Unit 3 The Story of Success 写作精讲三-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修3 Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲三 Exploring the Qualities of Successful People(探究成功人士的品质) Unit3 The Story of Success写作精讲三：Exploring the Qualities of Successful People(探究成功人士的品质) 单元：Unit3 The Story of Success|导作在务：以“The Qualities of Successful People”为主题， 写一篇短文或演讲稿，阐述成功人士应具备的核心品质，并结合具体事例说明这些品质如何助力成功。 申题 1话题：围绕成功人士的共同品质展开论述，如坚持、自律、好奇心、责任感等，结合事例 阐明观点 2 体裁：议论文/演讲稿（以议论为主，兼具说理与号召力） 3人称：以第三人称（成功人士）和第一人称（作者观点）为主，可适当使用第二人称增强 感染力 4 时态：以一般现在时为主（阐述普逼观点），举例时使用一般过去时 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： √ 引出话题：成功人士拥有哪些优秀品质 √具体阐述2-3种品质，每种品质搭配事例或理由 √总结升华：对读者的后发与鼓励 二、 文章结构 1开头段：引出主题一一成功人士之所以成功，不仅靠天赋或机遇，更靠内在品 质；点明将要讨论的几种品质，引起读者兴趣。 2主体段：分条阐述品质（建议2-3点）；每个品质搭配：①品质定义或表现；②具 体事例（名人身边人）；③该品质如何促进成功；使用连接词衔接，逻辑清晰。 3 结尾段：总结核心观点；号召读者培养这些品质；回扣主题，简洁有力。 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 quality n.品质；特质(pl.qualities) determination n.决心；坚定→determined adj..坚定的 perseverance n.坚持不懈→persevere v.坚持 discipline n.自律；纪律→self-discipline自律 curiosity n.好奇心→curious adj.好奇的 responsibility n.责任→responsible adj.有责任感的 passion n.热情；热爱→passionate adj.热情的 contribute to 有助于；促成 overcome V.克服（困难） 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be regarded as 被认为是 play a key role in 在..中起关键作用 set a goal 设定目标 stick to hold on to 坚持 never give up 永不放弃 in the face of difficulties 面对困难时 make a difference 产生影响；有所作为 短语 释义 learn from failures 从失败中学习 3.基础造句 1 Successful people often share some common qualities. 成功人士通常具备一些共同的品质。 2 Determination plays a key role in achieving success. 决心在取得成功中起着关键作用。 3 They never give up,even in the face of great difficulties. 即使面对巨大困难，他们也绝不放弃。 4 Curiosity drives them to explore new possibilities. 好奇心驱使他们探索新的可能性。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→essential/vital/of great significance 普通 hard-workingdiligent/industrious 普通】 always-consistently constantly 普通 help contribute to play a vital role in 普通 because due to the fact that/on account of 加分句型 1定语从句（丰富信息）：Thomas Edison,who failed thousands of times,never stopped trying. 托马斯·爱迪生失败了数千次，但从未停止尝试。（定语从句） 2倒装句（强调观点）：Only through hard work and perseverance can one achieve real success. 只有通过努力和坚持不懈，一个人于能取得真正的成功。（倒装句） 3非谓语动词作状语（简洁高级）：Driven by curiosity,many scientists have made great discoveries. 受好奇心驱使，许多科学家做出了伟大发现。（非谓语动词作状语） 4强调句（突出重点）：It is not talent but persistence that makes a person successful. 让一个人成功的不是天赋，而是坚持。（强调句） 5名言引l用（增色加分）：As the saying goes,"Where there is a will,there is a way.” 俗话说：“有志者，事竟成。”（名言引用） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Title:The Qualities of Successful People Paragraph1(开头) What makes a person successful?Is it talent or luck?In my opinion,success comes from certain inner qualities.Among them,and are the most important. Paragraph2(住体) First of all,①plays a vital role in achieving success.For example,名人事例.Without ①，they would not have succeeded.Besides,②is also essential.具体解释.As the saying goes,“名言". Paragraph3(结尾) In conclusion,success is not an accident.It is the result of great qualities.If we want to be successful,号召/建议.Only in this way can we make our dreams come true. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：学校英语报举办以“The Qualities of Successful People"为主题的征 文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，阐述你认为成功人士最重要的两种品质（坚持和好 奇心)，并简要说明理由。 The Qualities of Successful People What makes a person successful?In my opinion,success depends more on inner qualities than on luck.Among them,perseverance and curiosity are the most important. First of all,perseverance contributes greatly to success.Thomas Edison,who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb,never gave up.Without his strong will,he would not have achieved such greatness.Besides,curiosity is also essential.It drives successful people to explore the unknown and learn new things. As the saying goes,"Curiosity is the key to discovery." In conclusion,success is not an accident.It comes from qualities like perseverance and curiosity.If we develop these qualities,we will be one step closer to our dreams. (120 words) 0导作小贴士 1.开头可设问引出话题，增强吸引力 2.主体段每个品质必须搭配至少一句具体例子 3.结尾段要简短有力，最好有号召或展望 4.善用倒装句、名言和从句提升语言档次 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议同学提高阅读理解能力 Dear Li Ming, I'm sorry to hear that you find it difficult to improve your reading comprehension I'm writing to offer you some helpful suggestions. First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it helps you get used to different writing styles and expand your vocabulary.Besides,you should take notes while reading,which can help you focus on key information and improve memory.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to discuss the articles with classmates,as it is beneficial to sharing ideas and deepening understanding. I hope these tips will be useful.I'm sure you will make progress soon. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei 范文二：建议朋友克服拖延症 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear that you want to overcome procrastination.I'd like to share some practical ways with you. First of all,it is a good idea to break large tasks into smaller parts,because it makes them less scary and easier to start.Besides,you should set a fixed time for each task every day,which can help you form a good habit and avoid delay.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to reward yourself after finishing a task,as it is beneficial to keeping motivation and building confidence. I hope my suggestions can help you.I'm looking forward to your good news. Yours sincerely, Chen Wei