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Unit3 The way we are写作精讲
Writing a reply in an advice column(写建议专栏的回复信)
Unit3 The way we are写作精讲
单元:Unit3 The way we are写作任务:Writing a reply in an advice column(写建议专栏的▣
复信)
审题
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话题:针对读者在自我认知、性格特点、行为方式等方面遇到的困惑与烦恼,以专栏作者
身份撰写回复信,提供理解与建议
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议专栏回复信)
>特点:面向公开读者,但以回信给具体提问者形式呈现
>语气:温和理解、专业友善、具有鼓励性
3
人称:以第二人称y0u为主,辅以第一人称1(代表专栏作者)
4
时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
√理解并回应提问者的困扰
给出2-3条具体、可操作的建议
表达鼓励与积极期望
二、
文章结构
开头段
>礼貌回应提问者,表明理解其困扰
>点明写信目的一一提供建议与支持
,自然引出下文
2
主体段
,分条阐述2-3条具体建议
〉每条建议搭配合理的理由或解释
>使用连接词(First of all,Besides,Last but not least)衔接,逻辑清晰
3
结尾段
>
表达鼓励与信心
>1
祝愿提问者找到适合自己的方式
>署名(专栏作者)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
词性
释义
struggle
n./N.
挣扎;奋斗
identity
n.
身份;自我认同
personality
n.
个性;性格
unique
adj.
独特的
confident
adj.
自信的
comfortable
adj.
舒适的;自在的
accept
V.
接受
improve
V.
改善;提高
reflection
n.
反思;反映
embrace
拥抱;欣然接受
2.常用短语
短语
释义
struggle with
与斗争;在..上挣扎
短语
释义
feel anxious about
对…感到焦虑
step out of one's comfort zone
走出舒适区
embrace who you are
接纳自己
build up confidence
树立自信
focus on one's strengths
关注自己的优势
find a balance between A and B
在A与B之间找到平衡
make a difference
有所改变;产生影响
3.基础造句
1I understand that you are struggling with the pressure to be someone you're
not.
我理解你正在为成为别人期望的样子而挣扎。
2 First of all,it's important to accept your true self.
首先,接纳真实的自己很重要。
Try to focus on your own strengths instead of comparing yourself with others.
试着关注自己的优势,而不是与他人比较。
4By doing so,you will feel more confident and comfortable in your own skin.
这样做,你会更加自信,也更自在地做自己。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→From my perspective/As far as'm concerned
普通very important→of great significance
普通】
helpfulbeneficial/valuable
普通
try to domake every effort to do
普通
understand relate to identify with
加分句型
1现在分词作状语
Hearing that you feel confused about your identity,I'm writing to share some
thoughts with you.
听说你对自己的身份感到困惑,我写信与你分享一些想法。
2部分倒装句型
Not only should you accept your uniqueness,but you should also celebrate it.
你不仅应该接受自己的独特,还应该为之喝彩。
3虚拟语气(建议类)
It is strongly recommended that you should focus on what makes you happy.
强烈建议你关注那些让你快乐的事情。
4倒装句型
Only when you learn to embrace yourself can you truly grow.
只有学会接纳自己,你扌能真正成长。
5定语从句
Try to find a hobby that brings you joy and helps you express yourself.
试着找到一个能带给你快乐并帮助你表达自己的爱好。
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear
[提问者署名,
I'm sorry to hear that you are struggling with
(提问者的因扰).I
totally understand how you feel.Here is some advice that I hope will help.
First of all,it is a good idea to
(建议一),because
(原因一)·
Besides,you should
(建议二),which can help you
(好处二).
Last but not least,why not
(建议三)?This will make it easier for
you to
(好处三).
Remember,there is no "right"way to be.I'm confident that you will find
your own path and shine in your own way.
Yours sincerely,
[专栏作者署名】
六、作文仿得(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是学校心理专栏的作者TOm,收到一封读者来信。这位读者说自
己在学校总是被要求要“合群”,但自己更喜欢独处,感到很困惑和压力。请写一封
回复信,帮助他/她理解并接纳自己的性格特点。
Dear Friend,
I'm sorry to hear that you are struggling with the pressure to be more sociable.I
totally understand how you feel.Here is some advice that I hope will help.
First of all,it is a good idea to accept that being alone doesn't mean being lonely
because everyone has a different way of recharging energy.Besides,you should
find activities you truly enjoy,which can help you build confidence and meet like-
minded people naturally.Last but not least,why not have an honest talk with your
close friends?This will make it easier for them to understand and respect your
personality.
Remember,there is no "right"way to be.I'm confident that you will find your own
path and shine in your own way.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
军作要点总结
要点
说明
★语气
温暖理解,不评判,不否定
★结构
三段式:回应困扰→给出建议→鼓励结尾
★建议数量
2-3条,具体可操作
★人称
以you为主,体现对话感
紧扣Unit3"The way we are"-一认识自我、
★主题契合
接纳自我
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友提高阅读理解能力
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty in reading comprehension.I am writing
to offer you some practical advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it can
enlarge your vocabulary and familiarise you with different text types.Besides,you
should take notes while reading,which helps you grasp the main ideas and details.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to discuss the passages with your
classmates,as it is beneficial to deepen your understanding and share different
opinions.
I hope my suggestions will be useful.I'm sure you will make great progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
范文二:建议同学克服演讲恐惧
Dear Wang Fang,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on overcoming the fear of giving a
speech.I'd like to share some helpful tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to practice your speech in front of a mirror,because it
can help you observe your body language and improve confidence.Besides,you
should record yourself speaking,which allows you to find and correct weak points.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to start with a small audience,such as your
close friends,as it is beneficial to reduce anxiety and get constructive feedback.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm looking forward to your first successful
speech.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Ming