Unit 4 Time to celebrate写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年七年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

外研新版 Unit 4 Time to celebrate 初一上 写作精讲精练 写作话题· Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals(写短文描述节日值班 的人) 外研新版初一上Unit4 Time to celebrate 写作任务Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals(写短文描述 节日值班的人) 一、审题 1文体 描述性短文（段落式，非书信格式，无需称呼和署名） 2话题 描写一位在节日期间坚守岗位的人（如警察、医生、消防员、环卫工人、志愿者等） 3人称 以第三人称(he/she/they)为主，也可适当使用第一人称we表达感受 4时态 一般现在时（描述人物的常规工作或职责）；也可用一般将来时表示“节日期间将要做什么” 5要点 ，明确点出人物身份及“在节日值班”这一背景 ，描述1~2项具体的工作内容或职责 ,说明这些工作对人们或节日的重要意义 ,表达对值班人员的感谢或敬意（一句即可） 6字数 60~80词（初中标准段落要求） 二、文章结构（一段式/清晰逻辑） 结构部分 内容要点 示例 开头句 点明人物身份和值班背景 A policeman is a person who works on duty during festivals. 结构部分 内容要点 示例 中间23 描述具体工作内容+意义 He keeps the streets safe and helps people in 句 need.Because of him,we can celebrate happily. 结尾句 表达感谢或敬意 We should say thank you to him and all the workers like him. 整段围绕“一个人"展开，逻辑清晰：谁→做什么→为什么重要→我们的态度 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 序号 词汇 中文 1 on duty 值班 festival 节日 3 celebrate 庆祝 A guard 守卫；保护 5 protect 保护 6 help 帮助 7 work hard 努力工作 safe 安全的 9 important 重要的 10 thank 感谢 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 on duty during festivals 节日期间值班 2 keep people safe 保护人们安全 3 work day and night 日夜工作 4 help people in need 帮助需要帮助的人 make our festivals happy and 让我们的节日快乐又安宁 5 peaceful have no time to celebrate with 没有时间和家人庆祝 6 family 7 say thank you to... 对.…说谢谢 be grateful to... 感激.… 基础造句 1A doctor works on duty during festivals to save people's lives. 2 He doesn't have time to celebrate with his family. 3 Thanks to their hard work,we can have a wonderful festival. 四、好词好句 (便更详细) 高级好词 好词 中文 用法说明 devoted 尽职尽责的 形容值班人员的敬业精神 selfless 无私的 形容他们放弃与家人团聚 essential 必不可少的 强调他们工作的重要性 peaceful 安宁的 形容节日氛围 deserve 值得 常与respect/thanks搭配 加分句型 描述身份与行为 >.is a person who works on duty during festivals.(定语从句) ,Every festival,,he /she.(一般现在时) While others are celebrating,he she is still working.( 说明意义 >Because of him/her,we can..(原因状语) Thanks to their hard work,our festival is safe and happy.(Thanks to) It is important for us to have someone like them on duty.(It is adj.for sb.to do) 表达感谢与敬意 We should say a big thank you to him her. They deserve our respect and gratitude. Without them,our festival would not be the same. 五、导作模板 (段落式) 开头： is a person who works on duty during festivals 中间（工作内容+意义）： Every festival,he she For example, Because of we can 结尾（感谢或敬意）： We should 示例填充（以警察为例） 开头： A policeman is a person who works on duty during festivals. 中间： Every festival,he checks the streets and helps people in trouble.For example,he guides the traffic and keeps everyone safe.Because of his hard work,we can enjoy our festival without worry. 结尾 We should say thank you to him.He deserves our respect. 六、作文仿写 仿军一消防员 A firefighter is a person who works on duty during festivals.Every festival,he stays at the station and waits for emergency calls.He is always ready to put out fires and save people's lives.Thanks to him,we can celebrate safely and happily.We should be grateful to him and all firefighters like him. 仿导二医生 A doctor is a person who works on duty during festivals.While others are having fun with family,she is in the hospital taking care of sick people.She works day and night to help patients get better.Because of her hard work,many people can get well and enjoy the festival later.She is selfless and deserves our thanks. (以上两篇均为60~80词，符合初一难度) 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1描写春节值班的护士 约96词 Dear Peter, I want to tell you about a nurse who worked during the Spring Festival.While most people enjoyed family reunions,she stayed at the hospital caring for patients. 1 She took patients'temperatures and gave them medicines on time every day. 2 She comforted those who felt lonely and homesick with warm words. 3 She helped doctors perform emergency operations late at night. 4 She missed her own family's dinner but never complained. Her kindness and hard work really inspired me.She is a true hero in my heart. Yours, Li Xin 拓展范文2描写除夕值班的交警 约95词 Dear Kate, Last New Year's Eve,after having dinner with my family,I went outside and saw a traffic policeman working on a busy street.He stood there from early evening until midnight,g uiding the heavy traffic despite the freezing cold. 1 He blew his whistle and used hand signals to direct cars safely through the intersection. 2 He helped an elderly woman cross the icy road carefully. 3 He gave clear directions to lost tourists with a warm smile. 4 He stopped a speeding car and warned the driver to be careful. He spent the whole New Year's Eve away from his family to keep us safe.I deeply admire his sense of duty and hard work. Yours, Zhang Wei