Unit 4 Travellers' tales 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中 沪教版（上海教育出版社）·必修第三册 Unit4 Travellers'tales写作精讲 Writing a travel tale(写旅行故事) Unit4 Travellers'tales写作精讲 单元：Unit4 Travellers'tales|写作任务：Writing a travel tale(写旅行故事) 审题 1 话题：讲述一次旅行经历，包括目的地、所见所闻、个人感受或感悟 2 体裁：记叙文（叙事类），可带有描写和议论 3 人称：以第一人称I为主，必要时使用we(如结伴旅行) 4时态：以一般过去时为核心时态，描写景色或感受可用过去进行时或过去完成时点 缀， 结尾感悟可用一般现在时 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词（故事类可略长，但建议控制在130词以内） 6 核心要点： 交代旅行时间、地点、人物（背景） √描写途中一件印象深刻的事或见闻（主体) √表达个人感受或从旅行中学到的东西（结尾升华） 文章结构 1 开头段：开篇点题→×年×月（或某次假期），我（和谁）去了哪里，心情如何 2 主体段：叙述具体经历 ，先写到达后的第一印象（视觉、嗅觉、声音等感官描写） 〉再写途中遇到的特别的人、事或景 〉可穿插一个小插曲（迷路、帮助他人、品尝美食等），增加故事性 3结尾段：总结这次旅行的意义→它让我明白…（成长、文化差异、珍惜自然 等)，呼应主题 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 memory n.回忆；记忆力 destination n.目的地 adventure n.冒险 scenery n.风景（不可数） experience v.体验n.经历 explore v.探索；exploration n.探索 culture n.文化；cultural adj.文化的 impression n.印象；impress v.给.留下印象 2.常用短语 短语 释义 set off 出发 on the way 在路上 be amazed by 对…感到惊叹 leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象 broaden one's horizons 开阔眼界 be caught in 遭遇（下雨/堵车等) take a deep breath 深呼吸 come across 偶然遇到 3.基础造句 1Last summer,I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents. 去年夏天，我和父母去北京旅行了一次。 2 The moment I stepped onto the Great Wall,I was amazed by its grandeur. 我一踏上长城，就被它的雄伟震撼了。 3 During the journey,I came across a local artist who taught me how to paint. 旅途中，我偶然遇到一位当地艺术家，他教我画画。 4This travel experience taught me that the world is much bigger than I imagined. 这次旅行经历告诉我，世界比我想象的大得多。 四、好词好句 (高级加分句型) 高级词汇替换 普通bea utiful→breathtaking/picturesque/stunning 普通 interesting-fascinating remarkable 普通 I sawI was greeted by /I caught sight of 普通 finally eventually in the end 加分句型 It was not until I stood on the top of the mountain that I fully understood the beauty of nature. 直到我站在山顶，于真正理解了大自然的美。（强调句型） 2 What impressed me most was the kindness of the locals. 给我印象最深刻的是当地人的善良。（主语从句） 3No sooner had we arrived at the village than it began to rain. 我们刚到达村庄，就开始下雨了。(no sooner..than..倒装) 4Exhausted as we were,we felt a sense of achievement 虽然筋疲力尽，但我们感到一种成就感。(s引导的倒装让步从句) 五、写作模板(100-120词) 模板 Last[时间]，I visited[地点]with【人物l. Upon arrival,,I was immediately struck by[第-印象/景色l.During the trip, one thing left a deep impression on me.[具体经历：遇到的人/事/意外]. This travel experience not only broadened my horizons but also taught me that []I will treasure this memory forever. 参考翻译： 去年/某时，我和[人物]去了[地点]。 到达时，我立刻被[第一印象/景色]所震撼。旅途中，有一件事给我留下了深刻印象。[具体经历]。 这次旅行不仅开阔了我的眼界，也让我明白[感悟]。我会永远珍藏这段记忆。 范文示例(120词) Last summer,I visited the ancient town of Lijiang with my parents Upon arrival,I was immediately struck by the old stone streets and the sound of running water.During the trip,what impressed me most was an old lady selling handmade paper umbrellas.She told me that each umbrella took three days to make.Not only did I buy one as a souvenir,but I also learned the value of patience and craftsmanship. This travel experience not only broadened my horizons but also taught me that the real beauty of a place lies in its people and their stories.I will treasure this memory forever. 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你上个月独自去云南大理旅行，请写一篇旅行故事，讲述你在洱海 边的一次偶遇和感悟。 参考范文 Last month,I travelled to Dali,Yunnan Province all by myself.It was my first solo trip,and I felt both nervous and excited. On the second day,I rented a bike and rode along Erhai Lake.The scenery was breathtaking-blue water,white clouds,and distant mountains.Halfway through, I came across a young painter sitting by the lakeside.He was painting the sunset.I stopped to watch,and he kindly let me try his brush.I painted poorly,but we laughed together.That moment made me realize that travel is not about perfect pictures,but about those unexpected connections. This trip taught me that stepping out of your comfort zone can lead to the most beautiful memories.I will never forget that sunset and the stranger who became a friend. 参考译文： 上个月，我独自一人去了云南大理。那是我第一次独自旅行，我既紧张又兴奋。 第二天，我租了一辆自行车，沿着洱海骑行。景色分人叹为观止一一蓝色的湖水、白云和远山。途中，我遇到 一位坐在湖边的年轻画家，他正在画日落。我停下来观看，他好意让我试试他的画笔。我画得很糟，但我们一 起大笑起来。那一刻让我意识到，旅行不在于完美的照片，而在于那些意外的相遇。 这次旅行让我明白，走出舒适区会带来最美好的回忆。我永远不会忘记那个日落和那个成为朋友的陌生人。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：海滨度假之旅 Dear Lucy, I'm writing to share my wonderful trip to Sanya.It was truly an unforgettable experience 1.The beach was amazing:soft white sand and crystal-clear water.I swam and collected seashells every morning. 2.I also tried snorkeling.Seeing colorful fish and coral reefs underwater was breathtaking and made me feel connected to nature. 3.Last but not least,I enjoyed fresh coconut and seafood.The local food added special flavor to the journey. I hope you can visit there one day.You'll definitely fall in love with it. Yours sincerely, Mike (词数：107） 范文二：山间徒步之旅 Dear Tom, I just returned from a hiking trip in Huangshan.I'd like to tell you about the highlights 1.The sunrise at the top was incredible.Golden light spread over the sea of clouds -a scene I will never forget. 2.Besides,the steep stone stairs challenged our endurance.Though tired,I felt proud when reaching every peak. 3.Finally,chatting with other hikers along the path was fun.We shared stories and encouraged each other,which made the trip more meaningful. A journey like this sharpens both body and mind.I really recommend it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (词数：111)