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沪外版(上海外语教育出版社)·必修第二册
Unit3Food写作精讲
Giving advice about dining in China to foreign students(给外国留学生提供在中国用餐的建议)
Unit 3 Food
单元:Unit3 Food写作任务:Giving advice about dining in China to foreign students(给外国
留学生提供在中国用餐的建议)
审题
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话题:针对外国留学生在中国用餐时可能遇到的文化差异、饮食习惯和餐桌礼仪等问题,
提供实用建议。
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体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)。
3人称:以第二人称y0u为主,辅以第一人称l。
4时态:一般现在时、一般将来时。
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
>点明写信目的(回应对方对在中国用餐的困惑)
>给出2-3条具体可操作建议(如学习使用筷子、尝试地方特色菜、注意餐桌礼仪)
,表达鼓励与美好祝愿(希望对方享受中国美食)
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文章结构
1开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景(得知对方即将来华留学,对用餐有些担
心),引出下文建议。
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主体段:分条阐述建议,每条搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清晰。
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结尾段:表达祝愿,鼓励对方大胆尝试,享受中国饮食文化。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
dining
n.用餐;就餐
cuisine
n.菜肴;烹饪
chopsticks
n.筷子
specialty
n.特色菜
table manners
餐桌礼仪
spicy
adj.辛辣的
flavor
n.味道
adapt
vi.适应
appreciate
V.欣赏;感激
recommend
V.推荐
2.常用短语
短语
释义
be unfamiliar with
对.…不熟悉
get used to
习惯
try out
尝试
be open to
乐于接受
make a good impression
留下好印象
follow the local customs
遵循当地习俗
enjoy a meal
享受一餐
have a try
试一试
3.基础造句
I am writing to give you some advice on dining in China.
我写信是为了给你一些在中国用餐的建议。
2 First,you should learn how to use chopsticks properly.
首先,你应该学会正确使用筷子。
3It is a good idea to try local specialties,because they are delicious.
尝试当地特色菜是个好主意,因为它们很美味。
4If you follow these tips,you will have a wonderful dining experience.
如果你遵循这些建议,你会拥有很棒的就餐体验。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance
普通
deliciousappetizing mouth-watering
普通
trysample/have a taste of
普通
shoud it is advisable to it is strongly recommended that
加分句型
1Learning that you are having difficulty with dining in China,I am writing to
offer you some practical advice.
得知你在中国用餐方面有困难,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should you master the skill of using chopsticks,but you should also
be aware of Chinese table manners.
你不仅应该掌握使用筷子的技巧,还应该了解中国的餐桌礼仪。(部分倒装)
3 It is highly recommended that you explore various local cuisines.
强烈建议你探索各种地方菜肴。(虚拟语气)
Only by immersing yourself in the local food culture can you truly appreciate
the charm of Chinese cuisine.
只有沉浸在当地的饮食文化中,你扌能真正领略中国美食的魅力。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am delighted to hear that you are coming to study in China.However,knowing
that you may feel unsure about dining here,I am writing to offer you some useful
advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to learn how to use chopsticks,because it will help you
enjoy meals more conveniently.Besides,you should try some local specialties,
which can give you a taste of authentic Chinese flavors.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to be aware of basic table manners,such as not sticking
chopsticks upright in your rice,as it is considered impolite.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am sure you will have a fantastic
time exploring Chinese food.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
六、
作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你的外国朋友ack即将来中国留学,请你给他写一封建议信,帮助
他适应在中国用餐。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon.Knowing that you are a bit
worried about dining here,I am writing to offer you some practical advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to practice using chopsticks before you arrive,because
most Chinese restaurants do not offer forks.Besides,you should try a variety of
local cuisines,such as Sichuan hot pot or Cantonese dim sum,which will amaze
your taste buds.Last but not least,I strongly recommend that you follow basic
table manners,like waiting for the host to start eating before you begin.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I am confident that you will fall in love with
Chinese food soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议留学生适应中国餐桌礼仪
Dear Mike,
Welcome to China!I'm writing to give you some advice on dining here.
First of all,it is a good idea to learn how to use chopsticks,because it shows
respect for local culture.Besides,you should wait for the elder to start eating first,
which is considered polite in China.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to try
different dishes instead of ordering only one,as it is beneficial to experiencing the
variety of Chinese cuisine.
I hope my tips will help you enjoy your meals.Have a wonderful time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议留学生注意中国饮食特点
Dear Sarah,
Glad to hear you're curious about Chinese food.Here are some useful suggestions
for eating in China.
First of all,it is a good idea to tell the waiter your spiciness preference,because
many dishes can be adjusted.Besides,you should always order rice or noodles as
the staple food,which helps balance the flavors.Last but not least,I strongly
advise you to share dishes with friends,as it is beneficial to building friendship and
trying more tastes.
I hope my advice will make your dining experience enjoyable.Feel free to ask me
any questions.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei