Unit 4 课时4 Section 3 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版七年级上册

**基本信息** 初中英语Unit 4 The Earth课时4 Writing同步练，分层清晰，从词汇句型到语篇写作递进，适配新授课巩固与能力提升，培养语言能力与环保意识。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |A组|词汇、短语、基础句型|中译英夯实核心词汇短语，强化基础语言能力| |B组|句型结构与句子翻译|聚焦单元核心句型转换，提升单句表达准确性| |C组|语篇写作与综合应用|设置环保主题短文、演讲稿等情境任务，培养逻辑思维与语篇组织能力|

Unit 4 The Earth 课时4 Section 3 Writing 分层作业 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 ( 词汇 w ebsite n . 网站 own adj. 自己的；本人的 however adv. 然而； 不过 短语 high mountains 高山 blue seas and beautiful rivers 蓝色海洋与美丽河流 water pollution 水污染 plastic pollution 塑料污染 because of 因为（后接名词 / 短语） sea animals 海洋动物 stop polluting rivers and lakes 停止污染江河湖泊 bring one’s own shopping bags 自带购物袋 harm the Earth 伤害地球 our only home 我们唯一的家园 in many ways 在许多方面 protect the Earth 保护地球 save water and electricity 节约水电 cut down trees 砍伐树木 be home to … 是…… 的家园 thousands of 成千上万 句型 1. There are high mountains, blue seas and beautiful rivers on the Earth.地球上有高山、蓝色的海洋和美丽的河流。 2. The Earth is home to thousands of plants and animals.地球是成千上万动植物的家园。 3. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways .然而，我们正在以多种方式伤害地球。 4. It is important for us to do something to protect the Earth.对我们来说做些事情来保护地球是很重要的。 5. If we do small things, the Earth will become bette r.如果我们做一些小事，地球将会变得更好。 ) 中译英 1._______________ 高山 9._______________ 蓝色海洋与美丽河流 2._______________ 水污染 10._______________ 塑料污染 3._______________ 因为（后接名词 / 短语） 11._______________ 海洋动物 4._______________ 停止污染江河湖泊 12._______________ 自带购物袋 5._______________ 伤害地球 13._______________ 我们唯一的家园 6._______________ 在许多方面 14._______________ 保护地球 7._______________ 节约水电 15._______________ 砍伐树木 8._______________ 是…… 的家园 16. _______________成千上万 1.地球上有高山、蓝色的海洋和美丽的河流。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.地球是成千上万动植物的家园。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.这颗美丽的星球是我们唯一的家园。然而，我们正在以多种方式伤害地球。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 4.例如，水污染很严重。海洋动物因为塑料污染正在死亡。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 5.我们只有一个地球，所以我们必须保护它。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 6.工厂应该停止污染江河湖泊。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 7.我们可以自带购物袋去超市。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 8.我们可以通过节约水电来保护地球。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 9.对我们来说做些事保护地球很重要。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 10.如果我们做些小事，地球将会变得更好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ (一) 地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。学校校刊 school life 正在征集以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。 提示： 1. 重要性：地球是一个美丽的行星，有……；是动植物、人类的家园。 2. 主要问题：说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。 3. 措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举两项措施） Let’s protect the Earth ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) 为倡导环保生活，学校将举行主题为“我是环保小卫士”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇题为“Let’s be Green”的演讲稿，号召全校同学加入环保行动。70词左右。 内容要点： 1. 走路或者骑车去学校。 2. 在学校多种树，在班级可以创建“绿色角”，植物会给我们生产新鲜空气。 3. 在家和在学校节约用水和用电，比如，离开教室应该关灯，关大屏幕。 4. 其他方面……(写1点即可) 提示词: save water and electricity 节约用水用电；a big screen 大屏幕；disposable 一次性的 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Let’s be Green Dear teachers and classmates, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三) 假如你是李华，你最近观看了法国的地理纪录片《家园》(Home)，真切地认识到地球的壮丽与脆弱如此并存。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，呼吁人们爱护环境，保护地球。 The Earth is amazing. (1)… (2)… The Earth is easily hurt. (1)… (2)… We should... (1)… (2)… 要求： （1）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； （4）标点正确，书写工整，文章连贯。 Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet: it is not only amazing but also easily hurt. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四) ．地球是人类共同的家园。作为中学生，我们应该为保护地球（protect the Earth）贡献自己的一份力量。