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人教新版
Unit 1 Happy Holiday
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a holiday story
(写一则假期小故事)
人教新版初二上Unit 1 Happy Holiday
写作任务Write a holiday story(写一则假期小故事)
一、审题
包文体
记叙文(故事类)一一有开头、经过、结尾,可加入简单对话或感受
2话题
假期经历(如旅游、参加活动、与家人团聚、学新技能等)
③人称
以第一人称I为主,也可用第三人称he/she写他人的故事
4时态
一般过去时(讲述已发生的假期经历)
,注意动词过去式变化(不规则动词需牢记)
5要点
>交代时间、地点、人物(谁、什么时候、去了哪里/做了什么)
>描述一件具体的事或活动(1~2个细节)
,写出自己的感受或收获(快乐、难忘、学到什么)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
点明假期时间+去哪里/做什么(1~2句)
Last summer holiday,I went to Hainan with my family.
中间
具体描述一件事或活动(2~3句)
段落
内容要点
按时间顺序写:先…然后…最后…
可加入天气、人物对话、动作描写等
结尾
总结感受或收获(1~2句)
That day was really wonderful.I will never forget it.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词holiday假期
trip旅行
visit参观
词】
enjoy享受
beautiful美丽的
delicious美味的
词
exciting今人兴奋的
unforgettable难忘的
词take photos拍照
have a great time玩得开心
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
go to the beach
去海滩
2
climb a mountain
爬山
3
visit a museum
参观博物馆
4
eat local food
吃当地美食
5
stay with my grandparents
和祖父母一起住
6
learn to swim
学游泳
7
in the morning afternoon /evening
在早晨下午/晚上
基础造句
Last holiday,I went to Beijing with my parents.
2We visited the Great Wall and took many photos there.
3 The food was very delicious and the weather was sunny.
4 I had a wonderful time and I learned a lot.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
amazing
爷人惊叹的
2
fantastic
极好的
序号
单词
释义
3
enjoyable
愉快的
4
unforgettable
难忘的
5
experience
经历
6
relax
放松
Λ
explore
探索
加分句型
时间开头句
Last summer,I had an amazing holiday in...
During the holiday,my family and I decided to...
动作描军句(含过去时)
We got up early and took a bus to the mountain.
I walked along the beach and picked up some shells.
My father taught me how to ride a bike,and soon I could do it.
感受升华句
It was the best day of my holiday.
I felt so happy and proud of myself.
This trip made me love nature even more.
I will always remember the fun we had together.
五、写作模板
模板一:旅游类
holiday,I went to
with
The first day,we
It was very
Then we
and
In the
evening,we
I really enjoyed
What a
holiday!
模板二:活动类
During the
holiday,I
First,I
Then
Finally
It was not easy,but I
I felt
I think this holiday was
and I
六、作文仿
范文一旅游类
86词
Last summer holiday,I went to Qingdao with my parents.
On the first day,we went to the beach.The sea was blue and the sand was soft.I swam in the
water and built a big sandcastle with my father.In the afternoon,we ate fresh seafood.It was
very delicious.
I really enjoyed the time at the beach.What a happy holiday!
范文二活动类
92词
During the National Day holiday,I learned to cook noodles with my grandma.
First,we mixed flour and water to make dough.Then,we cut the dough into thin noodles.It
was a little difficult,but my grandma helped me.Finally,we boiled the noodles and added
some vegetables and eggs.The noodles tasted great!
I felt very proud because I could cook by myself.This holiday was both fun and meaningful.
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给笔友介绍寒假旅行
约95词
Dear Tom,
How was your winter holiday?I'd like to share my wonderful trip to Harbin with you.
First,I visited the Ice and Snow World and saw amazing ice sculptures.Second,I tried local
food like hot pot and sugar-coated haws.They were really delicious!Third,I went skating on
the frozen Songhua River,which was so exciting.
I had a fantastic time there.I hope you can go to Harbin someday too.
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
给表妹讲述海边暑假
约98词
Dear Lucy,
I had an unforgettable summer holiday at the beach with my family.
1We built sandcastles and collected colorful shells every morning.
2 My dad taught me how to swim in the sea-it was fun but a little scary at first.
3 In the evening,we watched the sunset and ate fresh seafood by the shore.
I really enjoyed every moment there.Next summer,why not come with us?I'm sure you will
love it!
Yours,
Xiao Hua