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Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write about your school life
(描写校园生活)
Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life
写作任务Write about your school life(描写校园生活)
申题
1文体
记叙文/描述文(以介绍和描述为主,无需书信格式)
2话题
介绍自己的校园生活,包括课程、活动、朋友、感受等
③人称
第一人称I/we为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述日常)
5要点
,开篇总写校园生活丰富多彩
,介绍2~3个具体方面(如课程有趣、社团活动、课间游戏)
,表达对校园生活的喜爱或感受
6字数
60~80词(初一基础要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
总起句,点明校园生活丰富多彩
My school life is very colorful.
中间
分2~3个方面具体描写:每个方面用一句主题句+1~2个细节支撑;可使用连接词:
First,Second,Also,What's more.
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结感受或愿望
I love my school life very much.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词汇
含义
colorful
多彩的
subject
科目
interesting
有趣的
activity
活动
club
杜团
break
课间休息
classmate
同学
enjoyable
令人愉快的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
have a colorful school life
拥有多彩的校园生活
have many interesting subjects
有许多有趣的科目
3
take part in /join clubs
参加社团
4
play with classmates
和同学一起玩
6
learn a lot from.…
从.学到很多
6
have a good time
过得愉快
基础造句
1 I have many interesting subjects at school.
2 We often play basketball after class.
3 My classmates are friendly and we help each other.
4 The school club makes my life more colorful.
5I enjoy every day at school.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
y
wonderful
精彩的
2
meaningful
有意义的
3
various
各种各样的
4
teamwork
团队合作
6
unforgettable
难忘的
加分句型
开篇句
My school life is not only busy but also colorful.
Every day at school is full of fun and new things.
描写具体内容
In the morning,we have Chinese,math and English.They are all very important.
During the break,we often talk and play games with each other.
I join the art club and learn to draw with friends.It's really enjoyable.
表达感受
I feel happy because I can learn and play at the same time.
School life is like a rainbow-it has many bright colors.
结尾升华句
I think my school life is the best part of my day.
I hope every student can enjoy their colorful school life.
五、写作模板
My School Life
My school life is very colorful.
First,we have many interesting subjects.I like
and
because
Second,I take part in club.It is
and I can
Also,I have good friends at school.We
together.
I really love my school life.It makes me grow and feel happy.
六、作文仿写
题目
Write about your school life.(60-80)
仿写范文
My School Life
My school life is colorful and fun.
First,I have many interesting subjects like English and music.They make me happy.Second,I
join the basketball club.I play basketball with my classmates after school.It's exciting and
good for our health.Also,during the break,we talk and laugh together.
I love my school life very much.It is like a rainbow!
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给新同学关于融入校园生活的建议
约95词
Dear Tom,
Welcome to our school!I know starting a new life can be challenging,so let me offer you
some advice.
1 First,take an active part in after-class activities,such as clubs or sports.This helps you
make friends quickly.
2 Second,you'd better keep a positive attitude and smile to everyone around you.
3 Third,please remember to ask teachers for help if you feel lost.They are always kind.
I believe you will love our school and enjoy every day here.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
给朋友关于高效学习与休息的建议
约92词
Dear Susan,
I heard you often stay up late studying.That's not healthy.Here is my advice for you.
1 First,you should plan your time wisely-study for 45 minutes,then take a 10-minute
break.
2 Second,you'd better do some exercise every day to keep your brain fresh.
3 Third,please remember to have enough sleep.A good rest helps you learn better.
I am sure you will become more efficient and happier.
Yours,
Chen Wei