Unit 4 History and Traditions 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（人教版）

高中人教版：必修 Unit4 History and Traditions写作精讲 A description of a beautiful or unusual place(描写美丽或不同寻常的地方) Unit4 History and Traditions写作精讲 单元：Unit4 History and Traditions导作任务：A description of a beautiful or unusual place (描写美丽或不同寻常的地方) 审题 1 话题：描写一个美丽或不同寻常的地方，侧重该地的历史背景、传统文化、独特风貌以及 给人的感受。 2 体裁：描写文（说明性/记叙性短文），有时也可是游记或景点介绍。 3人称：以第一人称I/We为主，亦可采用第三人称（如个绍景点时用it/the place)。 4时态： >一般现在时：描述该地的现状、特征、传统（如The castle stands on a hill.) >一般过去时：讲述历史事件或建造过程（如It was built in the14 th century,) ,现在完成时：强调持续至今的影响（如It has been a symbol of the city for centuries.) 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词。 6 核心要点： 〉点明地点名称及位置 ,描写该地的独特之处（自然或人文） >突出历史或传统元素 ,表达个人感受或评价 二、 文章结构 1开头段：引出要描述的地点（名称、地理位置、总体印象）；铺垫其历史或传统 背景，引起读者兴趣。 2 主体段：分层描写一一 〉①外部景象或建筑风格（如城墙、建筑、自然风光） >②历史渊源或传统活动（如古代战争、节庆仪式） >③细节特写（如石雕、壁画、街道氛围） 使用空间顺序（由远及近、从外到内）或时间顺序（过去→现在）；加入感官描写 (视觉、听觉、嗅觉等)。 3结尾段：总结该地的独特价值；表达个人感受（如震撼、怀念、自豪）或推荐他 人前往。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 history n.历史 tradition n.传统 heritage n.遗产 ancient adj.古代的 magnificent adj.宏伟的 unique adj.独特的 atmosphere n.氛围 architecture n.建筑；建筑风格 legend n.传说 impressive adj.合人印象深刻的 preserve V.保存；保护 symbol n.象征 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be located situated in 位于 date back to 追溯到 be known as 作为…而闻名 a place of interest 名胜 cultural heritage 文化遗产 stand the test of time 经受住时间考验 be rich in history 富有历史底蕴 take a step back in time 仿佛回到过去 leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象 well-preserved 保存完好的 3.基础造句 The old town is located in the south of China and dates back to the Ming Dynasty. 这座古镇位于中国南部，可追溯到明朝。 2 Walking along the stone street,you can feel the strong historic atmosphere. 走在石板街上，你能感受到浓厚的历史氛围。 The ancient temple is well-preserved and attracts thousands of tourists every year. 这座古庙保存完好，每年吸引成千上万的游客。 4It is not only a beautiful place but also a symbol of our traditional culture. 它不仅是一个美丽的地方，也是我们传统文化的象征。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通bea utiful→picturesque/breath-taking/gorgeous 普通】 old-ancient/historic time-honored 普通 famousrenowned celebrated distinguished 普通special→unique/remarkable/extraordinary 加分句型 1 Located in...,the place dates back to...,making it one of the oldest... 位于.…，该地可追溯到……，使其成为最古老的…之一。（分词作状语+结果状语） 2What makes this place so extraordinary is not only its natural beauty but also its rich history. 让这个地方如此非凡的，不仅是它的自然之美，还有它丰富的历史。（主语从句） 3Whenever I step into this ancient town,I feel as if I were traveling back to a past era. 每当我踏入这个古镇，就感觉仿佛回到了过去的时代。（āsif虚拟语气） 4It is a place where history and tradition come alive. 这是一个历史和传统变得鲜活的地方。(where引导定语从句) 5No visitor can fail to be impressed by the magnificent architecture that has stood for centuries. 没有哪个游客不被这座屹立了几个世纪的宏伟建筑所打动。