helps you learn sentence structures and useful vocabulary.Besides,you should practice writing short paragraphs every week,which can improve your logic and expression.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to ask a teacher to check your writing,as it is beneficial to correcting mistakes and strengthening weak points. I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your progress. Yours sincerely, Wang Fang (110词)