内容正文:
仁爱新版
Unit 2 Meet My Family
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Introduce your family
(介绍你的家人)
仁爱新版初-一上Unit2 Meet My Family
写作任务Introduce your family(介绍你的家人)
一、申题
包文体
介绍类短文(记叙/说明文,不需要书信格式,以段落呈现)
2话题
介绍自己的家庭成员、职业、外貌或性格特点、日常活动等
3人称
以第一人称I和第三人称he/she/they为主,也可适当使用we
4时态
一般现在时(描述家庭成员的基本情况、职业、爱好等)
5要点
,开头:总体介绍家里有几口人
,中间:分别介绍每位家人的身份/职业、外貌或性格、爱好等(2~3个细节)
,结尾:表达对家人的感情或总结家庭氛围
,可适当加入年龄、工作地点、常做的事情等
6字数
60~80词(初一上基础要求,可适当延伸至80词)
二、文章结构(三段式或一段式均可)
段落
内容要点
开头
总说家庭人数+点明主题
There are four people in my family.
段落
内容要点
中间
分人物介绍(每人1~2句话)
My father is a doctor.He works in a hospital.
结尾
总结家庭温馨或表达爱意
I love my family very much.
★也可按“人物1→人物2→人物3”的顺序逐人介绍,最后一个自然结尾即可,不强制三段式。
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
类别
单词
释义
father /mother brother sister
父亲/母亲/兄弟/姐妹/爷爷/奶奶/叔叔/阿姨/表亲
家庭成员
grandpa grandma/uncle /aunt
cousin
doctor nurse teacher worker
医生护士/教师/工人同机/厨师/农民/警察
职业
driver cook farmer policeman
policewoman
外貌
tall short thin fat/young /old/
高/矮/瘦/胖/年轻年老/大眼睛/长发
big eyes long hair
性格
kind /friendly strict nice/funny
善良的/友好的/严格的/好的/有趣的/耐心的/勤奋的
patient/hardworking
日常生活
work study cook read watch TV
工作/学习/做饭/阅读/看电视/散步/帮助做.…
go for a walk help with
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
a family of four five
…人家庭
2
look after take care of
照顾
3
be good at
擅长
A
help sb with sth
帮某人做某事
5
like doing enjoy doing
喜欢做某事
in the hospital /at school in the
在医院在学校在办公室
office
1
on weekends every day
在周末/每天
基础造句
1 There are three people in my family:my parents and me.
2 My mother is a teacher.She teaches English in a middle school.
My father is tall and kind.He likes reading books after dinner.
4 My little sister is only six years old.She has big eyes and a round face.
5 I often help my mother cook dinner on weekends.
四、好词好句(提升版)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
lovely
可爱的
2
warm-hearted
热心肠的
3
experienced
有经验的
4
smile
微笑(动词/名词)
5
together
一起
6
support
支持
加分句型
描述家人性格外貌的万能句
My father is a man with black hair and glasses.
My mother is not only beautiful but also very patient.
My brother is very funny-he always makes us laugh.
描述职业/工作的句型
>He She works as a ...is a...
>He/She spends most of the day working in the,(他在...工作)
My father is busy,but he still spends time with us on weekends.
表达家庭感情的句型
We always have a good time together.
We help each other and share happiness.
Home is the warmest place for me.
I'm really lucky to have such a great family.
五、写作模板
模板一
(基础版,4~5句)
There are
people in my family:
and me.
My father is a
He
My mother is
She
I love my family.
模板二
(进阶版,6~8句)
Hello!I'm
Let me introduce my family.
There are
people in my family.My father is
He is
and he likes
My mother is a
She is
and she is good at
I have a
He/She is
and often
We
together on weekends.I think my family is
I love them very much.
六、作文仿军
仿写示例一
(基础,65词)
Hello!I'm Li Hua.There are three people in my family:my parents and me.
My father is a driver.He is tall and kind.He likes reading books.My mother is a nurse.She is
very patient and friendly.She works in a hospital.I am a student.I like playing basketball.
We often go to the park on weekends.I love my family.
仿写示例三
(进阶,85词)
Hi,everyone!Let me introduce my family.
There are four people in my family:my parents,my sister and me.My father is a cook.He is
good at cooking delicious food.He is also very funny.My mother is a teacher.She teaches
math in a school.She is patient and always helps me with my homework.My sister is only five
years old.She has big eyes and a lovely smile.She likes drawing pictures.
On weekends,we often have dinner together and watch TV.I feel very happy and warm in my
family.I love them all.
七、写作小贴士(初一必读)
①人称别弄混:介绍爸爸用he,妈妈用she,兄弟姐妹根据性别用he/she。
☑be动词搭配:单数用is,复数用are(例:There are four people./My father is)。
3动词注意三单:当主语是he/she/it时,动词加-s或-es(例:Heworks../She likes.)。
4检查拼写:family/father/mother等基础词不要写错。
5适当加细节:不要只写职业,可以加一句性格或爱好,句子会更丰富。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
介绍大家庭
约96词
Dear classmates,
Let me introduce my family.There are five people in my family:my grandparents,my parents
and me.
My grandparents are kind and often tell me stories.My father is a doctor.He works hard and
helps many people.My mother is a teacher.She is patient and loves her students.I am a
student and I like reading.
Every weekend,we have dinner together and share happy moments.I love my family very
much.They always support me and give me warm hugs.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
介绍小家庭
约95词
Dear friend,
I would like to tell you about my family.There are three members:my father,my mother and
me.
My father is a driver.He is busy but always plays basketball with me on Sunday.My mother is
a nurse.She takes good care of the sick and also cooks delicious food for us.I am a junior
high school student.
We live in a small but cozy house.In the evening,we often watch TV or play board games
together.My family is small but full of love and laughter.I feel lucky to have them.
Yours,
Zhang Wei