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Unit 5 A healthy lifestyle
初一上
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写作话题·Introduce your healthy eating lifestyle(介绍健康饮食习惯)
译林新版初一上Unit5 A healthy lifestyle
写作任务Introduce your healthy eating lifestyle(介绍健康饮食习惯)
一、申题
1文体
介绍说明类短文(以第一人称叙述自己的饮食习惯,可适当夹叙夹议)
2话题
介绍自己的健康饮食习惯,包括吃什么、不吃什么、为什么这样做
3人称
以第一人称I/my为主,也可用we(指家人或自己)
4时态
一般现在时
(描述通常的习惯)
5要点
,开头点明主题:我有一个健康的饮食习惯
,列出2~3条具体习惯(如吃哪些食物、喝什么、不吃什么)
,简单说明理由(对身体的好处)
,结尾表达感受或鼓励
6字数
60~80词(初一标准要求,可适当扩展至80~100词)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,说明自己有健康的饮食习惯
中间
分条介绍具体饮食习惯+简单理由
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结好处或表达继续保持的决心
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词healthy健康的
lifestyle生活方式
eating habit饮食习惯
词
fruit水果
vegetable蔬菜
milk牛奶
词
water水
junk food垃圾食品
sugar糖
词snack零食
energy能量
strong强壮的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
have a healthy eating lifestyle
拥有健康的饮食习惯
2
eat more fruit and vegetables
多吃水果蔬菜
3
drink enough water
喝足够的水
A
stay away from...
远离.…
5
be good for...
对.…有益
6
keep fit keep healthy
保持健康
7
three meals a day
一日三餐
8
less sugar and fat
更少的糖和脂肪
基础造句
1I have a healthy eating lifestyle.
2I eat a lot of fruit and vegetables every day.
3I drink milk in the morning because it is good for my bones.
4I never drink cola or eat too much junk food.
5A healthy diet helps me study better and stay strong.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
balanced
均衡的(balanced diet均衡饮食)
2
nutritious
有营养的
3
essential
必要的
序号
单词
释义
4
regularly
有规律地
5
instead of
而不是
6
provide
提供(provide energy提供能量)
加分句型
介绍习惯万能句
>I make sure to.../I always remember to...
One of my healthy habits is...
For breakfast/lunch/dinner,I usually have...
说明理由(含原因状语从句)
>...because it gives me energy for the whole day.
>...so that I can stay healthy and active.
>..which is good for my growth and study.
对比与强调句
Instead of eating snacks,I choose fresh fruit.
It is important for teenagers to eat a balanced diet.
Only by eating healthy food can we keep fit.
结尾升华句
I believe a healthy eating lifestyle makes me happy and strong.
I hope everyone can develop good eating habits.
Let's eat healthily and enjoy our life!
五、写作模板
模板一
(简洁版)
Hello!My name is
I have a healthy eating lifestyle
First,I eat
every day.For example,I have
for breakfast.It is good for
my
Second,I drink
instead of
Because
Third,I
This helps me_
I think a healthy diet is very important.I plan to keep this good habit.
模板二(丰富版)
Hi everyone!I'd like to introduce my healthy eating lifestyle.
I start my day with a good breakfast.I usually have
and
They give me
At lunch and dinner,I eat a lot of
and
I don't like
also make sure to drink
every day.
These habits help me
and
I feel great every day.I hope you can also
have a healthy lifestyle!
六、作文仿导
仿写一
(60~80词)
Hello!My name is Li Ming.I have a healthy eating lifestyle.
First,I eat fruit and vegetables every day.They give me energy.Second,I drink milk in the
morning.It is good for my bones.Third,I never eat too much junk food.Instead of cola,I drink
water.
A healthy diet makes me strong and active.I like my eating habits very much.
仿写二(80~100词)
Hi everyone!I'd like to introd uce my healthy eating lifestyle.
I start my day with a bowl of porridge and an egg.They keep me full and active for the
morning.For lunch at school,I always eat vegetables and some meat.I don't eat much rice.In
the evening,I have soup and fruit.I also drink at least eight glasses of water every day.I
hardly eat candy or drink soft drinks because they are bad for my teeth and health.
A balanced diet helps me study better and grow stronger.I believe it's important for
teenagers like us.I will keep this good habit!
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给表弟的建议
约95词
Dear Tom,
You asked me how to keep healthy through eating.Here are my suggestions for you.
1 Breakfast is important:you should have milk,eggs or whole-wheat bread every morning.
2 Avoid too much sugar and fried food.Instead,eat more fruits,vegetables and lean meat.
s Drink plenty of water (about 8 glasses a day)and cut down on sodas.
Following these simple rules will help you stay fit and full of energy.
Yours,
Mike
拓展范文2
给同学的分享
约98词
Dear Lily,
I'm glad you want to improve your eating habits.Let me share what works for me.
1 Plan your meals ahead:include grains,protein,and vegetables in each meal.
2 Eat slowly and stop when you feel 80%full-this helps digestion.
3 Snack wisely:choose nuts,yogurt or fruit instead of chips or candy.
These small changes make a big difference.I believe you can build a healthy lifestyle easily!
Yours,
Amy