Unit 1 A new start 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第一册 Unit1 A new start写作精讲 Writing a journal entry(写日记) Unit 1 A new start 单元：Unit 1A new start写作任务：Writing a journal entry(写日记) 审题 1 话题：记录高中新生活的第一天（或初入校园的某一天），表达个人感受、见闻与反思 2 体裁：日记（非正式记叙文） 3 人称：以第一人称|贯穿全文 4 时态： ,描述当天发生的事情→一般过去时 >表达内心感受/想法→一般现在时（或过去时均可） 5 字数要求：高考标准80-120词（日记可略灵活，但应控制在80-150词） 6 核心要点： >写明日期、天气（日记格式） ,记述当天印象最深的一件事（或几件事） >加入自己的心理活动、感受或反思 >结尾可表达对未来的期待或小小感悟 二 文章结构 1开头：日期+天气（如Monday,1 September一Sunny)+引出当天主题 (如“今天是我高中生活的第一天”) 2 主体： ,叙述具体经历（如见新老师、新同学、新教室、开学典礼） >穿插情绪变化（紧张→兴奋，迷茫→坚定） >可加入对话、细节描写，增强画面感 3结尾：总结当天的收获或感悟，表达对未来的期待 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 profile n.简介；人物简介 freshman n.新生 campus n.校园 nervous adj.紧张的 excited adj.兴奋的 curious adj.好奇的 impression n.印象 experience n.经历 challenge n挑战 expectation n.期待 2.常用短语 短语 释义 the first day of high school 高中的第一天 step into the classroom 走进教室 make a good impression 留下好印象 feel a mix of excitement and nervousness 感到既兴奋又紧张 have butterflies in one's stomach 心七上入下 be filled with hope 充满希望 短语 释义 look forward to 期待 leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象 3.基础造句 1 Today was my first day at senior high school. 今天是我上高中的第一天。 2 I felt a bit nervous when I walked into the classroom. 当我走进教室时，我感到有点紧张。 3 Our head teacher gave us a warm welcome and introduced the school rules. 我们的班主任热情欢迎了我们，并介绍了校规。 4I hope I can make new friends and enjoy my high school life. 我希望我能交到新朋友，享受高中生活。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通happy→delighted/thrilled 普通 nervous anxious uneasy 普通 important(significant/meaningful 普通 beginembark on/set out on 加分句型 1What impressed me most was that... 最让我印象深刻的是..（主语从句） What impressed me most was that our teacher led us to sing together. 2 Not only did I feel nervous,but I also felt excited. 我不仅感到紧张，而且还很兴奋。（部分倒装） 3 Hardly had I entered the classroom when the bell rang. 我刚进教室铃就响了。(HardIy...when.倒装句) It was the first time that I had experienced such a warm atmosphere. 这是我第一次体验到如此温暖的氛围。（固定句型） 5Looking back on this day,I realize that a new start means new possibilities. 回望这一天，我意识到一个新的开始意味着新的可能性。（现在分词作状语+宾语从句） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Monday,1 September -Sunny Today was my first day at senior high school,and it left a deep impression on me. In the morning,I felt a bit nervous when I entered the school gate.However,the friendly smile of my head teacher quickly put me at ease.During the class meeting, we introduced ourselves and I made my first new friend,Li Hua.What impressed me most was the speech given by our principal-he encouraged us to embrace challenges and never give up. After school,I walked around the campus.Everything seemed fresh and full of energy.I am already looking forward to the days ahead. I believe this new start will be a wonderful journey. 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你是高一新生李华，请写一篇日记，记录你高中第一天的经历和感 受。（何参考模板，但需换具体内容，如第一节英语课、加入社团等） Tuesday,2 September-Cloudy Today was my second day of high school,but it felt even more meaningful than the first. The most unforgettable part was our English class.The teacher,Ms Wang,asked us to read a poem aloud.At first I was too shy to speak,but she smiled and said, "Don't be afraid-your voice matters."Encouraged by her,I stood up and read.To my surprise,my classmates applauded warmly. After class,I decided to join the English Drama Club.I hope I can become braver step by step. This day taught me a valuable lesson:a new start is a chance to grow.I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议好友克服对新学校的紧张感 Dear Mike, I heard that you feel nervous about the new school.Don't worry-I'd like to give you some helpful advice. First of all,it is a good idea to join a club or a sports team,because it helps you make new friends and find common interests.Besides,you should walk around the campus before classes start,which can make the environment familiar.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to smile and say hello to classmates,as it is beneficial to starting conversations and building confidence. I hope my suggestions will make your transition easier.I believe you will enjoy your new school soon! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文二：建议同学提高英语阅读能力 Dear Wang Fang, I am glad to receive your letter asking how to improve English reading.Here are my practical tips. First of all,it is a good idea to read short news articles every day,because they introduce current topics and useful vocabulary.Besides,you should keep a reading notebook,which can help you record new words and sentence patterns.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to discuss what you read with a partner,as it is beneficial to deepening understanding and sharing ideas. I hope my advice will be of great help.I am looking forward to your progress. Yours sincerely, Chen Wei