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Unit 5 Wild animals
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题
Write an article on protecting wild animals(撰写野生动物保护短文)
Unit 5 Wild animals
导作任务Write an article on protecting wild animals(撰写野生动物保护短文)
一、
申题
1文体
议论文/说明文(书面文章,非信件)
2话题
保护野生动”物的重要性及具体做法
3人称
以第一人称we为主,可适当使用they(指动物)和you(呼吁读者)
4时态
一般现在时为主(描述现状、原因及措施)
5要点
〉点明主题:野生动物面临危险,需要保护
>列出2~3条具体保护措施
,简单说明每项措施的理由
,结尾发出呼吁或表达希望
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引出话题,说明野生动物的重要性或现状
中间
分条列出保护措施+简要理由
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结呼吁,表达对未来的期待
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词wild animal野生动物;protect保护;danger危险;habitat栖息地;hunt捕猎;save拯救;
disappear消失;world世界
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in danger
处于危险中
2
lose one's home
失去家园
3
kill for fur meat
为皮毛/肉而猎杀
4
take action
采取行动
help sb do sth
帮助某人做某事
6
live in peace
和平地生活
基础造句
Many wild animals are in danger now.
2 We should stop killing animals for their fur or meat.
3It's important to protect their habitats.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
seriously
严重地
2
cause
导致
3
government
政府
4
orga nization
组织
5
balanced
平衡的
6
future
未来
加分句型
引出问题
>..are in great danger because...
The number of...is getting smaller and smaller.
提出建议(含理由)
We should must...because ..
It's necessary for us to...so that...
One important thing is to...This can help...
结尾升华句
If everyone tries their best,wild animals will have a bright future.
Let's work together to protect these beautiful animals.
五、写作模板
Wild animals are our friends,but many of them are in danger now.
First,we should stop hunting animals for their fur or meat.Because it makes them
disappear.
Second,it's important to protect their habitats.Trees and forests are their homes.
Third,we can also join an organization to help animals in need.
If we take action now,wild animals can live safely.Let's protect them together!
六、作文仿写
题目
Protecting Wild Animals
范文
Wild animals are an important part of our world.But today many of them are in danger.We
must take action to protect them.
First,we should stop killing animals for their fur or meat.Because it causes them to die out.
Second,it's necessary to save their forests and rivers.Without a safe home,animals cannot
live well.Third,we can tell others about the importance of wildlife protection.
If everyone helps a little,wild animals will have a better future.Let's do our best to save
them!
★写作小贴士
>多用should/must/need to表达建议
>用because/so that/in order to连接理由
,结尾用感叹句或祈使句增强感染力
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
给朋友的建议
约95词
Dear Tom,
I know you care about wild animals,so I want to share some ideas on how to protect them.
First,never buy products made from endangered animals,like ivory or fur.Second,you'd
better not disturb their habitats when visiting nature reserves.Third,please remember to tell
your family and friends about the importance of wildlife protection.
I believe small actions can make a big difference.Let's work together!
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
给读者的呼吁
约98词
Dear readers,
Wild animals are facing serious threats,so we must take action now.
First,you should refuse to eat wild animals and report illegal hunting.Second,you'd better
reduce plastic waste to protect ocean creatures.Third,please remember to support wildlife
protection organizations by donating or volunteering.
Every effort counts.Let's create a better world for animals and ourselves.
Yours,
Green Earth Group