（双重否定表强调） 五、写作模板(100-120词) 题目示例：描述一个你参观过的美丽或不同寻常的地方 Title:A Visit to [Place Name] [Place Namel,located in [locationl,is a place of great historical and cultural value.It dates back to [time period]and is known for [main featurel. When I first arrived,I was immediately struck by [visual detaill.The [buildings/streets/river]still keep their original style,which makes me feel as if I had stepped into another time.What impressed me most was [specific detail,e.g.,a temple,a bridge,a local customl.Walking around,I could almost hear the echoes of ancient stories. This place is not only a tourist attraction but also a reminder of our rich heritage.I believe everyone should visit it at least once to experience its unique charm. 参考翻译： 标题：参观[地点] [地点]位于[位置]，是一个极具历史和文化价值的地方。它可追溯到[时间段]，并以[主要特色]而闻 名 初到之时，我立刻被[视觉细节]所震撼。[建筑/街道/河流]依然保留着原有的风格，让我仿佛走进了另 一个时代。最合我印象深刻的，是[具体细节，如一座寺庙、一座桥或一种当地风俗]。漫步其间，我 几乎能听到古老故事的余音。 这里不仅是一处旅游景点，更是我们丰厚文化遗产的见证。我相信每个人都应该至少来一次，感受它 独特的魅力。 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：描写你家乡一处有历史传统的美丽地方（如古城、古村、寺院、老街 等)。 A Visit to the Ancient City of Pingyao Pingyao Ancient City,located in Shanxi Province,is one of the best-preserved ancient towns in China.It dates back to the Ming and Qing dynasties and is famous for its traditional architecture and banking history. When I first walked through the city gate,I was amazed by the grey brick walls and narrow stone streets.The old houses,shops,and temples still keep their original appearance.What impressed me most was the Rishengchang Draft Bank, which was the first bank in China.Standing inside,I could almost imagine the busy trade hundreds of years ago.The whole city is like a living museum of Chinese history. Pingyao is not only a beautiful place but also a symbol of our cultural heritage.I strongly recommend a visit to anyone who wants to understand the history and traditions of ancient China. 参考译文： 参观平遥古城 平遥古城位于山西省，是中国保存最完好的古城之一。它可追溯到明清时期，以传统建筑和票号历史闻名。 当我第一次穿过城巾时，不禁为灰色的砖墙和狭窄的石板街所惊叹。老房子、店铺和寺庙仍保留着原貌。最合 我印象深刻的，是日升昌票号一一中国第一家银行。站在那里，我几乎能想象数百年前繁忙的贸易景象。整座 古城就像一座活的中国历史博物馆。 平遥不仅是一个美丽的地方，更是我们文化遗产的象征。我强烈推荐任何想了解中国古代历史与传统的人去游 览一次。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：介绍黄山（美丽的地方） Dear Tom, Have you ever been to Mount Huangshan?I visited it last summer and was deeply impressed by its beauty.Let me describe it to you. First of all,the strangely shaped pines growing out of the cliffs look like welcoming hands,which is a wonder of nature.Besides,the ever-changing sea of clouds makes you feel as if you were walking in a fairyland.Last but not least,the sunrise at the peak is breathtaking-the sky turns from dark purple to golden orange in just seconds,casting a warm glow over all the peaks. I strongly recommend you to go there if you have a chance.You will never forget it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (字数：114词) 范文二：介绍月牙泉（不同寻常的地方） Dear Anna, I'd like to share with you a truly unusual place-the Crescent Moon Spring in Dunhuang.It is a lake shaped like a crescent lying in the middle of the Gobi Desert. First of all,it is amazing that such a clear blue lake can exist surrounded by endless sand dunes.Besides,the contrast between the golden sand and the green water creates a magical view that looks like a painting.Last but not least,when you climb to the top of the sand dune and listen to the wind,you can hear a strange "singing"sound,which is caused by sliding sand. I hope you can see this wonder with your own eyes one day. Yours sincerely, Cindy (字数：117词)