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Unit2 School Life写作精讲三
Unit2 School Life写作精讲三
Unit2 School Life写作精讲三
写作任务:A letter to a friend introducing your school life(介绍信)
审题
1话题:向笔友或朋友介绍自己的高中学校生活,包括课程设置、课外活动、校园环境、同
学关系等
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体裁:书信类应用文(介绍信)
3人称:以第一人称I为主,适当使用第二人称yOu拉近距离
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时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(描述常态),必要时使用一般过去时(讲述经历)
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
,礼貌问候+写信目的(介绍学校生活)
>选取2-3个方面具体描述(如课程、活动、感受等)
>表达期待对方回信或分享ta的生活
文章结构
1
开头段:问候+点明写信目的(想分享自己的学校生活)
2主体段:分2-3个方面介绍学校生活,每个方面搭配细节或个人感受,用连接
词衔接
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结尾段:总结感受+表达期待(希望对方回信或分享ta的学校生活)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
campus
n.校园
curriculum
n.课程
assignment
n.作业;任务
extracurricular
adj.课外的
activity
n.活动
atmosphere
n,氛围
fascinating
adj.迷人的,极好的
schedule
n.时间表;日程安排
relationship
n.关系
benefit
n./N.益处;使受益
2.常用短语
短语
释义
be busy with
忙于…
take part in/participate in
参加
a variety of
各种各样的
not only...but also...
不仅而且.…
get along with
与.…相处
enrich one's life
丰富某人的生活
have a better understanding of
对…有更好的理解
make the most of
充分利用
3.基础造句
1I am writing to tell you something about my school life.
我写信是想告诉你一些我的学校生活。
2 Our school offers a wide range of subjects,such as Chinese,maths and
physics.
我们学校开设了广泛的科目,比如语文、数学和物理。
3I take part in the basketball club every Friday afternoon.
我每周五下午参加篮球俱乐部。
4
The teachers here are kind and helpful,so I get along well with them.
这里的老师和蔼可亲,乐于助人,所以我和他们相处得很好。
四、好词好句
(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通many→a variety of/a wide range of
普通
interesting-(fascinating appealing
普通】
happy delighted cheerful
普通
learngain a deeper insight into
普通
helpbenefit/contribute to
普通
busyoccupied with engaged in
加分句型
1What impresses me most is the lively atmosphere on campus.
最合我印象深刻的是校园里活跃的氛围。(主语从句)
2 Not only do I have access to excellent teachers,but I also enjoy close
friendships with my classmates.
我不仅有机会接触到优秀的老师,还与同学们建立了深厚的友谊。(部分倒装)
3 It is the colorful extracurricular activities that make my school life so enjoyable
正是丰富多彩的课外活动让我的学校生活如此愉快。(强调句)
4By participating in various clubs,I have developed my teamwork skills and
gained more confidence.
通过参加各种社团,我培养了团队合作能力,也获得了更多自信。(介词短语作状语)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
How is everything going?I am writing to share with you my wonderful
school life.
To begin with,our school has a rich curriculum,including not only basic
subjects but also optional courses like computer science.This broadens my
horizons a lot.Besides,__(话动名称)is my favorite extracurricular
activity.It not only helps me relax but also teaches me how to cooperate
with others.Above all,the friendly relationship among classmates creates a
warm atmosphere,which makes every day full of joy.
I truly enjoy my time at school.I would be happy to hear about your school
life too.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
最近一切都好吗?我写信是想和你分享我精彩的学校生活。
首先,我们学校课程丰富,不仅有基础科目,还有计算机科学等选修课。这大大开阔了我的视野。此
外,
(活动名称)是我最喜欢的课外活动。它不仅帮助我放松,还教会我如何与人合作。最
重要的是,同学之间友好的关系营造了温暖的氖围,让每一天都充满快乐。
我真的很享受在学校的时光。我也会很高兴了解你的学校生活。期待你的回信。
此致敬礼,
[你的名字]
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你叫李华,你的美国笔友Tōm来信询问你的高中学校生活。请你给
他写一封回信,介绍你的学校生活。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I'm writing to tell you something about my senior high
school life.
First of all,our school offers a wide range of subjects,such as Chinese,English
maths and physics.Among them,English is my favorite because the teacher always
makes the class lively and interesting.Secondly,I take part in the school basketball
club every Wednesday.It's a great way to build up my body and make new friends.
Moreover,my classmates are friendly and we often study together after class.The
warm atmosphere helps me feel at home.
In a word,my school life is busy but rewarding.I would be happy to know about
your school life in America.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的汤姆:
你好吗?我写信是想告诉你一些我的高中学校生活。
首先,我们学校开设了广泛的科目,如语文、英语、数学和物理。其中,英语是我最喜欢的,因为老师总是让
课堂生动有趣。其次,我每周三参加学校篮球俱乐部。这是强身健体和结交新朋友的好方式。此外,我的同学
都很友好,我们经常课后一起学习。温暖的氛围让我感到像在家一样。
总之,我的学校生活忙碌而充实。我很想了解你在美国的学校生活。期待你的回信。
此致敬礼,
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学适应高中新生活
Dear Li Hua,
I heard that you are having trouble getting used to senior high school life.I'm
writing to offer you some useful advice.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to join a club that interests you,because it helps you
make new friends and find your passion.
2.Besides,you should make a weekly study plan,which can help you manage time
better and reduce anxiety.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to keep a balance between study and
rest,as it is beneficial to staying healthy and energetic.
I hope my suggestions will be of help.I believe you will enjoy your new school life
soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
(字数:112词)
范文二:建议朋友提高英语阅读能力
Dear Tom,
You asked me for advice on improving English reading.Here are some practical
tips for you.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to read short news articles in English every day,
because they are easy to understand and help you learn current vocabulary.
2.Besides,you should underline new words while reading,which can help you
remember them in context.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to read aloud the passages you like,as it
is beneficial to both pronunciation and comprehension.
I hope my advice will work for you.I am sure you will make great progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
(字数:109词)