Unit 1 This is me 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

外研新版 Unit 1 This is me 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write about a successful person(描写-位成功人士) 外研新版初二上Unit1 This is me 写作任务Write about a successful person(描写一位成功人士) 一、申题 ①文体 人物描写（记叙文/说明文，需有开头、主体、结尾三段式结构） 2话题 介绍一位成功人士（可以是名人、身边人物或励志榜样） 3人称 以第三人称he/she为主 4时态 一般现在时（描述现状和品质）+一般过去时（描述过去经历） 5要点 〉点明描写对象是谁（姓名、身份） >描述其成功之处（成就、贡献） ,军出其成功的原因或品质（勤奋、坚持、善良等） ，表达自己的感受或后发 6字数 80~100词 二、文章结构 (三段式) 段落 内容要点 开头 引出人物，说明身份（1~2句) 中间 分23方面描写成功之处、品质或经历(3~5句) 段落 内容要点 结尾 总结人物特点，表达敬佩或学习决心(1~2句) 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词 successful成功的 hard-working勤奋的 famous著名的 词achieve取得（成就） never give up永不放弃 词example榜样 encourage鼓励 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 be successful in. 在..…方面成功 2 work hard work very hard 努力工作/学习 3 make a difference 产生积极影响 又 set a good example 树立好榜样 5 go through many difficulties 经历许多困难 6 inspire sb.to do sth. 激励某人做某事 基础造句 1 He/She is a successful person because he she works very hard. 2 She never gives up when she meets difficulties. 3 His/Her story tells us that we can achieve our dreams if we keep going. 四、好词好句 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 determined 坚定的 2 talented 有天赋的 寸 thoughtful 体贴的；深思熟虑的 4 achieve one's goal 实现目标 5 overcome difficulties 克服困滩难 6 be an inspiration to... 对…是一种鼓舞 加分句型 引出人物 I'd like to talk about _a successful Today I want to write about who is famous for 描导品质/经历】（含长句） He/She didn't have an easy start,but he she faced challenges bravely and never stopped learning. Because he/she is always hard-working and helpful,many people look up to him/her. Not only does he she do well in,but he she also helps others to grow. 结尾升华句 He/She sets a good example for all of us,and I believe I can learn a lot from him /her. If you want to be successful,remember:work hard,stay kind,and never give up. 五、写作模板 模板一（写名人） is a successful He She is famous for First,he she works very hard.For example, That's why he she can Second,he she never gives up.Even when he/she keeps trying and finally Also,he she is_ which makes people I think is a great example for us.I want to be a person like him /her. 模板二（写身边人） I want to write about my He/She is a successful person in my eyes. He /She is good at and always helps others.Every day,he she Even though he/she is very busy,he she always Because of his her hard work and kindness,many people respect him /her. I am proud of him /her.I hope I can be as as him/her one day. 六、作文仿写 范文1写袁隆平 Yuan Longping is a successful scientist.He is famous for growing "super rice"that helps feed millions of people. First,he worked very hard in the fields for many years,even when it was hot and tiring.That's why he could create such great rice.Second,he never gave up.When many people did not believe in him,he kept trying and finally succeeded.Also,he was very kind.He always shared his knowledge with other farmers,which made the world a better place. I think Yuan Longping is a great example for us.I want to work as hard as he did to make my dream come true. 范文2导身边老师 I want to write about my English teacher,Ms.Li.She is a successful person in my eyes. She is good at teaching and always helps us learn happily.Every day,she prepares her lessons carefully and stays after class to answer our questions.Even though she is very busy, she always listens to us patiently.Because of her hard work and kindness,many students love her and do well in English. I am proud of her.I hope I can be as hard-working and helpful as she is one day. 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 My Role Model一Yuan Longping 约96词 Yuan Longping is a successful person I admire most.He was a great scientist who worked hard to solve food problems. First,he spent years researching rice and never gave up even when experiments failed. Second,he cared about people and wanted to help farmers grow more food.Third,his team finally developed hybrid rice,which helped feed millions of people around the world. I think true success comes from hard work and a kind heart.Yuan Longping sets a perfect example for us. Yours, Li Ming 拓展范文2 A Successful Businessman一Ma Yun 约97词 Ma Yun is a very successful person in China.He started Alibaba from nothing and made it a world-famous company. First,he was not afraid of failure.He was rejected many times but never gave up his dream. Second,he believed in the power of the Internet and kept learning new things.Third,he always encouraged young people to be creative and brave. I learn from him that success needs patience,courage,and a strong will.Ma Yun proves that hard work can change your life. Yours, Chen Wei