请你以“How to Protect the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈我们可以做哪些力所能及的事来保护地球。 写作提示： 1. 开头点明地球是我们的家园（The Earth is our home.）； 2. 中间用First/Second/Third列出2-3条具体建议（如 plant trees, save water/energy, use fewer plastic bags, pick up rubbish等，均出自本单元词汇）； 3. 结尾发出号召（Let’s work together to protect the Earth.）。 4. 词数80左右；书写工整，卷面整洁。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (一) （25-26九年级下·湖南岳阳·学业考试模拟）世界地球日（World Earth Day）2026年的4月22日，是第57个世界地球日（World Earth Day）。珍爱地球，点滴做起。为响应全球可持续发展目标，我校环保小组正在发起以“Small Steps, Big Impact”（点滴之举，影响深远）为主题的环保倡议活动。请你用英文写一篇倡议书，号召大家从自己做起，从小事做起，身体力行保护环境。请围绕以下几个方面，谈谈具体的做法，以及这样做的益处。 要求： 1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2）可适当增加细节，使行文自然流畅； 3）80-100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear friends, As we all know, the environmental problem is getting much more serious nowadays! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) （2026·甘肃天水·中考真题）假设你是李华，在六月五日世界环境日这天，你收到了英国好友Jack给你写的一封邮件。请你认真阅读后，回复一封邮件。 要求：1．词数约80词；2．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．内容条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；4．文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等信息。 Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? June 5 is World Environment Day. I’ve heard that the topic of China for this year is “Green Changes for a Beautiful China”. Have you noticed any warm green changes around you? Does your lifestyle change a little? Please share them with me! I’m looking forward to your reply! All the best! Jack Dear Jack, I hope this email finds you well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 The Earth 课时4 Section 3 Writing 分层作业 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 ( 词汇 w ebsite n . 网站 own adj. 自己的；本人的 however adv. 然而； 不过 短语 high mountains 高山 blue seas and beautiful rivers 蓝色海洋与美丽河流 water pollution 水污染 plastic pollution 塑料污染 because of 因为（后接名词 / 短语） sea animals 海洋动物 stop polluting rivers and lakes 停止污染江河湖泊 bring one’s own shopping bags 自带购物袋 harm the Earth 伤害地球 our only home 我们唯一的家园 in many ways 在许多方面 protect the Earth 保护地球 save water and electricity 节约水电 cut down trees 砍伐树木 be home to … 是…… 的家园 thousands of 成千上万 句型 1. There are high mountains, blue seas and beautiful rivers on the Earth.地球上有高山、蓝色的海洋和美丽的河流。 2. The Earth is home to thousands of plants and animals.地球是成千上万动植物的家园。 3. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways .然而，我们正在以多种方式伤害地球。 4. It is important for us to do something to protect the Earth.对我们来说做些事情来保护地球是很重要的。 5. If we do small things, the Earth will become bette r.如果我们做一些小事，地球将会变得更好。 ) 中译英 1._______________ 高山 9._______________ 蓝色海洋与美丽河流 2._______________ 水污染 10._______________ 塑料污染 3._______________ 因为（后接名词 / 短语） 11._______________ 海洋动物 4._______________ 停止污染江河湖泊 12._______________ 自带购物袋 5._______________ 伤害地球 13._______________ 我们唯一的家园 6._______________ 在许多方面 14._______________ 保护地球 7._______________ 节约水电 15._______________ 砍伐树木 8._______________ 是…… 的家园 16. _______________成千上万 【答案】1.high mountains 2.water pollution 3.because of 4.stop polluting rivers and lakes5.harm the Earth 6.in many ways 7.save water and electricity 8.be home to …9.blue seas and beautiful rivers10.plastic pollution 11.sea animals 12.bring one’s own shopping bags 13.our only home 14.protect the Earth 15.cut down trees 16. thousands of 1.地球上有高山、蓝色的海洋和美丽的河流。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】There are high mountains, blue seas and beautiful rivers on the Earth. 2.地球是成千上万动植物的家园。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Earth is home to thousands of plants and animals. 3.这颗美丽的星球是我们唯一的家园。然而，我们正在以多种方式伤害地球。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】This beautiful planet is our only home. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. 4.例如，水污染很严重。海洋动物因为塑料污染正在死亡。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】For example, there is serious water pollution. Sea animals are dying because of plastic pollution. 5.我们只有一个地球，所以我们必须保护它。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. 6.工厂应该停止污染江河湖泊。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Factories should stop polluting rivers and lakes. 7.我们可以自带购物袋去超市。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We can bring our own shopping bags to the supermarket. 8.我们可以通过节约水电来保护地球。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】We can protect the Earth by saving water and electricity. 9.对我们来说做些事保护地球很重要。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It is important for us to do something to protect the Earth. 10.如果我们做些小事，地球将会变得更好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】If we do small things, the Earth will become better. (一) 地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。学校校刊 school life 正在征集以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。 提示： 1. 重要性：地球是一个美丽的行星，有……；是动植物、人类的家园。 2. 主要问题：说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。 3. 措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举两项措施） Let’s protect the Earth ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Let’s protect the Earth The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky. The Earth is home to all animals and plants. However, the Earth is facing a lot of problems. People are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people are cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. Factories and family burn things to make energy. It pollutes the air and makes many people get ill. We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. Let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish. We should put it into the dustbin. Second, we must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, we should take the bus or underground more to go to school or go to work. All in all, if we don’t want anything bad to happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。根据提示，点明地球的重要性。 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示，说出地球面临的污染问题和危害，以及我们可以采取的措施。 第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家一起保护地球。 [亮点词汇] ① for example 比如 ② cut down 砍倒 ③ natural disasters 自然灾害 ④ take action 采取措施 ⑤ all in all 总之 [高分句型] ① There are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. (which引导定语从句) ② All in all, if we don’t want anything bad to happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth. (if引导条件状语从句) (二) 为倡导环保生活，学校将举行主题为“我是环保小卫士”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇题为“Let’s be Green”的演讲稿，号召全校同学加入环保行动。70词左右。 内容要点： 1. 走路或者骑车去学校。 2. 在学校多种树，在班级可以创建“绿色角”，植物会给我们生产新鲜空气。 3. 在家和在学校节约用水和用电，比如，离开教室应该关灯，关大屏幕。 4. 其他方面……(写1点即可) 提示词: save water and electricity 节约用水用电；a big screen 大屏幕；disposable 一次性的 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Let’s be Green Dear teachers and classmates, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Let’s be Green Dear teachers and classmates, To live a green life, let’s take action! First, we can walk or ride bikes to school. Then, plant more trees at school and create a “green corner” in our class—plants produce fresh air for us. Also, save water and electricity: turn off lights and the big screen when leaving classrooms. What’s more, stop using disposable products like plastic bags. Let’s be green guards together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需覆盖环保行动的全部提示内容，适当补充细节，突出倡议的号召力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以开头引出“环保”主题，号召同学们参与行动； 第二步，依次阐述步行/骑车上学、校园植树建“绿色角”、节约水电等环保做法； 第三步，补充一个额外环保细节(如减少用一次性用品)，收尾呼吁大家践行。 [亮点词汇] ①walk or ride bikes 步行或骑车 ②create a “green corner” 创建“绿色角” ③disposable products 一次性用品 [高分句型] ①Let’s be green guards together! (祈使句) (三) 假如你是李华，你最近观看了法国的地理纪录片《家园》(Home)，真切地认识到地球的壮丽与脆弱如此并存。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，呼吁人们爱护环境，保护地球。 The Earth is amazing. (1)… (2)… The Earth is easily hurt. (1)… (2)… We should... (1)… (2)… 要求： （1）字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； （4）标点正确，书写工整，文章连贯。 Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet: it is not only amazing but also easily hurt. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Recently, I watched the documentary Home. It made me see two sides of our planet: it is not only amazing but also easily hurt. As we all know, the Earth is amazing. We can see beautiful landscapes everywhere. However, the Earth is easily hurt. People burn things and this pollutes the air. Besides, people put rubbish into the sea and under the ground. This pollutes the water and soil. We must protect our Earth. First, we should plant more trees. Second, we mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Most importantly, we must turn off the lights when we leave the room. If we can do these, our Earth will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，用一般现在时 明确要点：地球的美景；地球也很容易受到伤害；保护地球（具体举措） 确定人称：第一人称（we）和第三人称（The Earth） 注意事项：字数80词左右；不得出现真实姓名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，地球非常的美丽 主体段：地球容易受伤，具体列举伤害地球的行为 结尾段：保护地球，提出具体举措。呼吁大家保护地球，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：地球很美 景色描述：beautiful landscapes/amazing nature等 要点二：地球受伤 行为描述：burn things/pollute the air/put rubbish into the sea等 位置描述：under the ground/on the Earth等 要点三：保护地球 逻辑展开：first/second/most importantly等 行为描述：plant more trees/put the rubbish in the right place/turn off the lights等 (四) ．地球是人类共同的家园。作为中学生，我们应该为保护地球（protect the Earth）贡献自己的一份力量。请你以“How to Protect the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈我们可以做哪些力所能及的事来保护地球。 写作提示： 1. 开头点明地球是我们的家园（The Earth is our home.）； 2. 中间用First/Second/Third列出2-3条具体建议（如 plant trees, save water/energy, use fewer plastic bags, pick up rubbish等，均出自本单元词汇）； 3. 结尾发出号召（Let’s work together to protect the Earth.）。 4. 词数80左右；书写工整，卷面整洁。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Earth is our home. It is home to thousands of plants and animals. But now it is in great danger because of pollution. So it is our duty to do something to protect our only home. First, we can plant more trees and save water and electricity in our daily life. Second, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of using plastic ones. Third, we can pick up rubbish in public places and tell our friends not to harm the Earth. If everyone does small things, our planet will become better. Let’s work together to protect the Earth! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①开头点明地球是万物的家园，点明地球现状；②用 First/Second/Third 列出 3 条具体保护建议；③加入 if 条件状语从句提升文采，结尾发出号召 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：词数 80 词以上；运用本单元短语与句型；要点齐全，语句通顺 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明地球是动植物家园，受污染威胁，引出保护地球的责任（单元短语 be home to, our only home, because of） 主体段：First/Second/Third 分层列举环保举措，复用单元核心短语 结尾段：if 条件句升华主题，发出号召 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开头点明地球是我们的家园 相关表达： The Earth is our home. / It is home to thousands of plants and animals. /in great danger /because of pollution / It is our duty to do something to protect our only home. 要点二：具体建议（单元核心短语） 相关建议： plant more trees 多植树；save water and electricity 节约水电；bring our own shopping bags 自带购物袋；pick up rubbish 捡拾垃圾；in public places 在公共场所；harm the Earth 伤害地球 要点三：结尾发出号召 相关表达： If everyone does small things, our planet will become better.（if 条件状语从句，主将从现） Let’s work together to protect the Earth! (一) （25-26九年级下·湖南岳阳·学业考试模拟）世界地球日（World Earth Day）2026年的4月22日，是第57个世界地球日（World Earth Day）。珍爱地球，点滴做起。为响应全球可持续发展目标，我校环保小组正在发起以“Small Steps, Big Impact”（点滴之举，影响深远）为主题的环保倡议活动。请你用英文写一篇倡议书，号召大家从自己做起，从小事做起，身体力行保护环境。请围绕以下几个方面，谈谈具体的做法，以及这样做的益处。 要求： 1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2）可适当增加细节，使行文自然流畅； 3）80-100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear friends, As we all know, the environmental problem is getting much more serious nowadays! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear friends, As we all know, the environmental problem is getting much more serious nowadays! As middle school students, we should do something to protect our environment. First, we should take the bus or subway to school. We can also ride a bike or walk to school. We should try not to drive a car. Second, we should save water. For example, we can take a shower instead of taking a bath. Third, we should sort the rubbish and throw it into the bin. Fourth, we should turn off the light when we leave the room. These actions may seem small, but together they create a big impact. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：倡议书，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕环保倡议，从空气污染、水污染、垃圾回收、土地污染等方面谈具体做法及益处 确定人称：第一人称复数（we/our） 注意事项：要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，80 - 100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：引出环保问题，表明学生应行动起来保护环境 主体段：分别从不同污染方面阐述具体做法 结尾段：说明这些行动虽小但影响大 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：空气污染 做法：take the bus or subway to school/ride a bike or walk to school/try not to drive a car 益处：减少汽车尾气排放，改善空气质量 要点二：水污染 做法：save water/take a shower instead of taking a bath 益处：节约水资源，减少水污染 要点三：垃圾回收 做法：sort the rubbish and throw it into the bin 益处：便于垃圾处理，减少土地污染 要点四：土地污染 做法：turn off the light when we leave the room 益处：节约能源，间接保护土地资源 (二) （2026·甘肃天水·中考真题）假设你是李华，在六月五日世界环境日这天，你收到了英国好友Jack给你写的一封邮件。请你认真阅读后，回复一封邮件。 要求：1．词数约80词；2．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．内容条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；4．文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等信息。 Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? June 5 is World Environment Day. I’ve heard that the topic of China for this year is “Green Changes for a Beautiful China”. Have you noticed any warm green changes around you? Does your lifestyle change a little? Please share them with me! I’m looking forward to your reply! All the best! Jack Dear Jack, I hope this email finds you well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Jack,     I hope this email finds you well.     I’m glad to hear from you. Indeed, there are many green changes around me. First, more and more people choose to take public transportation instead of driving cars. Second, we have planted many trees in our city, which makes the air fresher.     As for my lifestyle, it has changed a lot. I always remember to turn off the lights when I leave the room. What’s more, I often bring my own cloth bags when shopping. I believe that if everyone makes a small effort, our world will become more beautiful.                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 文体：本文为电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主 写作要点： 回应世界环境日中国主题，讲述身边看得见的环保绿色变化；介绍自己生活方式的环保改变；简单抒发环保感悟； 限制：正文约80词，首尾句不计词数，无真实校名地名 第二步：行文结构 承接开头，总说身边出现许多绿色环保变化； 分层列举社会层面环保改变：公共交通普及、城市增植绿植净化空气； 讲述个人环保生活习惯：随手关灯、自备布袋购物； 结尾升华：人人微小行动，共建美好环境。 第三步：要点展开 要点1：身边社会绿色变化 核心短语及拓展：take public transportation instead of driving cars/plant trees/fresher air/choose buses or underground/cut down car pollution/more green plants/cleaner air等 要点2：个人环保生活改变 核心短语及拓展：turn off lights/bring cloth bags when shopping/save electricity/avoid plastic bags/protect the environment in daily life等 要点3：环保感悟 核心短语及拓展：make a small effort/become more beautiful/do little green things/make a big difference/build a greener world等 ( 1 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $