内容正文:
外研新版
Unit 5 Play by the rules?
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a rule list for new things of modern life
(撰写现代生活新规清单)
外研新版初二上Unit5 Play by the rules?
写作狂务Write a rule list for new things of modern life(撰写现代生活新规清单)
一、审题
①文体
规则清单(可写成清单式条目,或用短文形式依次列出;建议使用“标题+分条列举”格式,清晰明了)
2话题
为现代生活中的新事物制定规则,例如:使用手机、上网课、玩在线游戏、使用社交媒体、骑共享单车等
3人称
以第二人称you(对他人提出要求)或第一人称复数we(共同遵守)为主,也可以用people should..
we must...
④时态
一般现在时(表示普逼规则侧)
5要点
>明确规则针对的新事物(如smartphone,.online class,video game,social media,shared bike等)
>列出24条具体、合理的规则
>每条规则后简单说明理由(为什么这条规则重要)
,结尾可写一句总结或提醒
6字数
60~100词(初中标准要求,清单式可略少,但需完整)
二
文章结构(建议采用“标题+分条”式)
标题
Rules for Using Smartphones(示例,视具体新事物而定)
段落
内容要点
开头
一句话说明规则针对的对象及目的。
Here are some rules for using smartphones in our daily life.
中间
分条写出规则+理由。每条用First,Second,Third或①②③引导。
规则:动宾结构(You should../You must../No+名词)
理由:Because,./This helps../It is important to.
结尾
一句总结或鼓励。
Follow these rules,and you will enjoy modern life better.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
smartphone screen time,put away,focus,rest your eyes
词
online class listen carefully,turn on the camera,no chatting
video game limit time,take breaks,finish homework first
social media be polite,don't share private info,don't bully
shared bike park properly,don't damage,pay on time
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
follow the rules
遵守规则
2
use...in a right way
正确使用.…
3
limit screen time
限制屏幕时间
4
take a break every 30 minutes
每30分钟休息一次
5
keep quiet in online class
上网课时保持安静
6
don't share passwords
不要分享密码
>
be friendly to others online
在网上对他人友善
6
put away your phone
收起手机
9
finish homework first
先完成作业
基础造句
1 You should not use your phone during dinner.Because it's important to talk with your family.
2 In online class,we m ust keep quiet and listen to the teacher carefully.
3When riding a shared bike,always park it in the right place.
4 Limit your game time to one hour a day.This helps you protect your eyes and do other fun
things.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
necessary
必要的
2
helpful
有帮助的
3
properly
恰当地
4
protect
保护
5
balance
平衡(名词/动词)
6
private information
私人信息
7
digital life
数字生活
8
self-control
自控力
加分句型
制定规则常用句型
You should shouldn't ..
You must mustn't...
It's important necessary to...
>No+名词/V-ing(如No talking.No using phones.)
Always remember to...
说明理由(含长句)
Because it can help you focus on your study and avoid getting distracted.
This is good for your health and your relationship with your family.
If you do this,you can enjoy modern technology without problems.
It is a way to show respect to others and keep yourself safe.
结尾升华句
Follow these simple rules,and your modern life will be safer and happier.
Let's use new things in a right way and make our life better.
五、写作模板(清单式)
Title Rules for
To make good use of modern things,here are some rules for you.
1.You should
Because
2.You'd better not
It can help you
3.Please remember to_
This is necessary for
If you follow these rules,you will enjoy modern life more safely and happily.
六、作文仿写
仿得1 Rules for Using Smartphones
Smartphones bring us so many great things,but we also need rules.
1 You should not use your phone during meals.Because it's important to talk with your
family and enjoy food.
2 You must put away your phone when doing homework.This helps you focus and finish
faster.
3 Limit screen time to two hours a day.It is good for your eyes and health.
Remember these rules,and your phone will be a helper,not a problem.
仿写2 Rules for Online Classes
Online classes are very common now.Here are a few rules to make them work well.
1 You should turn on your camera and sit up straight.Because teachers need to see you are
listening.
2 You must keep quiet unless you want to ask a question.This helps everyone hear clearly.
Don't chat with friends in the class group.It's important to respect the teacher and other
students.
Follow these rules,and you will learn better online.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给新邻居的建议
约96词
Dear Mr.Li,
Welcome to our community!Here are some tips to help you enjoy modern life here.
1 Please keep noise low after 10 p.m.it helps everyone rest well.
2 Remember to sort your rubbish into recyclable and kitchen waste.
s Use the shared tools in the smart locker and return them on time.
4 Join the community WeChat group to get news and help from neighbors.
I'm sure you'll soon feel at home with these new rules.
Yours,
Xiao Ming
拓展范文2
给新同事的建议
约93词
Dear Wang Lin,
Starting a new job can be busy.Let me share some modern office rules with you.
1 Always mute your phone during online meetings.
2 Use the company app to book meeting rooms and report tasks.
3 Remember to save your files to the cloud,not just on your comp uter.
4Take short breaks every hour-it keeps your eyes and mind fresh.
Follow these tips,and you'll handle modern work life easily.
Yours,
Zhang Wei