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Unit 7 The natural world
初二上
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Draft an audio cam paign script for nature protection(撰写自然保护音频宣传稿)
Unit 7 The Natural World
写作任务An audio campaign script for nature protection撰写自然保护音频宣传稿
申题
①文体
音频宣传稿(非书信,无称呼、署名;需有开场白、呼吁、号召)
2话题
保护大自然(如:节约资源、减少污染、爱护动植物)
③人称
以第一人称复数we和第二人称you为主,也可用everyone
4时态
一般现在时(描述现状、建议)
5要点
,开头问候/吸引注意(如:HelIo,everyone./Good morning)
>说明自然的重要性或现状(如:Forests are being cut down.)
>提出2~3条具体保护行动(如:turn off lights,plant trees)
,说明理由(如:save energy,protect animals)
,结尾发出号召(如:Let's act now!/Together we can make a difference)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构(四段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
问候+吸引注意,点阴主题(自然保护)
中间1
现状/问题(可选,简洁说明为什么需要保护)
段落
内容要点
中间2
具体建议(分条列出行动+简单理由)
结尾
号召(呼吁大家行动起来,表达希望)
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词nature自然;protect保护;environment环境
词waste浪费;pollution污染;save节约
词plant种植;recycle回收;reduce减少
词energy能源;forest森林;animal动物
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
protect the environment
保护环境
2
save water electricity
节约用水/电
plant more trees
多种树
4
recycle paper and plastic
回收纸张和塑料
turn off the lights
关灯
6
reduce waste
减少垃圾
7
make a difference
有所改变
基础造句
1 We should protect the natural world because it is our home.
2 Please turn off the tap when you brush your teeth to save water.
3Planting trees can help make the air cleaner.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
precious
珍贵的
2
endangered
濒危的
3
necessary
必要的
responsible
负责任的
序号
单词
释义
5
sustainable
可持续的
6
harmony
和谐
加分句型
开场吸引句
Do you know that many animals are losing their homes?
Hello,everyone!Today I want to talk about something important-our natural world.
提出建议
(析使句/情态动词)
Let's start by turning off lights when we leave a room.
You can also take a shorter shower to save water.
We should always put rubbish in the right bin.
说明理由
Because if we waste too much,our children will have nothing left.
This can help cut down pollution and keep the air fresh.
It's necessary for us to live in a clean and healthy environment.
结尾号召句
Small actions can bring big changes.Let's protect nature together!
Join us!Every little effort counts.
Remember:the earth is our only home.Let's take good care of it.
五、写作模板(音频宣传稿)
Good morning,everyone!
Today I want to share some ideas about protecting nature.
Our beautiful world is in danger.Many forests are disappearing,and animals are losing
their homes.But we can do something to help!
First,let's
Because
Second,we should
This will
Third,remember to
It's a simple way to
Let's act now!Together,we can make a big difference for our natural world.Thank you!
六、作文仿写
题目
假设你被邀请在学校广播站做一期关于自然保护的音频宣传稿,请写一篇80~100词的宣传稿。
范文
Good morning,everyone!
Today I want to talk about how we can protect nature.
Our planet is facing serious problems.Many rivers are dirty,and some animals are in danger.
But we can help!
First,let's turn off lights and taps when we don't use them.Because small actions save lots of
energy.Second,we should plant more trees in our city.This can make the air cleaner and give
animals new homes.Third,remember to recycle paper and plastic.It's a simple way to reduce
waste.
Let's act now!Together,we can make our world a better place.Thank you!
(字数:约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给社区邻居的环保倡议
约98词
Dear Neighbors,
Nature is our shared home.I'd like to offer some tips to help protect it.
First,please reduce waste by bringing your own bags when shopping.Second,you'd better
plant trees or flowers in your garden to beautify the environment.Third,remember to turn off
lights and save water at home.
Let's work together to keep our planet clean and green.Small actions make a big difference!
Yours,
A Green Neighbor
拓展范文2给同学的动物保护呼吁
约96词
Dear Classmates,
Wild animals are important to our ecosystem.I want to share some simple ways to protect
them
First,never buy products made from animal fur or ivory.Second,you'd better avoid littering in
forests or rivers-it harms wildlife.Third,please tell your friends about the dangers of
poaching.
Every small effort counts.Let's be the voice for those who cannot speak!
Yours,
A Nature Lover