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Unit1 Family写作精讲三
Unit 1 Family写作精讲三
Unit1 Family写作精讲三
单元:Family写作在务:A letter of advice(建议信)一一针对家庭关系或家庭生活中遇到的问题提
出实用建议,帮助对方改善与家人的沟通、化解矛盾或增进理解。
审题
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话题:针对他人在家庭生活中遇到的困扰(如与父母沟通不畅、兄弟姐妹矛盾、对家庭期
望感到压力等),撰写建议信提供可行的解决办法。
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议信),注意称呼、正文、结束语、署名等格式。
3人称:以第二人称y0u为主(针对收信人),辅以第一人称!(表达写信人的观点和建
议)。
4时态:核心时态为一般现在时(描述现状、给出建议)和一般将来时(健议执行后的结果
或鼓励)。
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
〉点明写信目的(回应对方在家庭方面的困扰)
〉给出2-3条具体可操作的建议,每条搭配合理理由
〉表达鼓励与美好祝愿(相信对方能改善家庭关系)
二、
文章结构
1开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的(如“得知你与父母最近有些矛盾,
我深表理解,现提供一些建议”),简要回应对方的问题,引出下文建议。
2主体段:分条阐述具体建议,常用衔接词(First of all/Besides/Last but
not least),每条建议后附上理由或好处,逻辑清晰。
3结尾段:表达鼓励与信心(如“我相信通过努力,你们的关系会越来越好”),祝
愿对方解决问题,注意书信格式收尾(Yours sincerely,署名)。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
n.担心;忧虑V.使担忧(常用于家庭话题:
concern
family concerns)
advice
n.建议(不可数);advise v.建议
beneficial
adj.有益的;benefit v,使受益n.益处
n.挑战(如a challenge in family
challenge
comm unication)
v.改善;improvement n.改善(im prove
improve
family relationship)
pressure
n.压力(家庭期望带来的pressure)
balance
n./N.平衡(balance study and family time)
overcome
v.克服(overcome disagreement)
2.常用短语
短语
释义
face a family challenge
面临家庭挑战
deal with
处理;应对(deal with conflicts)
take my advice
采纳我的建议
have a heart-to-heart talk
进行一次坦诚的谈心
keep a balance between family and study
平衡家庭与学习
build up mutual understanding
建立相互理解
短语
释义
relieve family pressure
缓解家庭压力
adapt to
适应(适应家庭的变化)
3.基础造句
1I am writing to offer you some advice on how to get along better with your
parents.
我写信是为了给你一些与父母更好相处的建议。
2 First,you should have a heart-to-heart talk with them to express your feelings.
首先,你应该和他们进行一次坦诚的谈心,表达你的感受。
3It is beneficial to listen to their opinions patiently.
耐心听取他们的意见是很有益的。
4If you follow my advice,your family relationship will improve soon.
如果你采纳我的建议,你们的家庭关系很快就会改善。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→As far as I am concerned/From my perspective
very important(of great significance (Family harmony is of great significance.)
普通
helpfulbeneficial rewarding (A sincere talk is rewarding.)
try to domake every effort to do (Make every effort to understand each
other.)
加分句型
1Knowing that you are having trouble communicating with your parents,I am
writing to give you some practical suggestions.
(现在分词作原因状语一一得知你在与父母沟通方面有困难,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。)
2 Not only should you express your own thoughts,but you should also listen to
your parents'opinions.
(部分倒装句型一一你不仅应该表达自己的想法,还应该倾听父母的意见。)】
It is highly recommended that you should spend more quality time with your
family.
(虚拟语气句型一一强烈建议你多与家人共度美好时光。)
Only in this way can you truly understand each other and strengthen the
family bond.
(倒装句型一一只有这样,你们中能真正理解彼此,加强家庭纽带。)
五、写作模板(100-120词
Dear [Namel,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with[遇到的与家庭相关的困扰,
getting along with your parents].I am writing to offer you some useful
advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to[建议-l,because[原因一l.Besides,you
should[建议二l,which can help you[好处二l.Last but not least,I strongly
advise you to[建议三l,as it is beneficial to[好处三l.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will
overcome this family challenge soon.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
得知你在(遇到的与家庭相关的困扰,如:与父母相处)遇到困难,我写信给你提供一些有用的建
议。
首先,一个好主意是(建议一),因为(原因一)。此外,你应该(建议二),这能帮助你(好处二)。
最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你(建议三),因为这对(好处三)是有益的。
我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就能克服这个家庭挑战。
你真诚的,
[你的名字]
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:你的好友王明来信说,他最近与父母在学习时间安排上产生了严重分
歧,感到压力很大。请你给他写一封建议信,帮助他改善亲子关系。
Dear Wang Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble reaching an agreement with your
parents about your study schedule.I am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to have a heart-to-heart talk with them,because open
communication helps both sides understand each other's concerns.Besides,you
should show them your study plan and make adjustments together,which can
prove your responsibility and reduce misunderstandings.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to spend some family time doing relaxing activities together,as
it is beneficial to building a warm and trusting relationship.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will find a
balance and enjoy a better family life soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的王明:
得知你在学习时间安排上与父母难以达成一致,我写信给你提供一些有用的建议。
首先,一个好主意是和他们进行一次坦诚的谈心,因为开放的沟通有助于双方理解彼此的担忧。此外,你应该
向他们展示你的学习计划并一起调整,这能证明你的责任感并减少误解。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你
花一些家庭时间一起做放松的活动,因为这有助于建立温暖而信任的关系。
我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就能找到平衡,享受更好的家庭生活。
你真诚的,
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友养成健康生活习惯
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you often feel tired and weak recently.I'm writing to offer
you some suggestions on keeping healthy.
First of all,it is a good idea to go to bed before 10:30 p.m.,because enough sleep
can restore your energy and boost your immunity.
Besides,you should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food,which
provides necessary vitamins and helps you stay fit.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take a 30-minute walk every day,as it is
beneficial to improving blood circulation and relieving anxiety.
I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you will become energetic again
Yours sincerely,
Jack
范文二:建议同学合理规划时间
Dear Lucy,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on managing time better.I'd like to
share some practical tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a weekly schedule,because it can help you
prioritize tasks and avoid last-minute hurry.
Besides,you should start with the most difficult subjects when you are most
focused,which can increase efficiency and save time.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to set a fixed time for relaxation,as it is
beneficial to keeping a balance between study and rest.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your progress.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy