Unit 4 Hands-on fun 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（译林版）

译林新版 Unit 4 Hands-on fun 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write about your DIY experience (记叙手工DIY经历) 译林新版初二上Unit4 Hands-on Fun 写作任务Write about your DIY experience(记叙手工DIY经历) 一、审题 ①文体 记叙文（叙述个人DIY经过，可带有简单感受） 2话题 自己的一次手工制作经历（如做风筝、模型、贺卡、鸟屋等） ③人称 以第一人称1为主 4时态 一般过去时（描述制作过程）；结尾感受可用一般现在时 5要点 >开头：点明做了什么DIY >中间：写出具体步骤(2~3步)，可加入遇到的困难及解决方法 >结尾：表达感受（如开心、有成就感、学到道理） 6字数 80~100词（初中标准要求） 二、 文章结构 (三段式) 段落 内容要点 开头 一句话引出DY项目，点明时间或原因 Last Saturday,I decided to make a paper birdhouse by myself. 中间 按顺序写制作过程 >准备材料（木板、胶水、剪刀等） 段落 内容要点 >分步操作(First..Then.Next.…) >遇到的困难（如粘错地方、尺寸不对） >如何解决(ask for help,try again等) 结尾 总结成果+感受(pro ud,happy,learned a lot) 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词DIY手工制作；project项目；tool工具；material材料；glue胶水；scissors剪刀； instructions说明；step步骤；mistake错误；proud自豪的；fun有趣的 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 make sth.by myself 自己动手做 2 follow the instructions 按照说明 3 cut out 剪下 4 stick together 粘在一起 5 have trouble doing sth. 做某事有困难 6 give up 放弃 7 turn out 结果是 8 learn a lesson from... 从.中吸取教训 基础造句 1First,I got some wood and nails from my father. 2 Next,I followed the instructions carefully to cut the pieces. 3 It was difficult,but I didn't give up. 4 In the end,the birdhouse turned out quite nice. 5 I felt very proud of my work. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 creative 有创意的 2 patient 耐心的 序号 单词 释义 3 satisfied 满意的 4 experience 经历 5 valuable lesson 宝贵的教训 6 despite difficulties 尽管困难 Λ successfully 成功地 加分句型 表示步骤顺序 (使文章连贯) First of all,I prepared all the materials. Then,I tried to follow the instructions step by step. After that,I realized I had made a small mistake. 表达困难与坚持 It took me two hours,but I didn't give up. Although it was hard,I enjoyed the process a lot. I failed at first,but I learned from the mistake and tried again. 结尾升华句 This DIY experience not only brought me fun but also taught me patience. I learned that practice makes perfect. It was a small project,but I felt really proud of what I made. 五、写作模板 Last I decided to (做什么DIY). First,I (准备材料).Then,I (第一步操作).Next,I (第二步等). However,I had a problem: (遇到的困难).1 (如何解决) Finally,I (结果).It wasn't perfect,.butI (感受). This experience taught me (学到的道理). 例： Last Sunday,I decided to make a model plane with my dad. First,I got some cardboard,glue and scissors.Then,I cut out the parts carefully. Next,I stuck them together. However,I had a problem:the wings were too heavy,and the plane kept falling.I added some tape to fix it. Finally,the plane could fly a little.It wasn't perfect,but I felt very proud and happy This experience taught me to be patient and never give up. 六、作文仿写 题目 Write about a DIY experience(记叙一次手工制作经历) 范文 Last weekend,I decided to make a paper kite by myself.First,I got some sticks,glue,and a piece of colourful paper.Then I followed the steps from a video.I cut the paper into a diamond shape and stuck the sticks on it. However,I made a mistake-I glued one stick too tight,and the paper broke.I felt a little sad,but I didn't give up.I used tape to fix it and started again.Finally,the kite turned out okay. When I flew it in the park,it went high into the sky.I was so excited!This DIY experience taught me that patience and practice really matter. (共98词，符合初中要求) 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 给朋友分享制作笔筒的经历 约96词 Dear Tom, I want to share my DIY experience with you.Last weekend,I made a pen holder from an old tin can. First,I cleaned the can and painted it blue.Then,I cut colorful paper into small stars and glued them on the surface.Finally,I placed the can on my desk and put my pens inside.It looks really nice! I enjoyed the whole process because it was both fun and useful.You can also try making something by hand. Yours, Li Ming 拓展范文2 给表妹介绍制作手工贺卡的经历 约95词 Dear Lily, I recently tried a DIY project-making a birthday card for Mom. 1 I folded a piece of white cardboard in half. 2 Then,I drew a big sunflower on the front and colored it with markers. 3 Inside,I wrote a short poem and glued some dried flowers. Mom loved it so much that she put it on the shelf.DIY is not difficult,but you need patience. Why not create a card for your best friend? Yours, Zhang Wei