Unit 5 The Value of Money 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（人教版）

高中人教版·必修三 Unit5 The Value of Money写作精讲 A play script of a scene from The Million Pound Bank Note(《百万英镑》某一幕的剧本) Unit5 The Value of Money写作精讲 单元：Unit5 The Value of Money写作在务：A play script of a scene from The Million Pound Bank Note(《百万英镑》某一幕的剧本) 审题 1 话题：根据《百万英镑》故事情节，选取某一幕（如餐馆用餐、裁缝店买衣、与朋友对话 等) 进行剧本创作，通过人物对话展现金钱对人们态度的巨大影响，体现“金钱的价值”这一主 题。 2体裁：剧本(play script)一一需包括场景设定、人物对白、舞台说明（括号内描述动 作、表情、语气等)。 3人称：以剧中人物角色身份进行对话，第一人称(we)及第二人称(you)在台词中自 然出现；舞台说明用第三人称。 4时态：对话中一般使用一般现在时、现在进行时、一般将来时、现在完成时；舞台说明用 一般现在时（描述当下动作）。 5 篇幅要求：约120-150词（高考剧本类应用文常见长度），含场景、对白、舞台说明。 6 核心要点： >设置清晰场景（时间、地点、人物） ,人物对话推动情节发展，反映金钱带来的态度转变 〉至少包含1-2处舞台说明（动作、表情等） 〉结尾体现戏剧冲突或主题升华 二、文章结构 1 开头：场景设定(Setting) >明确：时间(Scene:.…)、地点(At.)、人物（(Characters:.…) ,可加简短背景描述（可选） 2 主体：人物对话与舞台说明 〉人物对白并行排列，人物名在前，冒号后接台词 >括号内写明动作、语气、表情等舞台说明 >对话节奏紧凑，通过语言对比展现金钱带来的态度变化 ,可适当加入内心独白或旁白（注意格式） 3 结尾：情节收束/高潮或讽刺点 >通常在服务员/店主得知主角有百万英镑后态度突变，或主角用幽默/讽刺话语回应 >留下余味，反映主题 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇（与小说及金钱主题相关) 词汇 词性 释义 fortune n. 巨款；财富 bank note n. 钞票 gentleman n. 绅士；上等人 servant n. 仆人 treat V 对待；款待n.款待 rude adj. 粗鲁的 polite adj. 有礼貌的 shocked adj. 震惊的 astonished adj. 惊讶的 wealthy adj. 富有的 poor adj. 贫穷的 词汇 词性 释义 cheat . 欺骗 realize 意识到 count 女 数；认为重要 2.常用短语 短语 释义 point at sb/sth 指着某人/某物 stare at sb 盯着某人看 in surprise 惊讶地 in a rude tone 用粗鲁的语气 change one's attitude 改变态度 turn sb down 拒绝某人 show respect to sb 对某人表示尊重 put on airs 摆架子 in disbelief 难以置信地 beg for forgiveness 请求原谅 3.基础造句（剧本常用表达） 1Scene:At a restaurant.Characters:Henry(the poor young man),Waiter, Owner. 场景：在一家餐馆。人物：亨利（穷困的年轻人），服务员，老板。 2Henry (looking at the menu worriedly):I'm afraid I can't afford much. 亨利（担忧地看着菜单）：恐怕我点不了太多。 Waiter(impatiently):Stop wasting my time.We don't serve beggars here. 服务员（不耐烦地）：别浪费我的时间。我们这里不招待乞丐。 4Owner(after seeing the million-pound note,bowing):Oh,my dear sir!How foolish of me!Please have a seat. 老板（看到百万英镑钞票后，鞠躬）：哦，我亲爱的先生！我太愚蠢了！请坐。 5 Henry (calmly):Just some bread and water,please. 亨利（平静地）：只要一些面包和水，谢谢。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通very surprised→astonished/dumbfounded 普通 rude-impolite disrespectful 普通】 q uickly(instantly immediately 普通 happy delighted overjoyed 普通 show→display/reveal 普通 change→transform 加分句型 1Seeing the note,the owner immediately changed his tone. 看到钞票，老板立刻改变了语气。（现在分词作状语，表时间/原因） 2)Not only did the waiter refuse to serve him,but he also laughed at his shabby clothes. 服务员不仅拒绝招待他，还嘲笑他破旧的衣服。（部分倒装：Not only.butalso…) 3 It was not until Henry showed the million-pound note that the owner started to bow and apologize. 直到亨利展示百万钞票，老板扌开始鞠躬道歉。（强调句型：It was not until.that.) Had the owner known Henry had a million-pound note,he would never have treated him so rudely. 如果老板知道亨利有一张百万英镑钞票，他绝不会那么粗鲁地对待他。（虚拟语气省略f的倒装：Had+主 语+过去分词) 5Only after seeing the note did the waiter realize his terrible mistake. 只有在看到钞票后，服务员扌意识到他可怕的错误。