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高中人教版·必修
Unit 1 Teenage Life写作精炼
A letter of advice(建议信)
Unit 1 Teenage Life
写作任务:A letter of advice(建议信)
审题
1
话题:针对他人在学习、生活、成长等方面遇到的问题与困扰,撰写建议信提供实用建
议。
2
体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)。
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称l。
4
时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态。
5
字数:高考标准100-120词。
6
核心要点:点明写信目的→给出2-3条具体可操作建议→表达鼓励与美好祝愿。
文章结构
1
开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的,简要回应对方的问题,引出下文建
议。
2
主体段:分条阐述具体建议,每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清
晰。
3结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方解决问题,收尾符合书信格式(如Yours
sincerely,Name).
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
concern
n.担心;忧虑v.使担忧
advice
n.建议(不可数);advise v,建议
beneficial
adj.有益的;benefit v.使受益n.益处
challenge
n.挑战V.向挑战
improve
v.提高;改进;improvement n.改进
pressure
n.压力
balance
n./N.平衡
overcome
v.克服
2.常用短语
短语
释义
face a challenge
面临挑战
deal with
处理;应对
take my advice
采纳我的建议
make a plan
制定计划
keep a balance between A and B
保持A与B的平衡
build up confidence
树立自信
relieve pressure
缓解压力
adapt to
适应
3.基础造句
1 I am writing to offer you some advice on how to deal with your problem.
我写信是为了给你一些处理问题的建议。
2 First,you should make a plan to manage your time well.
首先,你应该制定计划来合理管理时间。
It is beneficial to take part in activities to relax yourself.
参加活动放松自己是很有益的。
4If you follow my advice,you will make progress soon.
如果你采纳我的建议,很快就会取得进步。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→As far as I am concerned/From my perspective
普通}
very importantof great significance
普通
helpful(beneficial/rewarding
普通
try to do make every effort to do
加分句型
1Knowing that you have some difficulties in...,I am writing to give you some
practical suggestions.
得知你在.方面遇到困难,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should you...,but also you need to...
你不仅应该…,还需要.…(部分倒装句型)
3 It is highly recommended that you should do sth.
强烈建议你做某事。(虚拟语气句型)
Only in this way can you solve the problem effectively.
只有用这种方法,你扌能有效解决问题。(倒装句型)
五、军作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with(遇到的问题).Iam
writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,,it is a good idea to(建议-),because(原因-).Besides,you
should(建议=),which can help you(好处=).Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to(建议三),as it is beneficial to(好处三).
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will
overcome this challenge soon.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
得知你在..方面遇到困难,我写信给你提供一些有用的建议。
首先,0其次,…。最后,0
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就能克服这个挑战。
此致,
敬礼
[姓名]
六、
作文仿军((120词左右)
仿写题目:给刚升入高中的好友李华写建议信,帮助他适应高中学习生活。
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new high school
life.I am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a detailed study plan,because it can help you
manage your time efficiently and keep up with your lessons.Besides,you should
take part in after-school clubs,which can help you make new friends and enrich
your daily life.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to communicate more with
teachers and classmates,as it is beneficial to building good relationships and
solving problems in time.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will adapt to
the new life soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
参考译文:
亲爱的李华:
听说你在适应新的高中生活方面遇到了困难,我写信给你提供一些有用的建议。
首先,制定详细的学习计划是个好主意,因为它能帮助你高效管理时间,跟上课程进度。其次,你应该参加课
后社团,这能帮助你交到新朋友,丰富日常生活。最后,我强烈建议你多与老师和同学交流,因为这有助于建
立良好的人际关系并及时解决问题。
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就能适应新生活。
此致,
敬礼
Tom
导作要点快速自查
>开头:问候+写信目的(回应对方问题)
7
主体:2-3条建议,每条配理由,使用连接词(First of all,Besides,Last but not least)
>结尾:表示鼓励+祝愿
>时态:一般现在时/一般将来时
>字数:100-120词
>格式:称呼、正文、结束语、签名
拓展范文背诵积累
范文三:建议好友克服考试焦虑
Dear Li Ming.
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling anxious before exams.I'm writing to offer you
some practical advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a clear study plan,because it can help you
organize your time and reduce unnecessary worry.Besides,you should take deep
breaths when you feel nervous,which can calm your mind and improve
concentration.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep the
night before the exam,as it is beneficial to refreshing your brain and performing
better.
I hope my suggestions can help you.I'm sure you will do well!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
词数统计:约115词
范文四:建议同学提高英语写作能力
Dear Lucy,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on improving English writing.I'd
like to share some useful tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English articles every day,because it helps you
learn sentence structures and expand vocabulary.Besides,you should practice
writing a short paragraph daily,which can train your logical thinking and
expression.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to ask your teacher to check
your work,as it is beneficial to correcting mistakes and making progress.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your improvement!
Yours sincerely,
Wang Xin
词数统计:约112词