内容正文:
人教新版
U8 More than a Game
初三上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write an introduction to an admirable athlete(介绍一位爷人敬佩的运动员)
人教新版初三上Unit8 More than a Game
导作任务Write an introduction to an admirable athlete(介绍一位合人敬佩的运动员)
一、审题
1文体
人物介绍类短文(说明/记叙性质,非书信格式)
2话题
介绍一位令你敬佩的运动员,说明敬佩的原因(品质、成就、精神等)
3人称
以第三人称he/she为主,适当使用I/we表达个人感受
4时态
一般现在时(描述事实、品质、常规训练等);若提及过去成就可使用一般过去时,但以现在时为主
5要点
〉点明这位运动员是谁(姓名、项目)
,列出2~3点敬佩的理由(如努力训练、永不放弃、团队精神、影响他人等)
,简单举例或说明理由
,结尾总结这位运动员对你的后示或意义
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,介绍运动员的基本信息(姓名+运动项目+爷人敬佩的总体印象)
中间
分条说明敬佩的具体原因,每条包含事实或理由
例:①训练刻苦一一每天早起跑步
段落
内容要点
例:②永不放弃一一受伤后坚持康复
例:③帮助他人一一给年轻队员作榜样
结尾
总结这位运动员的精神/品质,表达自己的感受或向他学习的态度
三
核心组词造句
核心词汇
词athlete运动员
词admire敬佩
词training训练
词hard work努力
词never give up永不放弃
词
champion冠军
词team团队
词role model榜样
词spirit精神
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
train hard every day
每天刻苦训练
2
overcome difficulties
克服困难
3
set a good example
树立好榜样
be admired by many people
被很多人敬佩
5
keep doing sth.
坚持做某事
6
make great achievements
取得巨大成就
基础造句
1Liu Xiang is a famous Chinese athlete who won an Olympic gold medal.
2 He trains very hard and never gives up even when he faces problems.
3She always helps her teammates and shows great team spirit.
四、好词好句
(提升版)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
determined
坚定的
序号
单词
释义
2
dedicated
专注的;奉献的
inspirational
鼓舞人心的
4
perseverance
坚持不懈
5
outstanding
杰出的
6
well-known
众所周知的
加分句型
引出人物
Let me introduce a great athlete-Yao Ming.
The athlete I admire most is...
说明敬佩原因(含长句)
He is admired not only because of his achievements,but also because of his hard work and
strong will.
What makes him admirable is that he never stops improving himself.
She sets a good example for young people by showing that nothing is impossible if you try.
结尾升华句
In a word,he is not just a sports star but a real role model for all of us.
His spirit encourages me to face challenges bravely in my own life.
五、写作模板
is an admirable athlete that I want to introduce.He/She is famous for
First,I admire him/her because he/she
For example,_
Second,he/she
always
This shows his/her
Third,as a teammate,he/she
That's why many people respect him/her.
In short,
is a true role model.I hope I can learn from his/her spirit and become a
better person.
六、作文仿写
范文
Su Bingtian-a Sprinting Hero
Su Bingtian is an admirable athlete that I want to introduce.He is a famous Chinese sprinter
who runs the 100 meters.
First,I admire him because he trains very hard every day.For example,he gets up early and
practices running again and again.Second,he never gives up.Even when he got injured,he
still worked hard to come back.His strong will is amazing.Third,he always encourages young
runners and sets a good example for them.He shows that with hard work,Asian athletes can
also be world-class.
In short,Su Bingtian is a true role model.I hope I can learn from his spirit and never give up
on my own dreams.
(字数:约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍姚明
约96词
Dear classmates,
Let me introd uce an admirable athlete-Yao Ming.He is a famous Chinese basketball player.
First,he worked very hard to improve his skills,even though he is very tall.Second,he played
for the Houston Rockets in the NBA and became a bridge between China and the world.Third,
he always stayed humble and helped his teammates.After retiring,he continued to support
Chinese basketball.
I admire him because he never gave up and used his influence to do good.
Yours,
Li Wei
拓展范文2
介绍苏炳添
约98词
Dear friends,
I want to share with you an athlete I truly admire-Su Bingtian,a sprinter from China
First,he broke the Asian record in the 100-meter dash with a time of 9.83 seconds.Second,
he trained for years despite injuries and age,proving that hard work beats talent.Third,he
inspired many young runners to believe in themselves.
I admire him because he never stops challenging limits and shows us what perseverance can
achieve.
Yours,
Zhao Ming