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译林新版
Unit 4 School days
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write about your daily school life(描写日常校园作息)
译林新版初一上Unit4 School days
写作任务Write about your daily school life(描写日常校园作息)
一、审题
1文体
记叙文(描述性短文,按时间顺序介绍一天的学习生活)
2话题
描写自己的日常校园作息,如到校时间、上课、课间活动、午餐、放学等
3人称
以第一人称I或we为主
4时态
一般现在时(表示经常性、习惯性的动作)
5要点
,按时间顺序列出校园生活的主要环节(如起床、到校、上课、午餐、放学等)
>每个环节可添加一两个具体活动或感受(如“我喜欢体育课”“课间和朋友聊天")
,结尾可简单总结对校园生活的看法或感受
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,总述自己的校园生话(如:I have a busy but hap,by school day.)
中间
按时间顺序写2~4个主要时间段的活动,每段用时间词连接(如:In the morning.,/
At noon...In the afternoon...)
段落
内容要点
结尾
表达感受或期待(如:I enjoy my school life very much.)
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词stat/begin开始
get up起床
go to school去上学
词lesson/class课
break/rest休息
lunch午餐
词after school放学后
go home回家
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
have breakfast
吃早餐
2
have lessons have classes
上课
do morning exercises
做早操
☒
play with friends
和朋友玩
5
have lunch at school
在学校吃午餐
6
go back home
回家
7
do homework
做作业
基础造句
1I usually get up at 6:30 and go to school at 7:00.
2 We start our first lesson at 8:00 in the morning.
[8 At noon,I have lunch with my classmates in the dining hall.
4 After school,I often play basketball with my friends.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
busy but meaningful
忙碌但有意义的
2
enjoyable
愉快的
colourful
丰富多彩的
4
break time
课间休息
5
school activities
学校活动
加分句型
时间顺序句型
The first lesson begins at...
After that,we have a ten-minute break.
In the afternoon,classes finish at...
描远感受(含长句)
I find my school days very interesting because we can learn new things and play with friends.
Lunchtime is my favourite part of the day,as I can talk and laugh with my classmates.
Although school days are busy,they make me feel happy and fulfilled.
结尾升华句
Every day at school is a new chance to grow and enjoy.
I really love my school life and I try to make the most of it.
五、写作模板
My School Day
I have a
(busy wonderful interesting)school day.
In the morning,I
(get up go to school start lessons).The first class is
(subject).Then we
(do morning exercises have a break).At noon,I
(have lunch play with friends read books).In the afternoon,we
(have more
classes take part in activities).After school,I(go home do sports join a club).
(enjoy/like love)my school life very much because it is_
(colourful
meaningful full of fun).
六
作文仿写
范文
My School Day
I have a busy but enjoyable school day.
In the morning,I get up at 6:30 and go to school at 7:00.Our first lesson begins at 8:00.After
two classes,we do morning exercises on the playground.At noon,I have lunch with my
classmates in the dining hall.We often chat and laugh together.In the afternoon,we have
three more classes.My favourite is PE class because I like playing basketball.After school,I
go home at 5:00 and do my homework.
I really enjoy my school life.Every day is full of new things and happiness.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给笔友介绍我的校园生活
约95词
Dear Tom,
Let me tell you about my daily school life.It is busy but colorful.
First,I get up at 6:30 and have breakfast quickly.Then I go to school by bike.Classes start at
8:00.I have six lessons in the morning.At noon,I have lunch with my classmates in the dining
hall.After that,we usually play basketball or read in the library.In the afternoon,there are
two more lessons.School ends at 4:30.I go home and do homework before dinner.
What about your school life?Write back soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
给表弟介绍日常作息
约98词
Dear Xiao Ming,
I'd like to share my school routine with you.It may help you prepare for middle school.
I usually wake up at 6:45.I brush my teeth quickly and have milk and bread for breakfast.
School begins at 7:50.We have four lessons in the morning:Chinese,math,English and
science.I listen carefully and take notes.Lunch break is from 11:30 to 1:30.I often chat with
friends or finish some homework.In the afternoon,we have PE or art class.I really enjoy
them.I leave school at 4:10 and get home at 4:30.Then I do my homework and read for 30
minutes
Try to develop good habits early!
Yours,
Zhang Wei