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Unit2 Friendship写作精讲二
Writing an Email to a Junior High School Friend(给初中好友写邮件)
Unit2 Friendship写作精讲二
单元:Unit2 Friendship|写作任务:Writing an Email to a Junior High School Friend(给初中好友
写邮件)
审题
1
话题:给初中时好友写一封电子邮件,分享高中新生活,回忆过去友谊,表达思念或邀请
见面,维系真挚友情。
2
体裁:电子邮件(应用文)。格式包括收件人、主题行、称呼、正文、落款。
3人称:以第一人称1为主,辅以第二人称you。
4时态:一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时(回忆过去用过去时,描述现状用现在时,
表达期待用将来时)。
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
6核心要点:问候并表达想念→回忆初中美好时光→介绍高中新生活→提出保持联系或见
面的建议→表达祝福。
二、
文章结构
1
开头段(问候+写信目的)
〉问候对方,表达想念之情
说明写信目的:分享近况、回忆友谊、邀请联系
2
主体段(回忆+分享+建议)
,①回忆1-2件初中一起经历的趣事或感人瞬间(用过去时)
,②简单介绍自己高中生活的变化与感受(用现在时)
〉③提出保持友谊的建议:如经常通信、视频聊天、假期见面等
3
结尾段(祝福+期待)
>表达对友谊的珍惜
〉祝愿对方一切顺利
>期待对方回信或见面
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
friendship
n.友谊
memory
n.记忆;回忆
keep in touch
保持联系
reunite
v.(使)重聚
nostalgic
adj.怀旧的
share
v.分享
support
n.N.支持
miss
V.想念
look forward to
期待
arrange
V.安排
2.常用短语
短语
释义
think of think about
想起
be busy with
忙于…
get used to
适应
短语
释义
make new friends
交新朋友
a precious memory
一段珍贵的回忆
from time to time
不时;偶尔
stay in touch
保持联系
have a great time
玩得开心
3.基础造句
1I'm writing to you to share my new high school life and recall the happy days
we spent together.
我写信是为了和你分享我的高中新生活,并回忆我们一起度过的快乐时光。
2I still remember the time when we played basketball after class every day.
我仍然记得我们每天课后一起打篮球的日子。
3How time flies!It's been two months since we graduated from junior high
school.
时间过得真快!我们从初中毕业已经两个月了。
4
I suggest that we keep in touch by email or video call from time to time.
我建议我们时不时通过电子邮件或视频通话保持联系。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通very happy→extremely delighted
普通good friend→close friend/best buddy
普通
remember(recall /cherish the memory of
普通
write to you drop you a line take time to write to you
加分句型
1 It has been+时间+since+从句(表示“自从..已经多久了")
It has been nearly three months since we last met.
自从上次见面已经快三个月了。
2 Looking back on those days,I still feel warm inside
回想那些日子,我内心仍然感到温暖。(现在分词短语作状语)
3 Nothing can compare to the friendship we built together.
没有什么能比得上我们一起建立的友谊。(比较结构)
I would be more than happy if we could meet during the coming holiday.
如果我们能在即将到来的假期见面,我会非常高兴。(虚拟语气)
5What impressed me most was your kindness and encouragement.
最合我印象深刻的是你的善良和鼓励。(主语从句)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Subject:Missing you!
Dear [Namel,
How time flies!It's been [since we last saw each other.I miss you so
much and often think of the wonderful days we spent together in junior
high school.
I still remember[具体回忆l】.Also,[具体回忆2]always makes me smile.Now
I'm busy with my high school life and gradually getting used to it.I've
made some new friends,but none of them can take your place.
I do hope we can keep in touch.Why not write to each other more often?If
possible,let's arrange to meet during the winter vacation.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
[Your Name]
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,给初中好友王磊写一封电子邮件,回忆一起参加学校运
动会的经历,分享你在新学校的感受,并建议假期一起去图书馆复习功课。
Subject:Can't wait to see you again!
Dear Wang Lei,
How's everything going?It's been nearly two months since we graduated from
junior high.I miss you a lot!
I still recall the school sports meeting last year.We ran the 4x 100m relay together
and won second place.What a proud moment!Those days were full of laughter and
support.
Now I'm studying in a new senior high school.The courses are more challenging,
but I'm trying my best.I've also joined the basketball club,which helps me relax
after class.
I suggest we go to the city library together during the winter vacation to review
our lessons.We can help each other and catch up on all the news.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议好友提高英语阅读能力
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in English reading.Here are some
practical tips for you.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to read short stories or news every day,because it
helps you expand vocabulary and understand sentence structures.
2.Besides,you should take notes while reading,which can improve your memory
and focus.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to discuss what you read with
classmates,as it is beneficial to sharing ideas and deepening comprehension.
I hope these suggestions will work for you.I believe you can make great progress.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Mei
(字数:118词
范文二:建议同学培养良好学习习惯
Dear Zhang Wei,
I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your study efficiency.Here is my advice.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily study plan,because it helps you
manage time and avoid procrastination.
2.Besides,you should review what you learned in class every evening,which can
strengthen your understanding.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep,as it is beneficial to
keeping your brain active and focused.
I hope my advice will be useful.I'm looking forward to your better performance.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yang
(字数:116词