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Unit 2 Inspiring People
初三上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a post about an inspiring person(发帖介绍一位励志人物)
Unit 2 Inspiring People
导作任务Write a post about an inspiring person(发帖介绍一位励志人物)
申题
包文体
介绍帖(社交媒体风格,一般无称呼和署名,但可以有标题和简短结尾)
2话题
介绍一位励志人物(历史人物、名人、身边榜样均可)
③人称
第三人称(he/she)为主,第一人称I可用于表达感受
4时态
一般现在时(描述品质和影响),也可用一般过去时叙述具体事迹
5要点
>引出人物:谁?为什么值得介绍?
,人物背景/事迹:做了什么?克服了什么困难?
>励志品质:坚持、勇气、努力等
〉自己的后发或感悟
,结尾:号召或鼓励大家
6字数
80~100词
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引出人物,说明为何inspiring
中间
具体描述人物事迹、品质、成就
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结精神,谈谈自己的收获或呼吁读者
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词
inspiring激励人心的
never give up永不放弃
achieve实现
词
overcome克服
difficulty困难
success成功
词role model榜样
determination决心
hard work努力
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
an inspiring person
一位励志人物
2
overcome many difficulties
克服许多困难
3
never give up
永不放弃
又
set a good example
树立好榜样
5
keep trying
不断尝试
6
make one's dream come true
实现梦想
基础造句
1 He/She is a great role model for us.
2 She never gave up even when things were hard
3 His story shows us that hard work leads to success.
四、好词好句
(便更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
admirable
合人钦佩的
2
perseverance
毅力
3
extraordinary
非凡的
inspire sb.to do sth
激励某人做某事
5
a source of strength
力量源泉
加分句型
引出人物
I'd like to share a story about...who inspires me a lot.
There is a person that I truly admire.That is...
描述事迹
He/She...despite many challenges.
Through hard work and determination,he/she finally...
表达后发
From him/her,I learned that...
He/She taught me the importance of...
升华结尾
If you face difficulties,remember...and never give up.
I hope his/her story can also encourage you.
五、写作模板
Title:An Inspiring Person-
I want to tell you about
an inspiring person in my eyes
He/She is famous for
Although
he/she never gave up.For example,
Because of his/her
he/she finally_
From this person,I learned that
I hope his/her story can help you find your own
strength.
六、作文仿写
范文
An Inspiring Person Helen Keller
I want to tell you about Helen Keller,an inspiring person in my eyes
She was blind and deaf,but she never gave up.With the help of her teacher Anne Sullivan,
she learned to read,write and speak.She even became a famous writer and speaker.Her
courage and hard work changed her life.
From her,I learned that nothing is impossible if we keep trying.I hope her story can
encourage you to face your own challenges bravely.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍海伦·凯勒
约96词
Dear friends,
Today I want to share an inspiring person-Helen Keller.She lost her sight and hearing at 19
months old,but she never gave up.
1With the help of her teacher Anne Sullivan,she learned to read,write and even speak.
2 She graduated from Harvard University,becoming the first deaf-blind person to earn a
college degree.
3She later traveled around the world to encourage disabled people and fight for women's
rights.
Helen Keller proves that no difficulty can stop a strong will.Let's learn from her courage!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
介绍张桂梅
约95词
Dear classmates,
I'd like to post about an inspiring person-Zhang Guimei,a teacher in a remote mountain
area.
1 She saw that many poor girls had no chance to go to school,so she founded a free high
school for them.
2 Despite her own serious illness,she worked tirelessly to help over 2,000 girls enter college
3 She often says,"I want to change the fate of one generation through ed ucation."
Zhang Guimei lights up others'lives with her devotion.She is a true hero to me.
Yours,
Wang Fang