Unit 5 Music 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（人教版）

高中人教版·必修三 Unit5 Music写作精讲 A speech about how music can change a person's life(关于音乐如何改变人生的演讲) Unit5 Music写作精讲 单元：Unit5 Music|写作任务：A speech about how music can change a person's life(关于音 乐如何改变人生的演讲) 审题 1话题：以音乐为主题，论述音乐如何对个人产生积极影响，改变人生轨迹。需结合具体事 例或感受，体现音乐的力量。 2体裁：演讲词(speech)一一面向听众的口头表达，需有开场问候、正文论述、结尾呼吁 或总结。 3人称：以第一人称！（演讲者）为主，可穿插第二人称y0u(听众)拉近距离，必要时用第 三人称举例。 4 时态：一般现在时（阐述普逼事实观点）、一般过去时（讲述自身或他人经历）、一般将来 时（表达未来愿景或号召）。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词（演讲可略长，但不宜超过150词）。 6 核心要点： >点明演讲主题（音乐如何改变人生）； >给出具体论点（至少2点，如带来慰藉、激发动力、连接他人）； >结合个人或他人经历佐证； >结尾发出呼吁或升华主题。 二、 文章结构 I开场段（问候+引入主题）：向听众问好(Good morning,everyone!/Ladies and gentlemen,.…);引出话题：音乐在生活中的重要性；表明演讲目的：分享音 乐如何改变一个人的人生。 2 主体段（分点论述+例证）： >论点一：音乐带来情感慰藉（如：困难时期听歌疗愈）； ,论点二：音乐激发勇气与动力（如：一首歌促使自己坚持梦想）； 〉可补充论点三：音乐连接人与世界（如：通过音乐结识朋友、理解不同文化）； >每个论点配简洁故事或感受。 3结尾段（总结+号召）：重申音乐的力量；呼吁听众重视音乐、用心感受音乐； 以有力句子收尾（如：Let music light up your life!)。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释 melody n.旋律 rhythm n.节奏 emotion n.情感 inspire v.激励；inspiration n.灵感 comfort v./n.安慰；舒适 heal v.治愈；healing adj..治愈的 overcome v.克服 power n.力量；powerful adj..强大的 lift V.提升；振奋 transform v.改变；transformation n.转变 2.常用短语 短语 释义 have a deep impact on 对.…有深远影响 cheer sb.up 使某人振作起来 fill sb.with hope 使某人充满希望 get thro ugh tough times 度过艰难时期 find strength in music 从音乐中找到力量 touch one's heart 触动某人的心 make a difference 带来改变 language of the soul 灵魂的语言 3.基础造句 1 Music has the power to change our mood and even our life. 音乐有能力改变我们的情绪甚至人生。 2 Whenever I feel down,listening to my favorite song always cheers me up. 每当我情绪低落，听我最喜欢的歌总能让我振作。 3 It was a piece of music that helped me get through the hardest days 正是一首曲子帮助我度过了最艰难的日子。 4 Music can connect people from different cultures and backgrounds. 音乐能连接来自不同文化和背景的人。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→significant/vital 普通change→transform/reshape 普通 help→assist/enable 普通 make sb.happybring sb.joy lift sb.'s spirits 加分句型 1What amazes me most is that music can speak to our hearts without using any words. 最合我惊奇的是，音乐无需言语就能与我们的心灵对话。（主语从句） 2 It is through music that I learned to face challenges bravely. 正是通过音乐，我学会了勇敢面对挑战。（强调句型） 3 Not only does music relieve stress,but it also fills us with hope. 音乐不仅缓解压力，还让我们充满希望。（部分倒装） Whenever I felt lost,there was always a song guiding me like a light in the dark. 每当我感到迷茫，总有一首歌像黑暗中的光一样指引我。（比喻+定语从句） 5 If it weren't for music,I would never have become the person I am today. 如果没有音乐，我永远不会成为今天的我。（虚拟语气） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Good morning,everyone!Today I'd like to share with you how music can change a person's life. First of all,music can comfort us when we are sad.For example,when I failed an important exam,a soft piano piece helped me relax and regain confidence.Besides,music inspires us to move forward.The song "Dream It Possible"always reminds me to keep trying.Last but not least,music connects people.It allows us to understand different cultures and makes the world smaller. In conclusion,music is more than just sound.It is a healer,a motivator, and a bridge.Let's open our hearts to music and let it light up our lives! Thank you. 参考翻译： 大家早上好！今天我想和大家分享音乐如何改变一个人的人生。 首先，音乐能在我们悲伤时给予安慰。例如，当我重要考试失利时，一首柔和的钢琴曲帮助我放松并 重拾信心。此外，音乐激励我们前进。《Dream It Possible》这首歌总提醒我不要放弃。最后同样重 要的是，音乐连接着人们。它让我们理解不同文化，让世界变得更小。 总之，音乐不仅仅是声音。它是治愈者、激励者和桥梁。让我们做开心扉拥抱音乐，让音乐照亮我们 的人生！ 谢谢。 六、文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你是李华，在学校艺术节上做一个关于“音乐如何改变我的生活”的 英语演讲。请根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿： 1.音乐在你情绪低落时给你安慰； 2.音乐鼓励你克服困难； 3.呼吁大家多听音乐、感受音乐的力量。 Good morning,dear teachers and fellow students! I'm Li Hua.Today I'm honored to speak about how music has changed my life. First of all,music is my best friend when I feel down.Every time I'm upset,a gentle song can calm me down and fill me with warmth.Moreover,music gives me courage.Last year,when I was preparing for the English speech contest,I felt so nervous.But listening to "You Raise Me Up"pushed me to keep going and finally I succeeded.Thanks to music,I became more confident. In a word,music has a magic power.It heals,encourages,and connects.I hope everyone can find your own song and let music brighten your days. Thank you! 参考译文： 同学们，老师们，早上好！ 我是李华。今天我很荣幸地谈论音乐是如何改变我的生活的。 首先，当我情绪低落时，音乐是我最好的朋友。每当我难过时，一首温柔的歌能让我平静下来，并让我充满温 暖。此外，音乐给我勇气。去年准备英语演讲比赛时，我非常紧张。但听到《You Raise Me Up)》促使我坚持 下去，最终我成功了。感谢音乐，我变得更加自信。 总之，音乐有一种神奇的力量。它治愈、鼓励、连接。我希望每个人都能找到属于自己的歌，让音乐点亮你们 的日子。 谢谢！ 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友通过音乐缓解悲伤情绪 Dear Mike, I heard that you've been feeling down recently.I'm writing to share how music can positively change your life. First of all,listening to your favorite songs is a great way to lift your mood, because the melodies can bring back happy memories and comfort you.Besides, try playing a musical instrument,which can help you express your feelings and reduce stress.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to join a school music club, as it is beneficial to making new friends who share the same hobby. I hope music can bring light to your life.You are not alone. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (116 words) 范文二：建议同学通过音乐找到人生方向 Dear Sarah, You told me you felt lost about your future.Let me tell you how music changed my life-and can change yours too. First of all,listening to inspiring lyrics can give you strength and remind you of your dreams.Whenever I feel unsure,I turn to my favorite songs.Besides,learning to sing or play music builds confidence and teaches patience,which are helpful for any goal.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to write your own songs,as it is beneficial to understanding your feelings and finding your voice. Music is a life-changing friend.I believe you will love it too. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (117 words)