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高中
冀教版·必修2
Unit5 Save the Planet写作精讲二
Unit5 Save the Planet写作精讲二
Unit5 Save the Planet写作精讲二
写作任务:A letter of advice(建议信)一一关于环保建议
审题
1话题:针对身边的环境问题(如资源浪费、污染、过度消耗等),向他/她提供切实可行的环
保建议,呼吁共同保护地球。
2
体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称1(写信人自称)
4
时态:一般现在时(描述做法和好处)为主,一般将来时(展望效果)为辅
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>点明写信目的(针对环保问题提出建议)
>给出2-3条具体、可操作的建议(如节约用水、减少塑料、垃圾分类)
〉说明每条建议的理由或好处
>表达鼓励与美好祝愿
二、文章结构
开头段
>礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的(回应对方提到的环境问题或自身观察)
>简要引出下文建议
2
主体段
>分条阐述具体建议(可用First of all,Besides,Last but not least连接)
,每条建议搭配合理理由(如“减少用水能节约资源”“自带购物袋可减少白色污染”)
>逻辑清晰,语气诚恳
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结尾段
>表达鼓励与信心(如“只要我们一起行动,地球就会变得更美好”)
〉祝愿对方采纳建议
>符合书信格式(Yours sincerely等)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
environment
n.环境
protect
V.保护;protection n.保护
waste
n.浪费;v.浪费
recycle
v,回收利用
reduce
v.减少
resource
n.资源
pollution
n.污染
sustainable
adj.可持续的
eco-friendly
adj,环保的
carbon footprint
n.碳足迹
2.常用短语
短语
释义
cut down on
削减;减少
make a difference
起作用;产生影响
短语
释义
take action
采取行动
start with small things
从小事做起
turn off the tap
关掉水龙头
sort the garbage
垃圾分类
bring your own bag
自带购物袋
save energy
节约能源
3.基础造句
1
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to protect the environment.
我写信是为了给你一些保护环境的建议。
2
First,you can start by turning off lights when you leave a room.
首先,你可以从离开房间时关灯做起。
3
It is a good idea to take a reusable water bottle instead of buying plastic ones.
带一个可重复使用的水瓶而不是买塑料瓶,是个好主意。
4
If everyone makes small changes,we can make a big difference to our planet.
如果每个人都做一些小改变,我们就能对地球产生大影响。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance/vital
普通】
helpful(beneficial advantageous
普通
try to domake every effort to do /spare no effort to do
普通
I think-From my perspective As far as I am concerned
加分句型
1 Knowing that you are concerned about environmental problems,I am writing
to give you some practical suggestions.
得知你关心环境问题,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should we reduce waste,but we should also recycle as much as
possible.
我们不仅应该减少浪费,还应该尽可能回收利用。(部分倒装)
3 It is strongly recommended that you(should)sort your garbage before
throwing it away.
强烈建议你在扔垃圾前进行分类。(虚拟语气)
Only by working together can we create a greener and cleaner planet.
只有共同努力,我们扌能创造一个更绿色更清洁的星球。(倒装句型)
五、军作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am glad to hear that you care about[环境问题].I am writing to offer you
some advice on how to[做法].
First of all,,it is a good idea to[建议-l,because it can/will原因一].
Besides,you should[建议=l,which helps to[好处二l.Last but not least,I
highly recommend that you[建议三l,as this is[好处三】.
I hope my advice will be of some help.I believe that with small steps,we
can make the Earth a better place.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
六、作文仿(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,你的朋友T0m来信说他所在社区垃圾污染严重,居民乱
扔垃圾的现象很普逼,请你给他写一封建议信,提出一些可行的环保措施。
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear that you are concerned about the garbage pollution in your
community.I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve the situation.
First of all,it is a good idea to put up some signs reminding people to put trash in
the bins,because this can raise their awareness of environmental protection.
Besides,you should encourage your neighbors to sort the garbage before throwing
it away,which helps to recycle waste more efficiently.Last but not least,I highly
recommend that you organize a community clean-up activity,as this is a great way
to bring people together and make the neighborhood cleaner.
I hope my advice will be of some help.I believe that with everyone's efforts,your
community will become a more pleasant place to live.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的汤姆:
得知你关心你所在社区的垃圾污染问题,我很高兴。我写信给你一些改善这种情况的建议。
首先,张贴一些提醒人们把垃圾扔进垃圾桶的标语是个好主意,因为这可以提高他们的环保意识。此外,你应
该鼓励邻居们在扔垃圾前进行分类,这有助于更有效地回收垃圾。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你组织
次社区清洁活动,这是让社区更干净的好方法。
我希望我的建议能有所帮助。我相信在大家的努力下,你的社区会变得更加宜居。
你真诚的,
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
以下是根据Unit5 Save the Planet写作精讲二的模板生成的两篇环保主题范文,字数在105-120词之间,难度
符合高中英语(冀教版必修2/高考英语写作水平),不同于原示例内容。
范文一:建议朋友减少塑料使用
Dear Tom
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about environmental problems.I'm writing
to give you some practical suggestions on reducing plastic waste.
First of all,it is a good idea to use reusable bags when shopping,because it can
cut down plastic pollution and protect marine life.Besides,you should avoid
buying bottled water,which can help reduce waste and save resources.Last but
not least,I strongly advise you to recycle plastic correctly,as it is beneficial to
turning waste into new products.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you can make a difference.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
范文二:建议同学参与校园绿化
Dear Anna,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on helping save the planet at
school.I'd like to share some useful tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to join the school tree-planting club,because it helps
absorb carbon dioxide and improve air quality.Besides,you should encourage
classmates to turn off lights and fans when leaving classrooms,which can save
energy and reduce electricity bills.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to
organize a recycling competition,as it is beneficial to raising environmental
awareness.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your green actions.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy