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Unit2 Travelling Around写作精炼
A travel plan(旅行计划)
Unit 2 Travelling Around
写作任务:A travel plan(旅行计划)
审题
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话题:规划一次旅行,涵盖目的地、时间、交通、活动、住宿等安排,表达旅行期待。
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体裁:计划类应用文(旅行计划),通常以书信或短文形式呈现。
3
人称:以第一人称IW为主(计划发起者),有时可含第二人称you(若写给同伴)。
4
时态:
>一般现在时(描述计划安排,如The trip starts on..)
>一般将来时(表示将要进行的活动,如Wewi训visit.)
>现在进行时表将来(如We are leaving on.,)
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
〉目的地与时间(何时、去哪里)
>交通方式
>具体活动安排(景点、体验等)
〉住宿安排(可选)
,表达期待或邀请同行
二、文章结构
1
开头段:礼貌问候/表明写信目的(分享旅行计划/邀请对方同游),引出计划背
景。
Dear Tom,I'm writing to share my travel plan for the coming summer holiday
2主体段:按逻辑顺序分条描述计划细节(时间→交通→活动→住宿等),用连接词
衔接。
示例:First of all,we will fly to..on July1Oth.
During the first two days,we plan to explore.
Besides,we have booked a hotel near...
3
结尾段:表达对旅行的期待、征求对方意见或邀请加入,收尾符合书信格式。
示例:I'm really looking forward to this trip.What do you think of my plan?
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
destination
n.目的地
schedule
n.日程安排
itinerary
n.行程;旅行计划
accommodation
n.住宿
transportation
n.交通
attraction
n.景点;吸引力
scenery
n.风景
experience
n.N.体验;经历
book/reserve
V.预订;预约
depart
v.出发
arrive
V.到达
2.常用短语
短语
释义
make a travel plan
制定旅行计划
set off set out
出发;后程
by plane/train/bus
乘飞机/火车/汽车
stay in a hotel
住在旅馆
visit local attractions
参观当地景点
enjoy the beautiful scenery
欣赏美丽风景
taste local food
品尝当地美食
learn about the culture
了解文化
have a wonderful time
玩得愉快
look forward to
期待
3.基础造句
1I am writing to tell you my travel plan for the winter vacation.
我写信告诉你我的寒假旅行计划。
2 We are going to take the high-speed train to Beijing on the first day.
我们打算第一天乘高铁去北京。
3
During the trip,we will visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City.
旅途中,我们将游览长城和故宫。
4It is a good idea to book a hotel in advance.
提前预订酒店是个好主意。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→From my perspective/I hold the view that
普通
very interestingextremely fascinating of great appeal
普通
plan to dointend to do am planning to do
普通
goodwonderful fantastic remarkable
加分句型
1Having made a careful plan,I am writing to share it with you.
在制定了一个周密的计划后,我写信与你分享。(现在分词完成式作状语)
2 Not only will we enjoy the natural scenery,but we will also experience local
customs.
我们不仅能欣赏自然风光,还能体验当地风俗。(部分倒装)
3It is strongly recommended that we book the tickets online in advance.
强烈建议我们提前网上订票。(虚拟语气)
Only by making a detailed plan can we have a smooth and enjoyable trip.
只有制定详细的计划,我们字能拥有顺利愉快的旅行。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I'm writing to share my travel plan for(时间).
First,we will go to(目的地)by(交通方式).During the trip,we plan to(活
动-),which is(理由).Besides,we will also(活动=)to(目的).As for
accommodation,we have booked(住宿安排).
I'm really excited about this trip.What do you think of my plan?I hope you
can join us if you are free.
Yours sincerely,
[Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
我写信与你分享我的[时间]旅行计划。
首先,我们将乘[交通方式]前往[目的地]。在旅行期间,我们计划[活动一],这很[理由]。此外,我
们还将[活动二]以[目的]。至于住宿,我们已经预订了[住宿安排]。
我对这次旅行非常期待。你觉得我的计划怎么样?如果你有空,希望你能加入我们。
此致,
敬礼
[姓名]
六、
作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,计划暑假和父母去云南(unnan)旅行一周。请给你的
笔友T6m写一封信,分享你的旅行计划。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to share my travel plan for the summer holiday.My parents and I are
going to Yunnan for a seven-day trip.
We will depart by plane on July 15th and arrive in Kunming that afternoon.During
the first two days,we plan to visit the Stone Forest and enjoy the local snacks.
After that,we will take a bus to Dali,where we can ride bicycles around Erhai Lake
and admire the beautiful scenery.We will also spend one day in Lijiang Old Town to
experience the ancient culture.We have booked a comfortable inn in Lijiang.
I'm really looking forward to this trip.What do you think of my plan?I hope you
can join us if you are free.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的汤姆:
我写信分享我的暑假旅行计划。我和父母准备去云南玩七天。
我们将在7月15日乘飞机出发,当天下午到达昆明。前两天,我们计划游览石林并品尝当地小吃。之后,我们
将乘巴士去大理,在那里可以沿洱海骑行并欣赏美丽的风景。我们还会花一天时间在丽江古城体验古老文化。
我们已经预订了丽江一家舒适的客栈。
我非常期待这次旅行。你觉得我的计划怎么样?如果你有空,希望你能加入我们。
此致,
敬礼
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友假期去北京旅行
Dear Li Hua,
I heard you are planning a trip for the summer vacation.I suggest you visit Beijing,
the capital of China.Let me share some practical tips.
First of all,it is necessary to book tickets online in advance,because it can save
you time and avoid disappointment.Besides,you should visit the Great Wall and
the Forbidden City.These two places are very famous and show Chinese history
and culture.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to try local food like Peking
duck,as it is a wonderful experience to taste traditional dishes.
I hope my advice will help you enjoy a wonderful trip.I'm sure you will have a
great time.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
词数统计:118词
范文二:向笔友推荐周未短途旅行计划
Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I'm writing to tell you about my weekend travel plan to
Huangshan Mountain.I hope it can give you some ideas for your own trip.
First of all,we plan to leave early on Saturday morning.By taking the high-speed
train,we can arrive in only two hours.
Besides,it is a good idea to stay in a local hotel near the mountain,because it
helps us start climbing early the next day.
Last but not least,I strongly suggest bringing enough water and comfortable
shoes,as the steps can be very tiring.
I am looking forward to this adventure.Would you like to join us?
Yours sincerely,
Liu Fang
词数统计:112词