Unit 3 The Story of Success 写作精讲二-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修3 Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲二 Writing Your Own Story of Success(撰写自己的成功故事) Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲二 单元：Unit3 The Story of Success」写作在务：Writing Your Own Story of Success(撰写自己的 成功故事) 审题 1 话题：结合自身经历，讲述一次通过努力、坚持或方法改进而取得成功的真实故事，突出 从挑战到突破的过程及感悟。 2 体裁：记叙文（个人叙事），可略带议论性结尾。 3人称：以第一人称1为主，也可用w涉及合作。 4时态：主体用一般过去时（叙述事件经过）；结尾感悟可用一般现在时。 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词。 6 核心要点： >背景：遇到的困难或挑战 >过程：采取的行动、关键努力或转折点 〉结果：取得的成功 ,感悟：从中学到的道理或对未来的后发 文章结构 1 开头段（背景引入）：用一句话引出“我面临了什么困难/挑战”，引起读者兴趣。 2 主体段（努力过程）：按时间顺序或因果逻辑，写出具体做法、遇到的关键节 点、坚持的细节。可适当加入心理活动或他人帮助。 3结尾段（结果+感悟）：交代成功的结果，并总结1-2句个人成长体会（如“坚 持终会带来改变“失败是成功之母”等)。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 核心词 拓展表达 challenge struggle /difficulty effort hard work/perseverance overcome conquer achieve goal dream success make progress improve failure lesson experience inspire encouragement 2.常用短语 短语 释义 face a big challenge 面临巨大挑战 keep trying never give up 不断尝试/永不放弃 make up one's mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事 work out a plan 制定方案 take action to do sth. 采取行动做某事 as a result/in the end 结果/最终 learn from the experience 从经历中学习 believe in oneself 相信自己 turn failure into success 把失败转化为成功 3.基础造句 I used to struggle with math,but I didn't give up. 我會经和数学斗争，但我没有放弃。 2 Every day I spent one hour practicing,and gradually I improved 我每天花一小时练习，逐渐提高了。 3With the help of my teacher,I found the right way to learn. 在老师帮助下，我找到了正确的学习方法。 4Finally,I passed the exam with a good grade. 最终，我以好成绩通过了考试。 This experience taught me that hard work pays off. 这次经历教会我努力会有回报。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通hard→tough/demanding 普通try→make an effort/spare no effort 普通 successachievement/triumph 普通 happydelighted thrilled 加分句型 I过去分词作状语：Determined to succeed,I made a practical study plan. 决心要成功，我制定了一个切实可行的学习计划。（过去分词作状语） 2 not until:Not until I failed did I realize the importance of perseverance 直到失败后我亨意识到坚持的重要性。(not until倒装) 3强调句型：It was the continuous effort that finally led to my success. 正是持续的努力最终成就了我的成功。（强调句型） 4only+状语开头倒装：Only by sticking to my goal could I achieve the result. 只有坚持目标，我扌能取得这个结果。(oly+状语开头倒装) 5定语从句：The day when I received the award will never fade from my memory: 我获奖的那一天永远不会从我的记忆中褪色。（定语从句） 五、写作模板(100-120词) My Story of Success A few months ago,I faced a big challenge-my English was too weak to follow the class. Determined to improve,I made a plan:I got up early to memorize words every morning and practiced listening for 30 minutes each day.Although I felt tired,I never stopped.My teacher also gave me useful tips.Little by little,my grades went up. In the end,I scored a perfect mark in the final exam.This success taught me that persistence is the key to overcoming any difficulty.As long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：讲述一次你克服困难、获得成功的经历（如学会一项运动、提高成绩、 完成一次演讲等)。 My Story of Success Last term,I was terrified of public speaking.Whenever I stood on stage,my heart raced and I forgot my words. To conquer this fear,I practiced my speech in front of a mirror every evening.I also asked my best friend to be my audience and give me feedback.Gradually,I became more confident.On the day of the competition,I took a deep breath and delivered my speech fluently. To my surprise,I won second prize.This experience made me realize that courage comes from constant practice.Success is not about being perfect;it is about never giving up. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友合理管理时间 Dear Mike, I'm sorry to hear that you often feel overwhelmed by too much homework.I'm writing to offer you some practical time management tips. First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily to-do list,because it helps you prioritize tasks and avoid wasting time.Besides,you should divide big assignments into smaller parts,which can make them less stressful.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to set aside 30 minutes for relaxation every evening,as it is beneficial to keeping a balanced life. I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will become more organized. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文二：建议同学提升阅读能力 Dear Lucy, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on improving reading comprehension.I'd like to share some useful tips with you. First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it helps you get used to different writing styles.Besides,you should take notes of new words while reading,which can enlarge your vocabulary.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to discuss the articles with classmates,as it is beneficial to deepening your understanding. I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your progress. Yours sincerely, Li Hua