(Oy+状语置于句首引起部分倒装) 五、写作模板(120-150词) Scene:At a tailor's shop Characters:Henry (a poor young man),Clerk,Manager Setting:Henry enters the shop in shabby clothes.The clerk looks down on him. Clerk(sneering):Look at your clothes!I don't think you can afford anything here. Henry(calmly):I'd just like to buy a simple suit. Clerk (impatiently):We don't serve poor men.Leave now. Henry(taking out the note):Perhaps this will change your mind. (Seeing the million-pound note,the clerk's eyes widen in shock.) Manager (rushing over,bowing):My sincere apologies,sir!Please,take the best suit in the shop-for free! Henry(smiling):I only want to pay a fair price.But your attitude...has told me a lot about money. Manager (embarrassed):I...I didn't mean to... Henry(leaving):Remember,a gentleman is not judged by his money,but by his character. 六、 作文仿军（约130词） 仿写要求：选取《百万英镑》中“在餐馆用餐"的一幕，写一段剧本，体现服务员从 轻视到敬重的态度转变，并加入舞台说明。 Sample: Scene:A small restaurant.Afternoon. Characters:Henry (a poor-looking young man),Waiter,Owner Waiter(pointing at Henry's old coat):Hey,you!You can't sit here.Go find some cheap food stall! Henry(calmly):I have money.Please just bring me bread and a glass of water. Waiter(rolling his eyes):Fine.But don't waste my time. (Henry finishes his meal and takes out a million-pound note to pay.) Waiter(staring in disbelief):Is...is that real?Sir,please wait a moment! (He rushes to call the owner.) Owner (hurrying over,bowing deeply):Oh,my dear young gentleman!Please forgive my rude waiter!How about a grand feast-on the house! Henry(standing up,smiling politely):Thank you,but I've already had enough. Your generosity seems to depend on the size of my note,not my need. (Henry leaves the note on the table and walks away,leaving the owner speechless. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议同学适应高中生活 Dear Li Ming, I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to senior high school life. Here are some tips for you. First of all,it is a good idea to make a study plan,because it helps you manage time and reduce anxiety. Besides,you should join a club you are interested in,which can help you make new friends and relax. Last but not least,I strongly advise you to keep a positive attitude,as it is beneficial to overcoming difficulties and building confidence. I hope my advice will be useful.I believe you will adapt soon. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (Word count:108) 范文二：建议同学克服考试焦虑 Dear Wang Fang, I'm glad to hear from you.I understand your anxiety before the exam.Here are some suggestions. First of all,it is a good idea to review in groups,because discussing with classmates helps clarify key points. Besides,you should take deep breaths before the test,which can calm your nerves and improve focus. Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep the night before,as it is beneficial to memory and thinking. I hope my advice will help you.Wish you success in the exam! Yours sincerely, Li Wei (Word count:112)