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高中
冀教版·必修2
Unit2 School Life写作精讲二
Unit2 School Life写作精讲二
Unit2 School Life写作精讲二
单元:冀教版必修2Unit2|单元名称:School Life写作任务:A letter of advice(建议信)一一针
对高中学校生活中的问题(如适应新环境、学业压力、时间管理、人际交往等)提出建议。
审题
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话题:针对他人在高中学校生活中遇到的困扰(如难以适应课程节奏、无法平衡学习与课
外活动、与同学相处困难等),撰写建议信,提供实用建议。
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)。
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称l。
4时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态。
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
〉点明写信目的(回应对方的问题)
>给出2-3条具体可操作的建议
,表达鼓励与美好祝愿
二、
文章结构
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开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的,简要回应对方的问题,引出下文建
议。
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主体段:分条阐述具体建议,每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清
晰。建议使用:First of all,Besides,Last but not least/Moreover/ln
addition
3结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方解决问题,收尾符合书信格式(如l hope
my advice will be of some help to you.)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
concern
n.担心;忧虑v.使担忧
advice /advise
n.建议(不可数);v.建议
beneficial benefit
adj.有益的;v./n.使受益/益处
challenge
n.挑战V.向挑战
improve /improvement
v.提高;改进;n.改进
pressure
n.压力
balance
n.平衡
overcome
v.克服
adapt
v,适应(常用adapt to)
schedule
n.时间表;日程安排
2.常用短语
短语
释义
face a challenge
面临挑战
deal with
处理;应对
take my advice
采纳我的建议
make a plan
制定计划
keep a balance between A and B
保持A与B的平衡
build up confidence
树立自信
短语
释义
relieve pressure
缓解压力
adapt to
适应
manage time wisely
明智地管理时间
get along with
与..…相处
3.基础造句
1I am writing to offer you some advice on how to adapt to school life.
我写信是为了就如何适应校园生活给你一些建议。
2 First,you should set a clear goal and make a daily schedule.
首先,你应该设定一个明确的目标并制定每日时间表。
It is beneficial to join a club to meet new friends.
参加杜团结交新朋友是有益的。
4If you follow my advice,you will soon get used to the new environment.
如果你采纳我的建议,你很快就会适应新环境。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→As far as I am concerned/From my perspective
普通
very importantof great significance
普通】
helpful beneficial rewarding
普通
try to domake every effort to do
普通
solve handle/deal with
加分句型
1Knowing that you are having trouble adapting to the new school life,I am
writing to give you some practical suggestions.
(得知你难以适应新学校生活,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。一一现在分词作原因状语)
2)Not only should you focus on your study,but also you need to participate in
school activities.
(你不仅应该专注于学习,还需要参加学校活动。一一部分倒装句型)
3 It is highly recommended that you should communicate more with your
classmates.
(强烈建议你多与同学交流。一一虚拟语气句型)
4Only in this way can you find a balance between study and relaxation.
(只有用这种方法,你中能找到学习和放松的平衡。一一倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with【遇到的问题】.Iam
writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to【建议-】,because【原因-】.Besides,you
should【建议二】,which can help you【好处二】.Last but not least,.I
strongly advise you to【建议三】,as it is beneficial to【好处三】.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will
overcome this challenge soon.
Yours sincerely
【Your Name】
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
得知你在【遇到的问题】方面遇到了困难,我写信给你提供一些有用的建议。
首先,你可以【建议一】,因为【原因一】。此外,你应该【建议二】,这能帮你【好处二】。最后但同
样重要的是,我强烈建议你【建议三】,因为这对【好处三】是有益的。
希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。我相信你很快就能克服这个挑战。
此致,
敬礼
【你的名字】
六、作文仿得
(120词左右)
题目:你的好友李明刚升入高中,写信向你倾诉他很难适应高中的学习生活,感到
压力很大。请你给他写一封回信,提出建议。
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to senior high school life.I
am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a detailed study plan,because it can help you
manage your time wisely and keep up with the lessons.Besides,you should take
part in after-school activities,which can help you relax and make new friends.Last
but not least,I strongly advise you to communicate more with your teachers,as it
is beneficial to solving problems in time.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will soon
enjoy your school life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的李明:
得知你很难适应高中学习生活,我写信给你提供一些有用的建议。
首先,你可以制定详细的学习计划,因为它能帮你明智地管理时间并跟上课程。此外,你应该参加课外活动,
这能帮你放松并结交新朋友。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你多和老师交流,因为这对及时解决问题是有
益的。
希望我的建议对你有帮助。我相信你很快就能享受你的校园生活。
此致,
敬礼
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学适应新班级
Dear Peter,
I heard that you're feeling a bit nervous about joining the new class.I'd like to offer
you some advice to help you fit in quickly.
First of all,it is a good idea to introduce yourself with a smile on the first day,
because it shows confidence and friendliness.Besides,you should actively join
group activities like class discussions or sports,which can help you make new
friends easily.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to ask your classmates for
help when you have problems,as it is beneficial to building trust and closeness.
I hope my suggestions will make your new school life enjoyable.I believe you will
soon love your new class.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
范文二:建议朋友提高英语阅读能力
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in English reading comprehension.I'd like
to share some effective methods with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English articles you are interested in,such as
short stories or news,because it helps you get used to different writing styles.
Besides,you should take notes of key words and sentence structures while reading,
which can improve your understanding.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to
read aloud every day,as it is beneficial to both reading speed and pronunciation.
I hope my advice will be of some help.I am sure you can make progress with
persistent practice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Fang