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高中人教版·必修三
Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations写作精讲
A narrative essay about a festival or celebration experience(关于节日或庆祝经历的记叙文)
Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations写作精讲
写作任务:A narrative essay about a festival or celebration experience(关于节日或庆祝经历的记
叙文)
审题
1
话题:描述一次亲身经历的节日或庆祝活动,包括活动的准备、过程、个人感受和感悟。
2
体裁:记叙文(narrative essay)一一以时间顺序叙述事件,注重细节描写和情感表达。
3
人称:以第一人称|为主,使叙述真实亲切;可适当穿插we体现集体氛围。
4
时态:以一般过去时为核心时态(描述事件经过);必要时使用过去进行时(描写背景动
作)和过去完成时(交代前因)。
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词(也可根据题目要求适当延伸)。
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核心要点:
交代节日/庆祝活动的背景(时间、地点、人物、缘由)
√详细描述活动过程中的1-2个关键场景(运用感官细节:视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、
触觉)
√表达个人感受、收获或文化理解(结尾点题,升华意义)
文章结构
1
开头段(背景引入)
〉点明节日名称、时间或场合,营造氛围。
>用1-2句引出“我”参与的经历,吸引读者兴趣。
2
主体段(过程叙述)
>按时间顺序展开(before→during→after)。
〉集中描写一个高潮场面(如烟花绽放、全家包饺子、舞龙舞狮)。
>运用感官描写和动作描写,让画面生动。
>可加入对话或心理活动,增强真实感。
3
结尾段(感悟总结)
〉表达心情(快乐、感动、自豪等)。
,点明节日背后的文化内涵或个人成长意义。
>简短收束,余韵悠长。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
festival
n.节日
celebration
n.庆祝;庆祝活动
tradition
n.传统
atmosphere
n.气氛;氛围
decorate
V.装饰
ceremony
n.仪式
gather
V.聚集
feast
n.盛宴;v.享用
custom
n.习俗
reunion
n.团聚
2.常用短语
短语
释义
take place
发生;举行
短语
释义
be crowded with
挤满.…
in high spirits
情绪高涨
light up
点亮;照亮
burst into la ug hter
突然大笑
share...with...
与…分享…
look forward to
期待
remind...of...
使..想起…
fill...with joy
充满欢乐
3.基础造句
1
The festival took place on the first day of the lunar new year.
这个节日在农历新年的第一天举行。
2 We decorated the house with red lanterns and couplets.
我们用红灯笼和春联装饰了房子。
3
The whole family gathered around the table,enjoying the big feast.
全家人围坐在桌旁,享用着丰盛的宴席。
4
I felt a strong sense of belonging when I joined the celebration.
当我加入庆祝活动时,我感受到强烈的归属感。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通
bea utifulmagnificent/breathtaking
普通
happy delighted thrilled overjoyed
普通
big grand splendid massive
普通
very(extremely incredibly
普通
remembercherish /recall vividly
加分句型
1分词作状语(描写背景)
Decorated with colorful lights,the whole street looked like a fairyland.
整条街被彩灯装饰,宛如仙境。
2独立主格结构(增强画面感)
Fireworks exploding in the sky,we cheered and clapped.
烟花在空中绽放,我们欢呼鼓掌。
3倒装句(强调心情)
Never had I felt so proud of my culture.
我从未对自己的文化如此自豪过。(否定词提前半倒装)
4定语从句(补充细节)
The moment when the clock struck twelve,everyone hugged each other.
当时钟敲响十二点时,大家互相拥抱。
5with复合结构
With the delicious smell of dumplings filling the room,I knew it was time for
dinner.
随着饺子香弥漫整个房间,我知道该吃晚饭了。
五、写作模板(100-120词)
题目:请以"“An Unforgettable Festival'"为题,写一篇记叙文。
An Unforgettable Festival
Last Spring Festival,I spent a memorable night with my family in our hometown.
The evening began with a big family dinner,where everyone shared stories and
laughter.After the meal,we went outside to set off fireworks.The sky was lit up by
colorful sparks,and the sound of cracking filled the air.I stood there,watching the
dazzling display,feeling a warm sense of happiness.
Later,we sat together watching the Spring Festival Gala,with my grandma telling
me the old traditions behind each custom.That night,I not only enjoyed the festive
joy but also deeply understood the value of family reunion.
Never had I realized how precious our traditions are.This Spring Festival will stay
in my heart forever.
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:写一篇记叙文,描述你参加的一次中秋节庆祝活动。
A Sweet Mid-Autumn Festival
Last Mid-Autumn Festival,I returned to my grandparents'village to celebrate the
reunion.
In the afternoon,the whole family gathered in the yard to make mooncakes.I
helped knead the dough and fill it with red bean paste.Grandma taught me to
press the mold firmly,and soon we had a tray of beautifully patterned cakes.That
evening,we sat under the full moon,eating the mooncakes and drinking hot tea.
Grandpa told the story of Chang'e flying to the moon,and I listened,fascinated.
As the moonlight poured silver on our faces,I felt a deep connection with my
family and our culture.The simple joy of sharing homemade mooncakes under the
same moon made this Mid-Autumn Festival truly special.
注意:
仿写时,可将“Spring Festival"替换为“Mid-Autumn Festival”,并调整具体活动(如放烟花→做月饼、
看春晚→听传说),保持记叙文的叙事逻辑和情感升华。
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:难忘的春节
Last Spring Festival,I experienced the most unforgettable moment of the year.On
New Year's Eve,my whole family gathered in the kitchen to make dumplings.
Grandma taught me how to fold the edges neatly.At midnight,we went outside to
set off fireworks.The sky burst into colorful flowers,and everyone cheered.Then
Grandpa handed me a red envelope with a warm blessing.That night,I felt the
true meaning of reunion:not just food or fireworks,but the love shared together.It
was a simple yet precious celebration deep in my heart.
(115 words)
范文二:温暖的中秋节
Last Mid-Autumn Festival,I celebrated with my grandparents in the countryside.
After dinner,we carried a small table to the yard.Mooncakes,pomelos,and tea
were laid out.The moon was round and bright,like a silver plate hanging in the
sky.Grandpa told me the story of Chang'e,and Grandma pointed out the shadows
on the moon.Then we each picked a mooncake and made a wish.The breeze was
cool,but their smiles warmed me.That night,I truly understood why Chinese
people value family reunion so much.
(108 words)