Unit 3 Family ties 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年七年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

外研新版 Unit 3 Family ties 初一上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write a short paragraph about your family mem bers'support (写短文描述家人的支持) Unit 3 Family ties 导作任务Write a short paragraph about your family members'support(写短文描述家人 的支持) 申题 1文体 描述性短文（记叙/说明性段落，不需要书信格式） 2话题 家人（父母、兄弟姐妹等）在学习、生活或情感上给予的支持 ③人称 以第一人称I/we为主，提及家人时用my father/mother/brother/sister等 4时态 一般现在时（描述日常的支持）和一般过去时（描述具体事件）均可，但以一般现在时为主 ⑤要点 ，点明家人的支持是什么（如鼓励、帮助、陪伴） ,举出1~2个具体事例或场景 ，简单表达自己的感受或感谢 ,结尾总结家人支持的重要性 6字数 60~80词（初中标准段落要求） 二、 文章结构（三段式） 段落 内容 示例句 开头 开巾见山：点明家人给我支持 My family always gives me a lot of support. 段落 内容 示例句 中间 分条写具体支持+事例 For example,my father helps me with my maths homework.My mother encourages me when I feel sad 结尾 总结感受或升华主题 Thanks to their support,I feel happy and confident. 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词汇 中蚊 说明 support 支持 名词/动词 encourag 鼓励 动词 e help 帮助 动词/名词 cheer up 使振作 动词短语 proud 骄傲的 形容词 patient 耐心的 形容词 confident 自信的 形容词 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 give me support 给我支持 2 help me with my study 在学习上帮助我 encourage me to try again 鼓励我再次尝试 又 cheer me up when I am down 在我低落时让我振作 5 be proud of me 为我感到骄傲 6 talk to me patiently 耐心地和我交谈 7 make me feel warm 让我感到温暖 基础造句 1My mother always gives me support when I need it. 2 My father helps me with my maths problems every evening. [3 My sister cheers me up when I feel unhappy. 4They are patient and never give up on me. 5Their support makes me feel confident and happy. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 unconditional 无条件的 2 encouraging 今人鼓舞的 3 understanding 理解人的，善解人意的 4 motivate 激励 5 inspire 鼓舞 6 thoughtful 体贴的 加分句型 描述支持的事实句 My father always takes time to help me with my homework. My mother listens to me carefully whenever I have problems. 表达感受句 Their support means a lot to me. I feel lucky to have such a loving family. 用because说明理由 My parents support me a lot because they want me to grow up happily. 结尾升华句 With their support,I believe I can face any difficulty. Family support is like a warm light that guides me every day. 五、写作模板 My family members always give me a lot of support. First,my (father/mother/brother/sister) (具体支持).For example, (事例) Second (另一位家人) (另一种支持).This makes me (感受). Thanks to my family's support,I (积极结果).I love my family. 模板填空示例 My family members always give me a lot of support. First,my father helps me with my maths homework every night.For example,he patiently explains difficult problems to me. Second,my mother always encourages me when I feel down.This makes me cheer up and try again. Thanks to my family's support,I feel confident and happy at school.I love my family. 六、作文仿写 题目 Write a short paragraph about your family members'support.(60~80 范文一 (侧重学习支持) My family always supports me in my study. My father helps me with my science homework.He is very patient and teaches me step by step.My mother reads English stories with me every evening.She makes learning fun. Because of their support,I do better in my lessons and feel more confident.I am grateful to have such a caring family. 范文二 (侧重情感支持) My family members give me a lot of emotional support. When I feel sad or worried,my mother talks to me gently and cheers me up.My brother often plays games with me to make me smile. Their love makes me feel safe and happy.I think family support is the most important thing in my life.I love them all. ★ 写作小贴士 工人称统一 全篇用第一人称I,家人用my+称呼。 2时态一致 一般现在时为主；如果写具体某件过去的事，用一般过去时。 3内容真实具体 不要只说“他们支持我”，要写他们怎么支持（帮助做作业、安慰、陪伴）。 4情感自然 结尾加一句"I love my family"或“I feel lucky"会让文章更温暖。 5不要忘记标题 短文可不写标题，但若题干要求题目，可写“My Family's Support”。 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文3向朋友描述父母的支持 约96词 Dear Tom, You asked how my family supports me.Let me share with you. 1 My parents always encourage me when I feel stressed about exams.They tell me to try my best and not worry too much. 2 My mom helps me with daily life,like cooking healthy meals and reminding me to rest. 3 My dad often drives me to the library and buys books I need.He says knowledge is important. With their love,I feel strong and confident.I hope you also have warm family support. Yours, Li Ming 拓展范文4 向表姐描述兄妹的支持 约93词 Dear Anna, I want to tell you about my brother's support.It really helps me a lot. 1He helps me with my math homework every evening.He explains difficult problems patiently until I understand. 2 On weekends,we play basketball together.He teaches me skills and cheers me up when I miss shots. 3 When I feel lonely,he sits with me and talks about fun things.He always makes me laugh. My brother is not just a sibling but also a best friend.Family support means so much! Yours, Xiao Wei