内容正文:
高中
北师大版·必修1
Unit2 Sports and Fitness写作精讲
A True Story(真实故事写作)
Unit2 Sports and Fitness写作精讲
单元:Unit2 Sports and Fitness|写作任务:A True Story(真实故事写作)
审题
1话题:讲述一个与体育或健身相关的真实经历,可以是自己或他人的故事,体现运动带来
的变化、感悟或成长
2
体裁:记叙文(真实故事)
3人称:以第一人称为主(讲述自己的故事);若讲述他人故事,可用第三人称he/she
4
时态:以一般过去时为核心时态,辅以一般现在时表达感悟或当前状态
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>交代故事背景(时间、地点、人物、起因)
,描述具体事件经过(遇到困难、过程、转折点)
>阐阴结果与收获(运动带来的改变、感悟或后示)
文章结构
1
开头段
>引出故事发生的背景(时间、地点、当时的状态)
〉点明故事与运动/健身相关,引起读者兴趣
2
主体段
〉按时间顺序叙述事件经过:遇到的困难或挑战→采取的行动(坚持训练、改进方法等)→
关键转折点或突破
加入细节描写(动作、心理、环境)使故事生动
>体现从失败到进步、从迷茫到坚定的变化过程
3
结尾段
>总结故事带来的感悟或改变(如自信、毅力、健康等)
>升华主题:运动不仅增强体质,更塑造品格
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
fitness
n.健康;健身
challenge
n.挑战V.向..挑战
effort
n.努力;尽力
strength
n.力量;优势
endurance
n.耐力;持久力
progress
n,进步v,进步
goal
n.目标
determination
n.决心
failure
n.失败
achievement
n.成就;成绩
2.常用短语
短语
释义
take up a sport
开始从事一项运动
go through a difficult period
经历一段困难时期
push oneself to the limit
挑战自己的极限
短语
释义
build up strength/end urance
增强力量/耐力
make a breakthrough
取得突破
stay positive
保持积极
never give up
永不放弃
turn out to be
结果是;证明是
learn a lesson from
从…中吸取教训
be proud of
以…为自豪
3.基础造句
1
It was a cold winter morning when I decided to take up running.
那是一个寒冷的冬日早晨,我决定开始跑步。
2 At first,I could hardly finish a single lap without stopping.
起初,我几乎无法不停下跑完一圈。
3
Day by day,I began to make progress and felt more energetic.
天天过去,我开始取得进步,感觉更有活力了。
4
This experience taught me that perseverance is the key to success.
这次经历让我明白,坚持不懈是成功的关键。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通hard→challenging/demanding
普通
want to dobe determined to do/be eager to do
普通
very tired exhausted worn out
普通
finallyeventually in the end
加分句型
1The moment I crossed the finish line,I knew I had achieved something
unforgettable.
当冲过终点线的那一刻,我知道我完成了一件难忘的事。(the momenti引导时间状语从句)
2What impressed me most was not the victory itself,but the effort I had put
into it.
最合我印象深刻的不是胜利本身,而是我为此付出的努力。(what主语从句+not.but.结构)
Although I wanted to give up halfway,I kept telling myself that every step
forward counted.
虽然我想过半途而废,但我不断告诉自己,每向前一步都有意义。(although引导让步状语从句+that宾
语从句)
4Only by pushing myself to the limit did I discover what I was truly capable of.
只有挑战自己的极限,我扌发现自己真正能做什么。(oly+介词短语引起部分倒装)
5It was this running experience that changed my attitude towards difficulties.
正是这次跑步经历改变了我对待困难的态度。(强调句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
My First Marathon Experience
(时间/场景),I decided to(参与某项运动)·At the beginning,I faced many
difficulties such as(具体困难).I felt like giving up,but(转折点/内心坚持)·
Then I(采取的行动/改进方法).Day after day,I noticed that(取得的进步).
Finally(关键事件/结果)·
Looking back,I realize that(感悟/收获).This true story reminds me that
(升华主题)
参考翻译:
我的第一次马拉松经历
(时间/场景),我决定(参与某项运动)。起初,我面临许多困难,比如(具体困难)。我想要放弃,
但是(转折点/内心坚持)。
然后我(采取的行动改进方法)。日复一日,我注意到(取得的进步)。最后,(关键事件/结果)。
回顾过去,我意识到(感悟/收获)。这个真实的故事提醒我(升华主题)。
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:讲述你或身边人通过坚持一项运动(如跑步、游泳、篮球等)获得成长
的真实故事。
My First 5K Run
It was a rainy Saturday morning when I decided to join the school's 5K charity run.
As a beginner,I could barely run for ten minutes without feeling exhausted.
Halfway through,my legs ached and I wanted to stop.
But then I saw an old man with a walking stick cheering for the runners.His smile
encouraged me to keep going.I slowed down but never stopped.Step by step,I
finally crossed the finish line,drenched in sweat but filled with joy.
That day taught me that success is not about speed-it's about the courage to keep
moving forward.Now whenever I face difficulties,I remember that rainy morning
and tell myself:just keep running.
参考译文:
我的第一次五公里跑
那是一个下着雨的周六早晨,我决定参加学校的五公里慈善跑。作为一个新手,我几乎跑不了十分钟就累得不
行。跑到一半时,我的双腿酸痛,想要停下。
但这时我看到一位拄着拐杖的老人正在为选手们加油。他的微笑鼓励我继续前进。我放慢了速度,但从未停
下。一步一步,我终于冲过了终点线,浑身是汗却充满喜悦。
那天让我明白,成功不在于速度一一而在于有勇气继续向前。如今每当我遇到困难,我都会想起那个雨天的早
晨,并告诉自己:继续跑下去。
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议好友适应新学校生活
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your new school.I'm
writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to join a club or a sports team,because it helps you
make new friends and feel part of the school.Besides,you should take an active
part in class discussions,which can improve your confidence and communication
skills.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to keep a positive attitude,as it is
beneficial to turning challenges into opportunities.
I hope my suggestions will help you.I'm sure you will enjoy your new school life
soon.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
范文二:建议同学克服考试焦虑
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm sorry to learn that you often feel nervous before exams.I am writing to share
some effective methods with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a study plan ahead of time,because it can help
you review step by step and reduce anxiety.Besides,you should take deep breaths
when feeling stressed,which can calm your mind and improve concentration.Last
but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep before exams,as it is
beneficial to better memory and clearer thinking.
I hope my advice will be useful.I believe you will do well in your exams.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Ming