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Unit5 Animals Around Us导作精讲三
Writing a Proposal to Protect Endangered Animals(撰写保护濒危动物的倡议书)
Unit5 Animals Around Us导作精讲三:Writing a Proposal to
Protect Endangered Animals(撰写保护濒危动物的倡议书)
单元:Unit5 Animals Around Us|写作在务:Writing a Proposal to Protect Endangered
Animals(撰写保护濒危动物的倡议书)
申题
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话题:针对濒危动物面临的生存威胁,撰写倡议书,呼吁公众采取行动保护它们
2
体裁:应用文(倡议书/提案)
3
人称:以第一人称复数W为主,辅以第一人称(倡议者身份)和第二人称you(呼吁对
象)
4
时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(陈述现状与措施),辅以一般将来时(呼吁未来行动)
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>点明倡议背景(濒危动物现状与威胁)
>分析问题原因(人类活动等)
>提出2-3条具体可行的保护建议
〉发出号召,呼吁共同行动
二、
文章结构
1开头段:
〉问候听众/读者
〉点明倡议背景与目的(濒危动物面临的严峻形势)
>引出下文建议
2
主体段:
>分条阐述具体保护措施(每条建议搭配合理解释)
〉用连接词衔接,逻辑清晰
,可简要说明问题的严重性或紧迫性
3
结尾段:
>再次发出号召,呼吁采取行动
>表达信心与期待
,收尾符合倡议书格式(署名、日期等)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
endangered
adj.濒危的
extinction
n.灭绝
habitat
n.栖息地
species
n.物种
conservation
n.保护
threat
n.威胁
preserve
V.保护;保存
campaign
n.运动;活动
illegal
adj.非法的
wildlife
n.野生动物
2.常用短语
短语
释义
be in danger of extinction
面临灭绝危险
lose one's habitat
失去栖息地
take measures
采取措施
raise public awareness
提高公众意识
under threat
受到威胁
protect..from.…
保护免受…
call on sb.to do sth.
呼吁某人做某事
make a difference
有所作为
live in harmony with nature
与自然和谐共处
take action
采取行动
3.基础造句
1I am writing to propose some measures to protect endangered animals.
我写信是为了提出一些保护濒危动物的措施。
2 Many wild animals are now facing the threat of extinction due to human
activities.
由于人类活动,许多野生动物正面临灭绝的威胁。
3It is our responsibility to take action to protect these precious creatures.
采取行动保护这些珍贵生物是我们的责任。
4If we don't act now,more species will disappear forever.
如果我们现在不行动,更多物种将永远消失。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通
important of great significance/vital crucial
普通protect→preserve/safeguard/conserve
普通
manya great number of/a variety of
普通
bad→severe/alarming
普通
help contribute to play a key role in
加分句型
1 It is alarming that many species are on the edge of extinction due to habitat
10ss.
令人震惊的是,许多物种因栖息地丧失而濒临灭绝。(主语从句)
2 Only by working together can we protect these endangered animals for future
generations.
只有共同努力,我们扌能为后代保护这些濒危动物。(倒装句)
Not only should we stop illegal hunting,but we should also restore their
natural habitats.
我们不仅应该制止非法猎捕,还应该恢复它们的自然栖息地。(部分倒装)
4It is highly recommended that everyone (should)contribute to wildlife
protection.
强烈建议每个人都为野生动物保护贡献力量。(虚拟语气)
5 The more we learn about these animals,the better we can protect them.
我们对这些动物了解得越多,就越能保护好它们。(比较结构)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
A Proposal to Protect Endangered Animals
Dear fellow students,
I am writing to call on everyone to take action to protect endangered
animals.It is alarming that many species,such as tigers and pandas,are
facing the threat of extinction due to habitat loss and illegal hunting.
First of all,we should raise public awareness of wildlife protection through
posters and social media.Besides,it is highly recommended that we donate
to organizations working on animal conservation.Last but not least,we can
start from small things in daily life,such as reducing paper use to save
forests.
Only by taking these measures together can we make a real difference.
Let's join hands to protect our precious wildlife!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考翻译:
保护濒危动物倡议书
亲爱的同学们:
我写信是为了呼吁大家采取行动保护濒危动物。合人震惊的是,许多物种(如老虎和大熊猫)正因栖
息地丧失和非法猎捕而面临灭绝威胁。
首先,我们应该通过海报和杜交媒体提高公众的野生动物保护意识。此外,强烈建议我们向致力于动
物保护的组织捐款。最后,我们可以从日常生活中的小事做起,例如减少用纸以保护森林。
只有共同采取这些措施,我们扌能真正有所作为。让我们携起手来保护珍贵的野生动物!
此致敬礼
李华
六、文仿得(120词左右)
仿军题目:以学生会名义撰写一份倡议书,呼吁全校师生关注保护本地濒危鸟类
(如朱鹮crested ibis),提出具体保护措施。
A Proposal to Protect the Crested Ibis
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I am writing on behalf of the Student Union to call for action to protect the crested
ibis,one of the rarest birds in our region.It is deeply concerning that their number
has dropped sharply because of wetland destruction and pollution.
To begin with,we should stop destroying the wetlands where these birds live.In
addition,it is suggested that we take part in volunteer activities to clean up rivers
and lakes.Moreover,spreading knowledge about crested ibises among local
communities is also important.
Only when everyone realizes the urgency can these beautiful birds be saved.Let's
take action now and do our part to protect them!
Yours sincerely,
The Student Union
参考译文:
保护朱鹮倡议书
亲爱的老师们、同学们:
我代表学生会写信呼吁大家采取行动保护朱鹮一一我们地区最珍稀的鸟类之一。令人深感担忧的是,由于湿地
破坏和污染,它们的数量急剧下降。
首先,我们应该停止破坏这些鸟类栖息的湿地。此外,建议我们参加清理河流和湖泊的志愿活动。而且,在当
地社区传播关于朱鹗的知识也很重要。
只有当每个人都意识到紧迫性时,这些美丽的鸟类扌能得救。让我们立即行动起来,尽自己的一份力量保护它
们!
此致敬礼
学生会
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:倡议保护濒危动物
Dear classmates,
I'm writing to call on everyone to protect endangered animals.Many species are
facing extinction due to human activities.
First of all,it is important to refuse to buy products made from endangered
animals,such as ivory or fur,because this directly reduces illegal hunting.Besides,
we should spread knowledge about wildlife protection on social media,which can
raise public awareness.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to join local
conservation groups,as it is beneficial to taking practical action and making a real
difference.
Let's work together to save these precious creatures.Every small effort counts!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:倡议保护海洋濒危动物
Dear friends,
I am deeply concerned about the survival of marine endangered animals like sea
turtles and whales.I'm writing to urge everyone to take action.
First of all,it is a good idea to reduce plastic waste,because plastic pollution
harms marine life seriously.Besides,you should avoid disturbing their habitats,
such as not touching coral reefs while diving.Last but not least,I strongly advise
you to support ocean protection projects,as it is helpful to fund research and
rescue efforts.
I hope we can all contribute to a safer ocean.Let's act now to protect these
beautiful animals!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei