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译林新版
Unit 7 Be wise with money
初一上
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写作话题·Write about your opinions on pocket money managem ent
(谈论零花钱管理)
译林新版初一上Unit7 Be wise with money
导作任务Write about your opinions on pocket money management(谈论零花钱管理)
一、审题
包文体
观点类短文(议论文/说明文,无需书信格式,直接陈述个人看法)
2话题
如何管理零花钱(pocket money),包括正确使用、储蓄、计划等
3人称
以第一人称I为主,也可用we泛指青少年;适当用you指读者
4时态
一般现在时
⑤要点
,明确表达对零花钱管理的看法
>提出2~3条具体的管理建议或做法
,简单说明每个做法的理由或好处
,结尾总结观点或发出呼吁
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接表明自己对零花钱管理的观点(如“零花钱应该合理管理”)
中间
分条写出具体做法+理由(如:@记账②储蓄③计划支出)
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结观点,鼓励付诸行动
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词pocket money零花钱
词manage管理
词
save节约;储蓄
词
spend花费
词
plan计划
词wise明智的
词necessary必要的
词important重要的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
manage pocket money wisely
明智地管理零花钱
2
save some money
存一些钱
3
spend money on...
在.…上花钱
4
write down the cost
记下花费
5
make a plan
制定计划
6
buy something useful
买有用的东西
7
waste money
浪费钱
8
learn to be wise with money
学会明智用钱
基础造句
1I think it is important to manage our pocket money well.
2 We should save some money for the future.
3 It's not wise to spend all the money at once.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
wisely
明智地
序号
单词
释义
2
carefully
仔细地
necessary
必要的
4
helpful
有帮助的
5
reasona ble
合理的
6
save up
积蓄
7
budget
预算(名词/动词)
加分句型
提出观点句
In my opinion,...
,I believe that.…
It is important for us to...
说明理由(含长句)
Because it can help us learn to plan and not waste money.
This way,we can have enough money when we really need it.
If we do so,we will become more responsible with money.
结尾升华句
In a word,being wise with pocket money is a good habit for our future.
Let's learn to manage our money well from now on!
五、写作模板
In my opinion,it is very important to manage pocket money wisely.
First,I think we should
Because
Second,it is a good idea to
This can help us
Third,we'd better
That way,we can
All in all,being wise with money is a great habit.Let's try our best!
六、作文仿写
题目
Write about your opinions on pocket money management.(80-100)
范文
In my opinion,it is very important to manage pocket money wisely.
First,I think we should save some money every week.Because saving helps us have money
for something big in the future.Second,it is a good idea to make a spending plan.This can
help us know where our money goes and avoid wasting it.Third,we'd better write down what
we buy.That way,we can learn to spend carefully.
All in all,being wise with pocket money is a good habit.Let's start to manage it well from
today!
(约95词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给表弟的零花钱建议
约98词
Dear Tom,
You asked me how to manage your pocket money wisely.Here is my advice.
1 Make a plan:Decide how much to save and how much to spend each week.
2 Track your expenses:Write down what you buy,so you know where your money goes.
3 Save first:Put some money into a piggy bank or a savings jar before spending on treats
4Compare prices:Look for discounts or buy in bulk when possible.
These tips help you avoid wasting money.You'll also learn to value what you have.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
给妹妹的零花钱管理建议
约95词
Dear Lucy,
I know you get pocket money every month but often run out too quickly.Let me share some
ideas.
1Divide your money:50%for saving,30%for small needs,and 20%for fun.
2 Set a goal:Want a new book or a toy?Save a fixed amount each week.
3 Avoid impulse buys:Wait 24 hours before buying something you really want.
4 Earn extra:Do small chores at home to add to your pocket money.
Following these steps will make you a smart money manager!
Love,
Sister