Unit 3 The Story of Success 写作精讲一-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修3 Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲一 Creating a Dream Tree(制作梦想树) Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲一 单元：Unit3 The Story of Success」写作任务：Creating a Dream Tree(制作梦想树) 审题 1话题：围绕“成功的故事”主题，通过制作梦想树的形式，梳理自己的梦想与目标，阐述实 现梦想的路径和计划 2体裁：创意写作/演讲稿/短文介绍（结合本单元主题，可设计为介绍自己梦想树的演讲 稿或短文) 3人称：以第一人称为主，适当使用第二人称you与读者互动 4 时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为核心时态 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >描述梦想树的构思（树根/树干/树枝/树叶各代表什么） >阐述自己的梦想与目标 ,说明实现梦想的具体路径或计划 >表达对未来的信心与期待 二 文章结构 1开头段：点明制作梦想树的背景或目的；引出自己的梦想主题；简短介绍梦想树 的基本构思。 2主体段：描述梦想树各部分一一树根代表家庭支持、教育基础、价值观等；树干 代表努力、坚持、行动等；树枝代表短期目标、具体方向等；树叶/果实代表梦想成 果、最终目标等；说明各部分之间的联系；阐述实现梦想的具体行动。 3结尾段：表达对梦想的信心与决心；鼓励读者也制作自己的梦想树；呼应开头， 升华主题。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 词性 释义 dream n./N. 梦想；做梦 goal n. 目标 ambition n. 雄心；抱负 success n. 成功 achieve 实现；达到 path n 路径；道路 foundation n. 基础；根基 growth 0 成长；生长 determination n. 决心 effort 努力 inspire 激励；鼓舞 branch n. 树枝；分支 root n. 树根；根源 2,常用短语 短语 释义 dream of... 梦想.… 短语 释义 seta goal 设定目标 achieve one's dream 实现梦想 lay a solid foundation 打下坚实基础 take action 采取行动 keep moving forward 不断前进 never give up 永不放弃 make efforts to do... 努力去做… be determined to do... 决心去做… work towards... 朝着.努力 3.基础造句 1 My Dream Tree is a symbol of my future goals and ambitions. 我的梦想树代表了我未来的目标和抱负。 2 The roots of my tree stand for the strong support from my family and teachers 我梦想树的树根象征着家人和老师给予的强力支持。 3The trunk represents the hard work and determination I need to achieve my goals. 树干代表实现目标所需的努力和决心。 4Each branch is a short-term goal that leads to my final dream. 每根树枝都是一个通往最终梦想的短期目标。 5I am determined to water my Dream Tree with persistence and passion every day. 我决心每天用坚持和热爱浇灌我的梦想树。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→significant/essential/vital 普通 helpcontribute to play a key role in 普通 want desire/long for be eager to 普通work hard→spare no effort/make every effort 普通 getachieve accomplish /attain 加分句型 1Only when we have a clear dream can we find the right direction. 只有当我们拥有清晰的梦想时，亨能找到正确的方向。（倒装句型） 2 As the saying goes,"Where there is a will,there is a way." 俗话说：“有志者，事竟成。”（谚语引用） 3What matters most is not the dream itself but the steps we take to realize it. 最重要的不是梦想本身，而是我们为实现它采取的每一步。（主语从句） 4Just as a tree needs strong roots to grow tall,we need a solid foundation to achieve success. 正如一棵树需要强壮的树根扌能长高，我们需要坚实的基础扌能获得成功。（比喻句型） 5 By making a Dream Tree,I have a clearer picture of what I want to achieve in the future. 通过制作梦想树，我对未来想要实现的目标有了更清晰的图景。（动名词作主语+宾语从句） 五、军作模板(100-120词) My Dream Tree Everyone has a dream.To make my dream clear and concrete,I have created my own Dream Tree. The roots of my tree represent the love and support from my family and teachers, which are the foundation of my growth.The strong trunk stands for my hard work and determination.Each branch is a short-term goal-for example,studying hard and developing useful skills.The leaves and fruits at the top are my final dream:to become a successful scientist. I know the road ahead may not be easy,but I will water my Dream Tree every day with effort and passion.I believe one day it will grow into a towering tree. I encourage everyone to plant your own Dream Tree and let it guide your future! 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你刚参加了学校“制作梦想树”活动，请写一篇短文介绍你的梦想 树，并分享给你在英语角交流的外国朋友。 参考范文： My Dream Tree Dear friends Today I'd like to share my Dream Tree with you.It shows my hopes and plans for the future. At the bottom,the roots stand for my family's love and the knowledge I have gained at school.They are the solid foundation of my dream.The trunk represents my hard work and never-give-up spirit.Without it,nothing can grow.On the branches,I have placed my short-term goals,such as improving my English and learning more about science.The shining fruit on top is my big dream-to become a doctor and help people in need. This Dream Tree reminds me that success comes from both a clear goal and daily efforts.I will keep working towards it. Have you made your own Dream Tree?Let's grow together! Yours, Li Hua 注：写作时请根据实际字数和题目要求灵活调整内容。制作梦想树的核心是“梦想→路径→行动→信心"的 逻辑链，务必做到条理清晰、情感真挚。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友制作梦想树明确目标 Dear Li Hua, I was glad to hear that you're planning to create your own dream tree.Here are some suggestions. First of all,it is a good idea to draw a big tree on paper and write your dreams on the leaves,because it helps you visualize your goals clearly.Besides,you should hang the tree in a place you see every day,which can remind you of what you are working for.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to update the tree regularly,as it is beneficial to tracking your progress and staying motivated. I hope these tips help.I'm sure your dream tree will guide you toward success. Yours sincerely, Jack 范文二：建议同学通过梦想树坚持行动 Dear Tom, I'm writing to give you some advice on how to stick to your dreams after making a dream tree. First of all,it is a good idea to break big dreams into small daily tasks,because it makes them easier to achieve.Besides,you should reward yourself when you finish each step,which can keep you full of energy.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to share your dream tree with friends or parents,as it is beneficial to gaining encouragement and support. I hope my advice works.Keep going,and your dreams will come true. Yours sincerely, Li Ming